[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[sabbyxx]

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konchuu jutsu:kaisaku baggu (insect style: burrowing bugs)
rank: A
type: Offensive
range: All
chakra: 40
damage: 80
description: The user manupulates the insects inside of them to burrow into the ground weather they goes down with the insects or not is up to them the insects then lie in wait for the user to commant them to strike the insects them emerge from the ground and attack the opponent.
~Note Only for use by aburame clan
~note IF user goes underground with bugs they can only stay under for 2 turns.

~ An Aburame jutsu cannot let the user go underground. You need an earth jutsu for that. ~

konchuu jutsu: fuubi kabe konchuu (insect style: overwhelming wall of insects)
type: Offensive
range: Close-mid
chakra: 40
damage: 80
description:The user gathers a mass amount of insects and forms a wall that pushes tward the opponent Regaurdless of fire,lightning,wind,water,earth, jutsu up to rank B it pushes on and ingulf opponents and projectiles.
~note only a member of the aburame clan can use.
~note can only be used once per battle.

~ Where's the complete jutsu template ? ~

 

[Passion]

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[Erai Shiyokubutsu Yousai | Great plant fortress]
Rank : Forbidden
Range : Short/Mid
Type : Supplementary
Chakra Cost : 50
Damage Points : N/A
Zetsu puts his hands onto the ground and will send chakra to the surrounding plants, the plants from throughout the entire battlefield will then be pulled towards zetsu himself and will stick to him, and form somewhat of a mountain on Zetsu's position, leaving zetsu somewhere deep within.
Whatever tries to come in contact with the fortress will be grabbed by veins from within it and pulled inside the fortress. Zetsu will be freely able to move through the fortress in a same way as ninjas go through ground using Underground Fish Projection technique, Zetsu will move throughout it the same way, but he will not need to use aditional chakra to do so. Zetsu will aswell be able to manipulate the plants within the fortress and rearange their position and duplicate them, aswell as create new plants using the ones that were gathered. Zetsu is aswell capable of using the chakra within the plants that he used to take control of them, to use the water gathered in by the plants to form a deffensive water layer on the fortress, that is capable of withstanding B rank or below fire techniques. Zetsu is aswell capable of manipulating the plants within the fortress to form tendrils that spin in a great speed and can pop out to pierce any earth technique of C rank and below. Zetsu can aswell infuse his chakra into the sides of the fortress, to use the plants to form artificial eyes that are linked to Zetsu's original eyes, like Gaara uses the Third eye technique with sand.
[Once per battle]
[Zetsu takes -20 damage due to chakra loss]
[Fortress consumes -20 chakra each turn]
[The water barrier effect can be used 3 times per battle]
[Only Zetsu can use this technique]

Bolded = New effects/restrictions.

I thought that Zetsu cannot use plants and Plant release is a CE

~ Actually its your plant release that's a fricking rip off of MY Zetsuness, since I already had four-five plant jutsus before you even stepped onto this site. So you're not one to be complaining. ~

 

[~Cross Marian~]

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Forbidden jutsu: Fiery serpent twins
(Kasai hebi tsuin )
Type: Supplementary, defence, attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: 40 damage to all in short range when it activates.
Descritpion: Calls forth two blazing twin serpents who surrounds your arms in order to lock up the fobidden jutsus of the fiery twin serpents Hebura and Kahsai! Lasts for 3 turns. This jutsu lock up the two powerful jutsus; Blazing twins wrath and Blazing serpent armor. When this forbidden jutsu activates it surrounds the user in a fiery cone and then push like a flame wall to all around the user in short range. If hit it push the enemy to long range.
~Must be taught by Hoshigaki Kisame akatsuki (HKA).
~Can only be used by Orochimaru, Sasuke and Anko.
~Blazing twins wrath can only be used once in a battle while this jutsu is active.
~Your arms get's burned from using this jutsu (-10) else you're above Kage rank.
~Can't use other elements while this jutsu is active.
~After this jutsu has faded you can't use any fire for three turns.

~ Declined ~

Abilities while using Fiery serpent twins

Blazing twins wrath
(Hinote tsuin doki)

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Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: mid-long
Chakra cost: 50
Damage: 80 (-30 to user if the target is close at the impact)
Description: The fiery twin serpents fuse together and make their accuracy to rise in order to make a powerful flamethrower which hit and imprison the victim and like a drill makes the foe to fly up high in the air. Can only be used once in a battle.
~If used; the serpent jutsu will break on one arm after 'Blazing twins wrath' has been done.

~ Declined ~

 

[Nagato..]

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I completely threw the other idea out the door..


(Rikudo: Ten O Koete Futatsu No Tsubasa) - Rikudo The Twin Katanas Of Chaos
Type: Weapon
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: N/A (-40 Per turn after twirling to maintain the positive/negative charges)
Damage Points: N/A

Description: Rikudo is the name of "Twin Katanas" carried by Seven Paths Of Pain. Its made of a featherweight indestructible alloy with the unique ability to become infused with positive & negative lightning charges(when twirled and chakra is applied).. They have a black hilt with white diamond shaped gems crafted onto them. The sheath is made up of white/jade like mineral.

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Rikudo is not like any standard [2Ft] katana, its [4Ft] in length not including the hilt. The featherweight alloy allows better agility and mobility than the average katana. The white gems crafted into the hilts have a special ability to return the blades into the users sheaths after one turn if the user no longer has possession of which ever katana.

