[Other] As dark memories of the past

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There was a past ,
that got buried years ago ,
in the path we walked ,
that covered in darkness .

in that darkest time ,
we used to live in fear ,
not knowing what will come ,
so much uncertainty about the future .

i thought , i will never reach anywhere in life ,
i was young , world looked so vast ,
no known place to go , always lost ,
as it was one of the darkest times .

only thing i knew ,
in that unknown path , we had to walk ,
death was around the corners ,
that will come to us anytime .

looking back at that time ,
still brings darkest feelings to my heart ,
so i just buried them , deep in that path ,
as dark memories of the past
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