my first fan fic and its a romance fan fic about a girl name kyumi akashima.
tell me your opinions please
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I am a freshman at Ayashi high. I'm just an average person in school trying not to bring too much attention to my self. I had dropped most of my close friends, some closer than others. my life was doing pretty well.
until one day I was standing on the right side of the hallway with my book bag behind me on the floor as i was trying to shut my locker for the 4th time today, I should have left it on my shoulders but I had, had a long day and my back was hurting enough. Someone suddenly tripped over my bag and landed on the floor with there face hitting the floor first. I looked shocked at the poor sole lying face first on the ground in front of me. i knew that it must have because the tiles on the floor weren't exactly soft as i have slipped a few times my self.
I quickly slid closer and tuned the poor sole over. It was a boy I just watched his chest move up and down as he was breathing lightly. i sighed in grief, Oh great I had to give him C.P.R *mouth to mouth*, I wonder what rumors will this stir up. i took my thumb and index finger on my right hand and pinched his nose and opened his mouth with my left. I placed my mouth over his and breathed into his a few times then leaned back and pressed on his stomach over and over his lips where soft and his breath smelt like mint, which I loved.
I went in for another round of mouth to mouth with him and noticed some people around me had just glanced at me and walked off probably thinking I was making out with him. Just as our lips touched his eyes flashed open and stared into my hazel-blue eyes and I into his olive green eyes. I pulled back quickly, he was silent and he was holding his head where it had hit the floor and staring at me leaning on his elbows.
He probably thought that I was making out with him. So I decided to tell him what I was really doing instead of "kissing him" as he probably would have put it.
"I was giving you mouth to mouth, c.p.r, your breathing was very light when I tuned you over," I said while playing with a few strands of my hair.
He nodded and smiled shyly, as to say thanks. He was now watching me to see my next move.and so I stood up off of the hard floor and held out my hand as an offer to help him up from the floor.
He looked at my hand and after a few moments he took it and stood to his feet. as our hands met i noticed his hands where soft and not dry at all.
Our hands where still linked and we both just stared at them then I quickly pulled my hand back to my side again. I noticed his books scattered behind him and so I went over to them and picked them up from the floor.
When I turned around, he was gone, probably somewhere in the huge crowd of students surging down the hall towards me. I looked down at his books and just shrugged my shoulders and popped them in my bag. I would have to find him and give him his books back tomorrow. If I could find him.
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tell me your opinions please
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I am a freshman at Ayashi high. I'm just an average person in school trying not to bring too much attention to my self. I had dropped most of my close friends, some closer than others. my life was doing pretty well.
until one day I was standing on the right side of the hallway with my book bag behind me on the floor as i was trying to shut my locker for the 4th time today, I should have left it on my shoulders but I had, had a long day and my back was hurting enough. Someone suddenly tripped over my bag and landed on the floor with there face hitting the floor first. I looked shocked at the poor sole lying face first on the ground in front of me. i knew that it must have because the tiles on the floor weren't exactly soft as i have slipped a few times my self.
I quickly slid closer and tuned the poor sole over. It was a boy I just watched his chest move up and down as he was breathing lightly. i sighed in grief, Oh great I had to give him C.P.R *mouth to mouth*, I wonder what rumors will this stir up. i took my thumb and index finger on my right hand and pinched his nose and opened his mouth with my left. I placed my mouth over his and breathed into his a few times then leaned back and pressed on his stomach over and over his lips where soft and his breath smelt like mint, which I loved.
I went in for another round of mouth to mouth with him and noticed some people around me had just glanced at me and walked off probably thinking I was making out with him. Just as our lips touched his eyes flashed open and stared into my hazel-blue eyes and I into his olive green eyes. I pulled back quickly, he was silent and he was holding his head where it had hit the floor and staring at me leaning on his elbows.
He probably thought that I was making out with him. So I decided to tell him what I was really doing instead of "kissing him" as he probably would have put it.
"I was giving you mouth to mouth, c.p.r, your breathing was very light when I tuned you over," I said while playing with a few strands of my hair.
He nodded and smiled shyly, as to say thanks. He was now watching me to see my next move.and so I stood up off of the hard floor and held out my hand as an offer to help him up from the floor.
He looked at my hand and after a few moments he took it and stood to his feet. as our hands met i noticed his hands where soft and not dry at all.
Our hands where still linked and we both just stared at them then I quickly pulled my hand back to my side again. I noticed his books scattered behind him and so I went over to them and picked them up from the floor.
When I turned around, he was gone, probably somewhere in the huge crowd of students surging down the hall towards me. I looked down at his books and just shrugged my shoulders and popped them in my bag. I would have to find him and give him his books back tomorrow. If I could find him.
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