If someone tries to weild Rikudo the sword will seem to weigh 3 tons.

Restrictions:
*Only Seven Paths Of Pain Can Weild These Swords*
*If user loses possession of Rikudo then after one turn, the katana(s) will return to the hilt and cannot be unsheathed for 2 turns*

~ Approved ~

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(Lighting Style: Rikudo Kaminari No Kami) - Rikudo God Of Lightning
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range:Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 40 (-20 Per turn after twirling katanas to maintain the positive/negative charges)
Damage Points: 80 (-20 To the user, due to the risk of being struck by some lightning force as well)

Description: After twirling & applying chakra into Rikudo to gain the positive & negative lightning charges from the alloy, the user will use his chakra to throw the negatively charged katana into the clouds creating negatively charged thunder clouds that are attracted to the positive charges in the other Rikudo.

Then the user will throw/slam/thrust the positively charged katana into the ground near the enemy then performing the hand seals...Boar-->Tiger-->Ox, releasing a powerful lightning strike from the negatively charged cloud that comes down to strike and eletrocute everything within range of the positively charged katana in an explosive wave..



Restrictions:
*Can Only Be Used Within 3 Turns After Throwing The Negatively Charged Katana Into The Clouds*
*The Jutsu Can Only Be Used Once Per Battle*

~ Too long a timeframe ~

 

[The_Empire]

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I am dropping my 4 Head Axe for this sword


(Inu Nendo)Dog Clay
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: Dog Clay is a katana sword. The swpord hilt is shaped into a dog and the color of the handle is white like Deidara's clay with four black diamonds on each side. On the blade it has the Uchiha crest on each side. The user wears the sword on his right hip. The sword can channel their lightning chakra through the blade, Ths user can also channel Chidori and Lightning Fang through the blade. This sword was only made for Deidara Nara and the sword will return to him by the him whistling.

-When the user channels their lightning chakra their the blade the amount of chakra is 15.
-When the user channels a Chidori through the blade like Sasuke does he has to double the amount of chakra and one can be used 2 times in battle.
-When the user channels Lightning Fang through the blade it stills goes up in the air and comes down on the desired locations. It also cost double the amount of chakra to use and can only be used 2 time in battle.

~ Explain the channeling lightning chakra, what effects does it give ? ~

 

[DOD_bld]

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(Sensō Meisu: Kakan) – The War Mace: Kakan

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Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A (+15 to Earth element techniques)
Description: This weapon is a 3½ft(106cm) long "club" of the war mace family of weapons. Kakan is wrapped with bands of dense metal that absorb and channel chakra. The handle is made from a stone azure in color and reacts offensively towards the welder if they are a stranger (Blade style chopping off of fingers, and Law Abiding Citizen style paralyzing with a strong neuro-toxin.) The composition of the mace being made from such a dense material makes it near indestructible and much heavier that it looks, topping the scales at around 100lbs(50kg.) This dense composition combined with the influence of earth element allows for great damage dealing potential as well, somewhere in the realm of ≈2000lb/f²(≈887kg/f².)
Note: Kakan may only be used once every other turn to deal an attack using earth elemental chakra at a cost of 15.
Note: Once per match Kakan is able to absorb an opponents earth based attack of A rank or below.

~ Blade and Law Abiding Citizen ? What ? ~

I was only trying to provide reference and example for the action intended. In the movie Blade his sword has blades that chop off fingers of people other than Blade himself.

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Blades would pop out of these slits in the handle.

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And in the movie Law Abiding Citizen, the protagonist has a gun he rigged with a neuro-toxin, so when the trigger is pulled needles from inside the grip inject the wielder.

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~ SO resubmit it. ~

Summoning Animal: Hibagon - Yeti
Scroll Owner: Nindo Seiryuu –ME-
Other Users who have signed contract: None
Summoning Boss if existing: Hōkingu
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Kīrā, Habburu, Nameru, Kepurā

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(Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Kīrā - Jikan No Itei) – Summoning: Kīrā – Yeti of Time

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Rank: C
Type: Summoning
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: ≤30
Description: After a series of hand signs and releasing some blood from my finger I place my hand on the ground and summon a hibagon. Kīrā is 3’6”(107cm) tall, with a reach of 6’8”(203cm) and weighing in at a stout 181lbs(82kg) and is covered with white hair having an slight blue hue. Kīrā is one of the many Grandchildren of the Hibagon Lord Hōkingu. Kīrā has the ability to distort the opponent’s view of time making it appear as if he is actually moving much faster than he is (second gate opened speed). He is however only making this happen through the use of genjutsu, which is activated as soon as he is called to the field. Like all Hibagon, Kīrā has great physical strength, and if you are not used to it, a VERY foul odor. Making taijutsu and submission holds staples in Kīrā’s arsenal.
Note: Kīrā may only stay in battle for 3 turns.
Note: Kīrā may only be summoned twice per battle.
Note: Kīrā can only be summoned by Nindo Seiryuu or those that have signed the Hibagon contract.
Note: All Hibagon summons require having signed their contract, which is held by Nindo Seiryuu.

