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Custom Jutsu Submission
The Fallen Shakujō of Demons Technique: Activation Process |Aki shakujō Akuma no Jutsu: Akutibe-Shon katei|
Rank: S
Range: Short
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Chakra cost: 40 (+10 for each turn its in use)
Damage points: N\A (-10 for the user for each turn he uses it)
Description: After releasing a normal weapon seal, The user summons a weird shaped Tin Staff, Its created from highly developed materials, its very light and harder than a normal sword. it looks a meter and a half long staff with a ring at surounding its upper edge that ends with an gray orb, the ring has four smalller rings and a scythe-like-blade on its left side of the outer side of the main ring, and a sword on the other edge. this technique must be used to activate this weapon's abilities and without it the weapon can be equaled with large shurikens easily, and to make it work the user must have a special tatto over his arms that allows him to transfer his chakra into the weapon which turn that chakra into a dark chakra [not dark release chakra, just chakra's like sasuke's when activate the curse mark] creating a layer of black chakra around it and chakra chains with a chakra knife-like appear out of the small rings, these chakra chains can extend for long range and can not be used as rods for any kind of chakra other than the user's because of the tatto's effect, these chakra chains are just like the chains kushina was able to pull of her body to restrain targets, this chains takes the same charactrizes as Kushina's except for being coming out of the weapon, this chains have multi uses like holding over the user's arm to make him able to send the staff into longer ranges, or restrain the enemy or attack him by pierce through their bodies, they are also able to move through hard mediums like the ground if was charged with lightening chakra by the user. it has on other ability which is contained it the orb it held, That orb can be used to use jutsus that require an arm usage like rasengen and chidori by simply using it to contain them and release them from it, however it does not effect the number of handseals or the jutsu's power at all, just maximize the range. this weapon because part of the user's chakra system when activated and that is one of its disadvantages, moreover, it turns the user's chakra to become more and more of dark chakra, this is another advantage since sensory ninjas can know exactly where is their enemy and to be able to know his location even if he was in the middle of hundreds, this weapon has extra fuuinjutsus features but it can not be used by someone who already learned fuuinjutus.
~Only needed to be used once to activate the weapon for as long as the user wants.
~-10 damages to the user for each turn this weapon is activated.
~This weapons abilities can only be used after this technique was used, and can only be used by -Theos. .
~the user can release up to 5 chains to start with and they can only be stopped by chakra forms and chakra weapons.
Declined: seems OP and worst descriptions ever... can use fuuinjutsu but not by someone that already learnt it? wth
(Kuchyose No Jutsu: Kewsura Buntai) - Vulture summoning Technique: Kewsura Squad-
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40(+20 for each lightening jutsu they use)
Damage points: N/A (+10 to each lightening jutsu used)
Description: The user wipes his giant fan with blood and charges it with a large amount of chakra. He then swings the fan, releasing all the chakra and summons 3 large vultures called the Kewsura's squad. This vultures is the vulture Emperor's Knights. they have four large wings and two tails on their backs with two strong claws which they uses to stand on. They are very fast in the air, and they are similar to the Emperor and have claws out over thier upper two wings. they also has the ability to using lightening jutsus together to expand its range, but when they do that they will take 20 chakra points from the user for each time they do so making a rod to the lightening using formations and chakra.
~ Can only be summoned once
~ Takes 15 chakra points for each turn they stays on the battle field
~ Must have signed the vulture summoning contract
~ Can not use more than one jutsu at time, and it would be spreaded through them as long as they are in short range between each other
~ Can only use up to S rank lightening jutsus from what the user's know as long as its not a special ability "Example: Lightening Armor" and the user can not use any lightening jutsu in the turn where they use lightening jutsus too in the same rank or higher.
how exactly are they spread among the group... do all 3 need to perform the jutsu as one? or do they all do it to amplify power... 1 more time i need to ask for clarification and it'll just get declined for good :/
With the Purple part being out:
- Chakra Balance Technique - (Chakra Amari Jutsu)
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Type: Supplementary
Chakra points: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description:The Monkey handseal as he charges his ears with chakra , and with concentration he charge it into his inner ear making him able to control his balance by controlling the liquid hidden in the inner ear which controll his balance, this technique would make him completely able to controll himself if any changes happens to the Terrain making him normally imbalanced but while using this jutsu it wont, and make his reactions faster than normal human, this specially works with taijutsus.
Balance won't make reactions faster
Rain style: Scavenging high pressured Rain (Ame No Justu: Kansou Oshi Takai Ame)
Rank: S
Range: long "the whole area"
Type: Supplementary/Deffense
Chakra cost: 40 (+15 chakra points for each turn its in use)
Damage points: N/A
Description: After preforming three handseals, the user makes the sky strongly rain down over the whole terrain, this rains contents dust and earth projectails, and make them all fall along on the ground without any harm, and can also stops up to B rank sand jutsus by the same method.
~Can only stay for five turns.
~Can not be used more than once per battle.
~Must have mastered the Rain element to be able to use this jutsu.
Declined... i seriously don't get the need for this. dust and earth projectiles that do no damage? only stops up to b rank sand? where's the point? and it's a rain jutsu... why would their be dust and earth projectiles in it?