As I walk my Path to build my fan fiction, I feel the need to improve.
1-this is my fan fiction entitled assassination of 4th hokage. Each thread has a mission log(a diary in which he writes the details of his thoughts)that works as a way to understand the thoughts of the main character kiri, and has the chapter that is the interaction with other people, fights and other stuff.
1.1– note A: In terms of timeline the mission log is always set after the chapter itself…
1.2-The link below to previous chapters and mission logs
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2.1-Mission log 5
“I have been on the sea for 1 day. I can barely believe Mei is on a trip with me, it has been a long time since our team was disbanded so we haven’t been together since then. A lot happened Ao joined the anbu, Mei became a chunnin, and I became the jonnin sensei of a gennin squad.
This one was the first out of 3 days that take to come from the coast of land of water to the land of fire. I have a bad feeling about this mission, I am usually laid back and goofy, I have been called immature by Mei, but this time even I have to abandon that side of mine .it is not easy when your village leader asks you to assassinate someone from the mythical hokage line of shinobi. I fear this might be my last mission, and so I feel the need to enjoy all the time I have with her.”
2.2- chapter 5
(A new day in their journey has began. contrary to what is usual to kiri he has woken up very early in the morning,and has such he goes to the Room mei is sleeping and sits by her bed)
Kiri:wake up sleepy!
(Mei does not answer so he reaches a lot near her and then)
Kiri:oh dear Mizukage!with you like that I could have….(suddenly interrupted)
(Mei is pointing a kunai at kiri’s throat)
Mei:don’t even dare to finish what you wore about to say!i don’t care how I feel about you, I would kill you…
Kiri:(thinking):…watched you for hours, you have been through a lot it’s nice to see you rest…
Mei:Are you going to get out of there or ill have to kill you for staring at me?
Kiri:Huh?(coming to his senses)…calm down will you? I am not an enemy could have turned you in to Mizukage-sama and I didn’t. I care for my country, even more for my friends even you, specially you!i came to say good morning that’s all, nothing else…
Mei:(puts down her kunai)I am sorry…I overreacted…since that day of ours I have been confused…I have no idea how to react with you…
Kiri:never mind that day, not even I know..all I care is about remembering the good stuff…
Mei:You are one of a kind…
Kiri:so are you…(leaning closer to her)
Mei:(losing her bad temper, she also leans closer to him)
Kiri:(stopping himself from going any further he…)can we watch the dolphins?
Mei: (relived for not lowering her guard any lower she…)yes let’s go!
(time went by as they talked about all the missions they went through, they talked, they laughed at kiri’s mistakes and mischief’s ,and they talked again…)
The weather was good so the day went by smoothly.Yet waking up on the second day does not promise to be the same…
to be continued...