~ DECLINED ! Next person to submit something mythical as a summonings gets a ban ~

The name Hibagon is the closest translation for the word Bigfoot or Yeti, other than phonetically writing Itei as I did. Also the yeti is a much disputed animal, not an outright mythical animal. Countless anthropologists have found records of such an organism from China to Japan and down to Vietnam, as well as in parts of the American Northwest. It is called technically Gigantopicithecus and it was the biggest ever sivapithecid (which is the hominoid family) ever. The famous anthropologist Michael Alan Park writes about it in several of his books. I feel a ban on an animal that clearly has actual history is wrong. If it makes everyone feel better I can call it Hominodea Gigantopicithecus, instead of Hibagon.

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I can also post a pic of the skeletal size and shape, tell me what needs to be done for this one.

~ What can you do ? Nothing. Give it up. ~

 

[Goddess]

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(Kuchiyose:Jakkaru)-Summoning Technique|Coyote
Type:Supplementary
Rank:A
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user Bites their finger tips and slams their hands on the ground to summon a Coyote. Coyotes have a water affinity. The user can summon up to 3 coyotes at once. Coyotes are vicious predators. They are swift in movement and can run up to 90mph.
(Can only be summoned 1 times per battle)
(Must have Signed Coyote Contract in order to summon)
(can only be taught by Karin)

~ Submit a contract first ~

 

[Jinbei]

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Mokuton:chika baindingu|Wood style:Undergound binding
Type:Attack
Rank:A
RangeShort-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:User creates pillars in the underground,this pillars will bind the opponent if they go underground and will suffocate him.However,the pillars can also explode but this will happen only if the user desires it.

Note~This pillars will act with their own will and will always do what is best for the user.
Note~In order for the pillars to explode,the user will ahve to perform 3 more handseals.
Note~This jutsu can be used before entering the battlefield.
Note~After this,the user can only perform 1 mokuton jutsu per turn for three turns.
Note~Can only be used and taught by Jinbei.

Resubmitting:

Mokuton:chika baindingu|Wood style:Undergound binding
Type:Attack
Rank:A
RangeShort-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:User creates a root network underground which ensnares the opponent if they go (or are already) underground. Once the opponent is snared, the user can make the roots grow, which will crush the opponenet.
Note~Can only be used and taught by Jinbei.

~ Similar technique exists ~

 

[Zenryoku]

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(Suitai Hifuuin) – Secret Seal of Weakening
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: This jutsu disrupts the strength of a seal that is placed on someone and makes the target weakened and unstable, leaving the target vulnerable.
Note: Must have direct contact.
Note: Can only be used once and must wait 1 turn to use sealing methods.
Note: Can only be taught by Zenryoku

~ Needs better explanation ~

 

[Icemyster]

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Genjutsu:Mushi sasayaki (Insect Whisper)
Rank:Forbidden
Typeffensive
Range:Short
Chakra:60
Damage:80
Description:
The user allows his insects to buzz, and upon hearing this insect noise (opponent must hear it close range to their ear) the opponent is placed in this genjutsu. The opponent begins to feel as if there are insects coming out of every opening of his/her body, and begins going through major stages of hysteria, and the more insects he/she see's the more they panic, and usually needs an outside chakra source to be broken, unless the opponent is two ranks above the user or has third tomoe or higher sharingan.
*Can only be used by Insect users, or advanced doujutsu users that have been trained by Icemyster
* Can only be used once
*No genjutsu for the rest of the battle
*May be broken by third tomoe or higher sharingan
*May be broken by Kai

~Declined~​

Ninjutsu:Chakra Field (Chakra nohara)
Type:Supplementary
Range:Mid/SHort
Rank:S
Chakra:40
Damage:0
Description:
The user Begins emitting Water chakra from his/here body,creating a light blue aura around the area of the user*visible by everyone with eyes*. Inside this field projectiles are slowed as if they are moving through water, protecting the user from thrown objects, an if the opponent is caught in this field, they are slowed as if they are moving through water, giving the user a speed advantage. The user of the jutsu is seperated by a small air pocket inside that moves to the shape of the user, preventing the field from slowing himself down.
*Lasts three turns
*can only be used twice per battle

How big is this "field" exactly?​

Ninjutsu:Chakra Field (Chakra nohara)
Type:Supplementary
Range:Mid/SHort
Rank:S
Chakra:40
Damage:0
Description:
The user Begins emitting Water chakra from his/here body,creating a light blue aura around the area of the user*visible by everyone with eyes*. Inside this field projectiles are slowed as if they are moving through water, protecting the user from thrown objects, an if the opponent is caught in this field, they are slowed as if they are moving through water, giving the user a speed advantage. The user of the jutsu is seperated by a small air pocket inside that moves to the shape of the user, preventing the field from slowing himself down. The Field is approximately ten feet from the user in all directions
*Lasts three turns
*can only be used twice per battle

~ How do you not drown in the water ? ~

 

[Ushiro]

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(Soushi Arashi to Ken) Twin Storm Blades
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30 (+10 each turn when infused with raiton and +5 to maintain the wire when not infused)
Damage Points: N/A (+10 to lightning techniques used through the blades)
Description: The user does a series of handseals before holding out both hands and summoning the blades. These two blades are made of a special metal that is very durable and can be infused with lightning chakra. When infused, they glow with an aura of whitish-yellow lightning and are capable of cutting through A-rank earth techniques with some difficulty. The blades can be connected at the handle through a magnetic bond to form a dual-ended spear. The user can also release a wire of raiton from between the two when separating them that will not harm the user if touched but won't break easily which can extend up to 10 ft and retract at will. The user can release a B-rank electrical current from the blades through something touching it that has the same affect as a taser when used on an opponent and can be sent through the ground within short range. Some known lightning jutsu up to S-rank can be channeled through the blades to concentrate their power and increase their piercing ability.
-Can only be summoned once per battle
-The electrical current can be used 2 times per battle
-Infusing the blades count as a move
-Can stay infused for up to 4 turns
-Can only be used by Katonpwnz

Change is in bold.

