[Photoshop] attempt of C4D

[HazuRima]

Hello there guys. Well, this is not my first attempt of C4D/Cinema 4D. But I guess this is the first time I succeed Lol and I just wanted to share it with you guys. If you have any suggestion or comment Oh please do. Thank you.

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[Joon]

I like it. Keep it up. ^^

 

[Trollo Lucilfer]

You placed the render in the center, which is bad, try to use the rule of the thirds next time.
The signature has no flow, it looks like you just threw in random C4Ds in order to get a background.
And those two bubbles on the left are just killing the vibe, try to delete them to get rid of the distraction.
Anyway, the outcome is alright, so just keep it up.

 

[- J AV -]

not bad. Keep it up you will improve