"some known" is a little vague
anyways, does the charge disappear after you use it on the ground?
or does it send a shock but still leave infused while the 4 turns are up?
i assume the first due to you saying "upto"​

](Soushi Arashi to Ken) Twin Storm Blades
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30 (+10 each turn when infused with raiton and +5 to maintain the wire when not infused)
Damage Points: N/A (+10 to lightning techniques used through the blades)
Description: The user does a series of handseals before holding out both hands and summoning the blades. These two blades are made of a special metal that is very durable and can be infused with lightning chakra. When infused, they glow with an aura of whitish-yellow lightning and are capable of cutting through A-rank earth techniques with some difficulty. The blades can be connected at the handle through a magnetic bond to form a dual-ended spear. The user can also release a wire of raiton from between the two when separating them that will not harm the user if touched but won't break easily which can extend up to 10 ft and retract at will. The user can release a B-rank electrical current from the blades through something touching it that has the same affect as a taser when used on an opponent and can be sent through the ground within short range but will lose their charge.Lightning jutsu up to S-rank that originate from the user's hands can be channeled through the blades to increase its power up one rank, but it will count as two moves.
-Can only be summoned once per battle
-The electrical current can be used 2 times per battle
-Infusing the blades count as a move
-Can stay infused for up to 4 turns
-Can only be used by Katonpwnz

~ Too OP ~

 

[BlacKing]

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Doton Release: Shingai Choukokubutsu (Earth Release: Statue of Terror)
Type: Defend/Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: Same as the jutsu
Description: Doing 3 handseals, the user quickly summons as 10 foot tall Tiki out of the ground. When a direct attack jutsu is used, the Statue initially absorbs the attack through the hole in its mouth. When the attack has been absorbed, the mouth closes and stores it for later use. After AT LEAST 3 of the users turns
Note: Works on any direct S Rank or lower Water and Fire Elemental attack.
Note: Works on any direct A Rank or Lower Lightning Elemental attack
Note: An S Rank or higher Lightning Elemental attack may destroy this jutsu.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: Can only be taught by Oraan.

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~Decline~​

Doton Release: Osore Choukokubutsu (Earth Release: Statue of Fear)
Type: Defend
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A lesser more 2 dimensional version of Shingai, Doing 2 handseals, the user quickly summons a 7 foot tall Tiki out of the ground. When a direct attack is used, the Statue acts as a shield, absorbing the attack. The statue goes back into the ground when it is finished absorbing the attack.
Note: Works on any direct A Rank or lower attack.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
Note: Can only be taught by Oraan.

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~Declined~​

Raiton: Heikatsu Disuku)- Lightning Style: Lightning Disk
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 60
Desription: Using only the left hand to make the one seal, the user creates a horizontally spinning lightning disk that rotates at a high speed, where the user holds their right hand above their head and molds lightning chakra into a spinning disk, which can be thrown towards an enemy. When it hits, it paralyzes the enemy. It can cut through Earth Jutsu and keep going from A Rank and below.
Note: Can only be taught by Oraan.
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.

Declined, -Pain- thought of lightning disk first​

Raiton/Doton: Enkei Nokogiri)- Lightning/Earth Style: Circular Saw
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 60
Damage Points: 20x3
Desription: Oraan uses Lightning Disk, making it slightly larger, and instead of throwing it aerially at an enemy hauls it to the ground. The Lightning Disk acts as a Circular Saw, that splits into 3 different smaller Lightning Disk that follow one after the other with a 1 foot gap in between each.
Note: Can only be taught by Oraan.
Note: Can only be used 1 time per battle.

~Declined, relies on a jutsu that was declined~​

(Raiton: Raigeki)- Lightning Style: Double Lightning
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 50
Damage Points: 40x2
Desription: User does 2 quick handseals, 2 bolts of lightning come from the sky in 2 second intervals of each other, which the user can control to strike an enemy and or a jutsu. If 1 hits an enemy, it does 40 damage and paralyzes the enemy. If 2 hit the enemy it does an additional 40 damage. When aimed at an earth jutsu, it cuts the jutsu in half vertically and immobilizes it. The second bolt can then be used to attack the enemy.
Note: Can only be taught by Oraan.
Note: Can only be used 1 time per battle.

~Declined, it's basically kirin... a lightning bolt, meaning almost unavoidable~​

 

[Shig]

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(Soudai Keshiki Genkaku - Nai Kinniku) ~ Grand Scene Illusion - Dead Muscle

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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 40(+20 the following turn)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Well, this is basically a pretty simple technique to understand. Normally, in order to perform genjutsu the user must extend his chakra flow into the opponent's brain, and afterwards making the opponent fall in the illusion, which means the user takes control over a portion of(if not the whole) brain, right? Well, in order to use this technique, one has to extend his chakra into the opponent's cerebellum(only), from there there the user will begin to affect the motor coordination and control balance, being able to completely stop the muscles of the opponent to respond to commands. This lasts only the turn the user enters the cerebellum of the enemy, and once the connection is broken the user will lose a part of his chakra. As, I was saying, the user can access in the opponent's brain nearly(if not all) of his thoughts and memories(as proven by both Ibiki and the Yamanaka), this technique basically affects a certain area, or, section.
~ May be used twice.
~ The user's techniques deal 15 less damage during this.
~ This is not literally Genjutsu, so Kai will not work, however it is a way to exploit the way you can access a person's brain, therefore Jinchuurikis and Sharingan(3 tomoes or more) users are able to escape from the bind, as they have most access to brain-related(Uchihas have Genjutsu as an expertise and Jinchuus have their Bijuu inside of them, that can reject any type of bind on the brain, or fusing[as Kyuubi did with Ma and Pa]) techniques.
~ Must be taught by Shigure.

~Declined~​

 

[Emperor]

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~ Thread Opened ~

 

[s06p]

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shinshou
Type:Weapon
Rank:Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage:90
Description:Shinsou was an indestructible blade which whose creator is unknown.It was found by a person named Muramusa,the demon of war.The blade was used in so many uncountable battles that it gained a black color due to the drying up of blood on it.Fire and Wind chakra can be chanelled into this blade and two powerful S ranked blasts of wind or fire chakra nature can be sent at the opponent each turn.The sword is about 1 metre long and is very sharp as it can easily cut through rock and even cut through metal when wind chakra is chanelled Into it.It is said that if anyone aside from the wielder of the sword itself looks at the swords blade the person will be cut though it is just a rumour and not true.When fire chakra in channeled into the sword and if the opponent is hit he will be burnt at the place the sword cuts,however chanelling wind chakra into it only makes it sharper.(and the blasts ofcourse.)
Pros
-The user can channel both wind and lightning chakra into the sword.
-The sword is extremely sharp.
-All wind and lightning jutsus of the user increase by a rank.
-If anyone expect the owner touches the summoning scroll of the sword both the sword and the summoning contract are teleported to a secret location known only to the owner.

Cons
-Both lightning and wind chakra blasts cannot be sent in the same turn.
-Each blast is considered as a move.

~Declined~ Is it Fire of is it Ligntning?
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Mubiyoshi(Infinite Beats)
Rank: S
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description:Mubiyoshi is a swift and strong punch using the principles of karate(moving the
punching hand and the non-active hand at the same time as if "connected behind the back
using a pulley",Jujutsu(as if using a sword,by throwing ones body weight into the opponent
to cut through a person),Chinese kenpo(surpassing the limit of mind with the feeling of
sending your hand flying out),and Mauy Thai(hit the enemy as if you are punching through
them).By combining all these forms of martial arts combined with chakra in their hands
the user punches their enemy knocking them out in a swift blow.
Note:
-If the punch connects the enemy will be knocked out due to the immense force of the punch.
-This technique cannot be blocked.But it takes about 3 seconds to actually form the punch
due to which it can be avoided.
-Can only be used 3 times per battle.
-Can only be used and taught by s06p.
~Declined~ OP but I appreciate that someone is trying to pull of moves from Kenichi

 

[Ben-sama]

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[Erai Shiyokubutsu Yousai | Great plant fortress]
Rank : Forbidden
Range : Short/Mid
Type : Supplementary
Chakra Cost : 50
Damage Points : N/A
Zetsu puts his hands onto the ground and will send chakra to the surrounding plants, the plants from throughout the entire battlefield will then be pulled towards zetsu himself and will stick to him, and form somewhat of a mountain on Zetsu's position, leaving zetsu somewhere deep within.
Whatever tries to come in contact with the fortress will be grabbed by veins from within it and pulled inside the fortress. Zetsu will be freely able to move through the fortress in a same way as ninjas go through ground using Underground Fish Projection technique, Zetsu will move throughout it the same way, but he will not need to use aditional chakra to do so. Zetsu will aswell be able to manipulate the plants within the fortress and rearange their position and duplicate them, aswell as create new plants using the ones that were gathered. Zetsu is aswell capable of using the chakra within the plants that he used to take control of them, to use the water gathered in by the plants to form a deffensive water layer on the fortress, that is capable of withstanding B rank or below fire techniques. Zetsu is aswell capable of manipulating the plants within the fortress to form tendrils that spin in a great speed and can pop out to pierce any earth technique of C rank and below. Zetsu can aswell infuse his chakra into the sides of the fortress, to use the plants to form artificial eyes that are linked to Zetsu's original eyes, like Gaara uses the Third eye technique with sand.
[Once per battle]
[Zetsu takes -20 damage due to chakra loss]
[Fortress consumes -20 chakra each turn]
[The water barrier effect can be used 3 times per battle]
[Only Zetsu can use this technique]
[The turn this technique is used Zetsu may only perform 2 techniques, this technique included.]

~ Approved ~

[Genjutsu : Taiketsu Motte Hougyo | Illusion Technique : Confrontation With Demise]
Rank : Forbidden
Type : Supplementary
Range : Short/Long
Chakra Cost : 50
Damage Points : N/A
Zetsu will place his hands in a prayer position while looking upon the opponent, once done so, the opponent will be caught in a genjutsu, where he will witness a great flytrap growing out of the earth behind the user and then there will be two phases of the technique.
Phase 1. The flytrap will open only a little ammount, but enough to reveal a shadow with a red glowing eye within, the glance of the eye will bind the opponent in great fear, into the extent that he will not be able to move his body. Right after so happens, phase 2 will initiate.
Phase 2. The opponent will see, that the being within the flytrap's shadow will begin pulling the air around the opponent along with the opponent himself into the flytrap, but instead of the opponent being pulled to it, the opponent will witness and feel as his body parts start breaking off him and begin getting sucked into the flytrap. Once phase 2 initiates, the opponent cannot break the genjutsu with pain. After both phases are complete and the opponent believes he is fully sucked into the darkness within the flytrap, he will feel as if his body is divided into many small pieces and is floating in an endless universe, where he cannot move. While in reality, during phase 1 he simply is paralysed due to the fear, in phase 2, he feels great pain that binds his entire body, and going to the end of it, the opponent begins falling into a deep sleep, if not broken in time, the opponent will not be able to wake up without a trigger caused not by him.
[Once per battle]
[User takes -20 damage]
[May be used only by Zetsu]
[Takes 5 seconds to prepare]

~ Too similar to a combination of two of MY Genjutsu O_O ~

~Leaving for Emp~

 

[~Racher~]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Resubmitting as per emperor's instructions ^^


(Kuchiyose no Jutsu:Gurusu ) Summoning : Eagles
Summoning Animal:Eagles
Scroll Owner:Gaara of konoha
Other Users who have signed contract:None
Summoning Boss if existing:Al capone (if approved)
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Two face Franky (if approved)


(Kuchiyose no Jutsu- Arukapone) - Summoning Jutsu -Al capone
Rank: S
Type:Supplementary
Range:N/A
Chakra cost:45
Damage points:N/A
Description:After biting there thumb and wiping it on a tatoo on there arm the user will summon Al Capone the King of Eagles who rules the land of Mount Chicagoicas.He is a majestic bird with wing feathers as sharp as a sword and shine with the lustre of gold and due to his katon affinity his tail feathers are always on fire and provide a source of light and inspiration.Al has a wingspan of 20 metres and is about 15 metres in length and weighs nearly 190 kilos.Al bears the coat of arms of Mount chicagoicas on his belly. Al is able to fly at speeds of about 100 km/hr,even at such high speeds he is able to perform mid air maneovers and is extremely agile.Its huge claws and sharp beak are able to tear up any human to shreds,due to Al's enormous strength.Al being an eagle also has sharp eyesight and can spot a rat from a height of 2 miles and due to this innate advantage when Al is soaring in the sky he can spot an enemy with pinpoint accuracy and and also see through mist(can see through the hidden mist but not if sight deprevation is also used in conjunction with the hidden mist).Al being a huge bird can create huge gusts of wind upto A rank by flapping his wings(but doesnt count as a move).But its natural affinity is Katon so Al Capone can perform all Katon jutsus that the user can upto A rank(counts as a move).Al being a huge bird can carry upto 5 people on its back at a time.All in all Al capone is a ferocious and frightning eagle who despises the human race but he holds special respect for Gaara of konoha xd whom he is bound to eternally.


*can only be summoned once per battle
*Al can stay on the battlefield for 4 turns only
*will go back home if hit by 2 S rank jutsu(160 damage)
*can only be taught by Gaara of konoha
*Al can perform the A ranked gust of wind only thrice in a battle
*Al can perform the katon jutsus 5 times per battle
*

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Al is a phillipine Eagle,the most awesome bird and also known as the king of birds.

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The eagle stands a meter high, weighs anything from four to seven kilograms and has a grip three times the strength of the strongest man on earth. With a wing span of nearly seven feet and a top speed at 82 kilometers per hour, it can carry unsuspecting monkey and carry it off without breaking flight.Source

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Philippine eagles inhabit tropical rain forests and are well-adapted to life in dense foliage. Despite their great size, they have short, broad wings and a squared-off tail that allows them to rise almost vertically between trees and maneuver with great speed and agility through branches and vines. They are adept at snatching monkeys or other mammals or birds from trees.Source:

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~Approved~

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(Kuchiyose no jutsu-Shurui Na kao-Furanki) Summoning jutsu:Two faced franky
Rank: S
Type:Supplementary
Range:N/A
Chakra cost:45
Damage points:N/A
Description:After biting there thumb and wiping it on a tatoo on there arm the user will summon Franky who is the brother of Al capone and is the underboss of the eagle force in Mount Chicagoicas.He wears a red cloak with a sleeveless black shirt and black pants.The red cloak also carries the mark of Mount chicagoicas.His sense of sight is similar to his brother and can see through thick mists(hidden mist jutsu,but if sight deprevation jutsu is also used then he is unable to view the opponent).He is 6 feet tall and is capable of flying with great speed and agility as it has wings on its back at a speed of nearly 70 km/hr ,and he can only carry one person.His feathers are irediscent and glow because of his raiton affinity.hence wherever he goes light follows him.He stands on his legs and carries a huge warhammer in his hand which can crush through defensive doton jutsus of B rank and below(counts as a move), as he possesses the strength similar to his brother Al capone.Franky also possesess natural affinity towards raiton and can perform raiton jutsus upto A rank.Franky is a dark and maniacal eagle who when gets angry,ravages everything in his vicinity.The only other organism he is afraid of is his brother AL capone,whom he respects and loves with his heart due to which he is also started being friendly with Gaara of konoha due to which he has granted Gaara a mental link with him,due to which,their mind becomes one and they can share each other's thought.
*can only be summoned by Gaara of konoha or who posesses the eagle contract
*can only be summoned once in battle
*Franky will go back to mount chicogo. after 4 turns
*will go back to mount chicagoicas if he suffers damage from a S rank jutsu.(80 damage)
*Franky can only use raiton jutsus 4 times when summoned
*the breaking of any doton jutsu of B rank and below counts as a move and also can only be done 3 times in a battle.
*Franky also possesess the ability to flash raiton from his body that can surprise,blind and disorient the opponent like a flash bang,the flash of light lasts two seconds and can only be used thrice in a battle, and doesnt count as a move and wont affect the user since he knows when the flash would occur(mental link).
*both franky and AL cannot be summoned together

~Approved~

Rank:S
Type: Attack
Range:short-long
Chakra cost:40
Damage:80
Description:This is a conjunction style jutsu alongwith Al capone in which the user for starters have to be in physical contact with the summon then the user will perform 3 handseals focussing doton chakra in his body and then stream it into Al who releases a blast of fire from his beak with perfect timing and so the fire and earth(i streamed my doton chakra into him) combine as they travel creating a stream of lava(30 cm radius) that travels ,towards the opponent causing serious burns and damage rendering the opponent helpless and in agony.
*can be used three times per battle
*can only be performed if Riding Al capone
*requires the eagle Contract
*can only be taught by Gaara of konoha

~Approved~

Type:Attack/Conjunction
Rank: S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra cost:40
Damage:80
Description:This is another conjunction style jutsu performed alongwith Franky Two Face.In this jutsu the user for starters needs to have physical contact with Franky,then as the user places his hand on franky ,the user streams a large amount of suiton chakra into franky and simultaneously Franky(he has hands as stated in his description) will perform 3 handseals and in perfect unison with the user's suiton chakra will expell a stream of pressurised water from his beak(30 cm radius)with lightning in it(franky's affinity is lightning) which travels towards the opponent and can shock,electrocute and paralyse the opponent severely disabling him from continuing the battle.
*can only be used thrice per battle
*can only be taught to a eagle contract holder by Gaara of konoha
*requires Franky to be near the user

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~Declined~ OP

 

[Sin]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

:| I wonder how many times I'v needed to re-submit this..
Here's another question for you...do you think I care ?

Honoo no Nishi | Andúril | Flame of the West
Rank: S
Type: Atk/Def/Suppl
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40 + 10 for each ability used
Damage: N/A
Description:

A blade shining but also a furious bluster of flames as it strikes down. The blade Andúril, mighty as it is name.

Andúril was created by an ancient blacksmith, broken in a huge war and later remade and in the progress of being remade, Andúril gained the attribute of indestructibility as it was the work of the blacksmith. This does not mean the sword can destroy everything.

Effects:

• Gives +10 damage to every Fire jutsu the user performs
  [*]Each Fire jutsu the opponent performs loses -10 of its damage through releasing fire chakra through the sword which then absorbs 10 damage points off a fire jutsu.
• The user focuses Katon chakra into Andúril, which then releases a bright flash after which a huge burst of fire is sent outwards, covering 180 degrees in front of the user. The flame exerted by the blade seems white, due to the reflection of the light exerted by Andúril before.
• By making a downwards slash with the sword, the user can release a bow of fire, that scatters into multiple shots.

-Even though the sword is indestructible, it cannot destroy everything-
-All active abilities can only be used twice a battle-
-Focusing Fire chakra in Andúril will cause little burns on the user, as she cannot keep all the heat away. The Fire chakra focused in Andúril lasts for two turns-
-When the user uses Andúril in battle, he/she cannot use another Custom Weapon during the entire battle-

Co-Created By Akiza - Mangekyou Girl Industries + Ingwer - Wind Kisser.: Akiza and Chiryoku are allowed to use the above as part of a agreement.

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~ Since when does fire chakra negate fire chakra ? ~

-hopes you don't try and decline it again..- ..

No.. I'm guessing you don't care. >.<

Honoo no Nishi | Andúril | Flame of the West
Rank: S
Type: Atk/Def/Suppl
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40 + 10 for each ability used
Damage: N/A
Description:

A blade shining but also a furious bluster of flames as it strikes down. The blade Andúril, mighty as it is name.

Andúril was created by an ancient blacksmith, broken in a huge war and later remade and in the progress of being remade, Andúril gained the attribute of indestructibility as it was the work of the blacksmith. This does not mean the sword can destroy everything.

Effects:

• Gives +10 damage to every Fire jutsu the user performs
• Each Fire jutsu the opponent performs loses -10 of its damage through the sword absorbing the heat of the opponent's fire jutsu.
• The user focuses Katon chakra into Andúril, which then releases a bright flash after which a huge burst of fire is sent outwards, covering 180 degrees in front of the user. The flame exerted by the blade seems white, due to the reflection of the light exerted by Andúril before.
• By making a downwards slash with the sword, the user can release a bow of fire, that scatters into multiple shots.

-Even though the sword is indestructible, it cannot destroy everything-
-All active abilities can only be used twice a battle-
-Focusing Fire chakra in Andúril will cause little burns on the user, as she cannot keep all the heat away. The Fire chakra focused in Andúril lasts for two turns-
-When the user uses Andúril in battle, he/she cannot use another Custom Weapon during the entire battle-

Co-Created By Akiza - Mangekyou Girl Industries + Ingwer - Wind Kisser.: Akiza and Chiryoku are allowed to use the above as part of a agreement.

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The sword absorbs the heat of the opponent's attack..
~Hows does heat absorption reduce the damage?~

 

[-Mugen-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Been a week -_-

Fire Dome (Kasai no Domu )

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Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost:50
Damage: 90
Description: This jutsu is a very strong and strain full one.The user will concentrate fire around him(not rotate it) and make it keep expanding at high speed as he is building fire in him.Than he will release all of it at once creating a super huge explosion that looks like a huge fire dome from far away.It is also released so fast that in short range it is almost inpossible to react to unless you have a dojutsu or sannin rank reaction.
*can only be used every 4 turns after usage
*Can only be taught by Mugen-sama
*Can only be taught by mugen

~Wouldn't this destroy you too since your are at the epicenter?~
Fire seal (kasai no fuuin )

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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost:40
Damage: +30 to fire
Description: The user will focus chakra to his stomach and a kanji "Fire" will appear there.The user with this seal will seal away his water and wind chakra's for a short periode of time in order to boost his fire up.While with this state the user can't use wind or water at all, and his earth and lightning will be -5 in damage because of the overwhelming fire in his body
*Can only be used once and lasts 3 turns turn

random idea xd
~Declined~ Suppressing different chakra types will not enchance another. Do Not Resubmit
Time seal (timu no fuuin )

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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: from user 360 degrees up to mid
Chakra Cost:40 (15 each turn to maintain)
Damage: N/A
Description: the user will concentrate chakra to his hand,and a word in kanji "time" will appear on his palm.He will than slam the hand on the ground.To a no dojutsu eye it,he wont see the barrier.A small force feild will appear around the user, and anything (jutsu,person,weapon) that enters it will go into a state of slow motion while in the barrier.(the speed will decrees by 3 times)
*Can only be used once and lasts 3 turns turn

~Declined~
Palm katana style( palmu no katana ryu )

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Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: short
Chakra Cost:30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will concentrate chakra to his hand creating a blade like form.Than he uses his palm like a katana to attack,defend a opponent.This jutsu is very fast to create since all you need is chakra in the palm,so it can catch a person off guard.
*Can only be taught by mugen

~Declined~ Too similar to existing jutsu's
2 sword style: Flying X (Nitoryu: hisan exsu )

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Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: short-mid
Chakra Cost:50
Damage: 90
Description: the user will use both of his swords to create a X form.Than by using their advanced speed they will concentrate chakra to their katanas, and quickly do a X slashing motion as well as realeasing the chakra in the swords.Thus creating a X that travels at the opponent.
*Considered taijutsu
*Can only be taught by Mugen-sama

~Change the name Nitoryu as the name is already taken~

 

[Emperor]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( Typhon no Junchi ) ɸ Taming of Typhon

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Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80

A powerful technique combining versatility with restraining ability, while at the same time damaging an opponent, it is said to be a mimicry of the way that the Gods once captured the Father of All Monsters, Typhon himself.
The user pulls out a storage scroll and slams it on the ground. Iron chains burst out from the scroll, and with the application of chakra, burrow into the ground. The chains then erupt from the ground at any point on the battlefield that the user wishes, and entangle anything within a circle of five-meter radius.
The chains are made of toughened iron, and are spiked, so once they burst out of the ground and latch on to an opponent, it is incredibly hard to remove them, since the spikes burrow into the skin and cause bleeding and pain.
The second aspect is that the chains themselves possess storage seals on them. Each link of chain possesses a storage seal containing one gallon of water. When the chains wrap around the target, the seals activate and the water cascades outward, covering the opponent from head to toe in it.
The user then forms one handseal, and the water condenses like a cocoon around the opponent, and immobilises them before dragging them down allowing more spiked chains to encircle them and then stab into their body, eventually causing massive bleeding.
The chains are impossible to notice when flowing underground unless the opponent possesses a jutsu that lets them sense what occurs underground. Once the chains burst out of the ground as well, they do so so fast that it is really hard to recover from the surprise and then avoid them. Once the chains have latched on to an opponent, it is hard to yank them out of the ground.

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The technique does possess some inherent weaknesses and restrictions -

• The technique can be used once per battle.
• The two-tomoe Sharingan and above react easily to the sudden eruption of the chains and can pull off one jutsu. The same goes for ninjas of Kage rank and above.
• People with the speed and/or strength rivalling the opening of the third gate and above can dodge the chains or yank them out of the ground easily once they latch on.
• If the chains are dodged, they remain waving about for anything within their reach in that circle for one turn before collapsing as normal chains and releasing their water onto the ground.
• The chains conduct lightning into the ground and are unharmed by it, plus being made of iron gives them the ability of great endurance - however focused cutting jutsu of A-rank and above can sever the chains. Fire of S-Rank can melt the iron through as well.
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~Declined~ OP Do not resubmit