[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Pain..]

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( Raition: Go Finga- Denkou ) Lightning Style: Five finger of Lightning

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Rank: B
Type: Attack
Chakra: 25
Damage: 30
Description: The user focus lightning chakra on his five finger and put lightning to the five
finger and do taijutsu or attack him or her and the user can get knock out
it can be in his or hers feet to if her or him wish.

NOTE: Can Only be teach by Obito-Uchiha.

~ User gets knocked out ? Wth ? ~

 

[Passion]

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( Mokuton: Mokusei Otome ) - Wood release: Wooden Maiden

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Type: Offensive - Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80 ( - 20 to user )
Description: User makes Boar → Dog → Bird → Monkey → Sheep → Monkey → Tiger → Dog → Snake handseals and focus wood chakra on ground while seal ( 女 - Female ) appears on user's left hand. As the seal appears an Iron maiden made from special wood that's hard as steel will raise from ground and open its door. As the door opens this move can be used to seal incoming attack that's Rank - S or to close opponent inside of it and the maiden is filled with multiple wooden spikes. When the maiden has defended user or attacked opponent it will sink back to ground leaving no traces left.
Note:
- No Wood for next two turns
- Can be used once
- No summonings can be used for rest of battle

~Declined~ Just no. Don't resubmit unless you majorly adjust it
( Mokuton: Ki Muchi ) - Wood release: Wood Whips

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Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: User focuses earth and water based chakra under opponent and perform Snake handseal causing multiple wooden whips raise from ground that take bind around target's body preventing target from using handseal jutsus. The Wood cannot be broken by lightning attack since wood doesn't conduct electricity. The wooden whips can be used for further attacks that can crush the bones and body of target's
Note:
- Can be used only once
- No handseals can be performed when you're bound by the wood
- No wood for one turn afterwards.

~Declined~ can't you do that with regular mokuton jutsu's because i'm pretty sure i've seen it in the manga

( Mokuton: Sugoi ki kōzō ) - Wood release: Great wood structure

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Type: Supplementary - Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40 ( - 20 per turn when in field )
Damage points: N/A ( 20 per hit )
Description: User will make Snake → Rat → Dragon → Dog → Rooster → Boar handseals while focusing earth and water based chakra to create huge structure made of wood around the user's body in form of giant statue of Hashirama senju. After the statue is created user will control it from inside to attack against targets and the statue is capable of moving.
Note:
- Only earth, water and wood can be used by statue
- Statue lasts two turns
- The statue is size of Gamabunta, but due to this is also slow in moving and attacking.
- Causes extreme strain to user when the attack is done - he cannot use Ninjutsu or Genjutsu for one turn after
- Half his chakra is exhausted on use, leaving him weak.
- Can be used only once

~ Approved, I added restrictions ~

( Noroijutsu: Kage no Jashin ) - Curse style: Shadow of Jashin

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Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 50 ( - 20 per turn )
Damage points: N/A ( - 7 to user per turn )
Description: Hidan will focuse into chakra and atmosphere around him summoning the chakra of inglorious Jashin. After Hidan has acquired Jashin chakra he will gain wings of purple chakra and the skin will turn into sacrifice looks. When used Hidan will gain the speed of 1st gate and the power of Jinchuriki (Not jutsus).
Note:
- Hidan will move at the speed of 1st gate and gain the powers of Jinchuriki
- Can be used only once
- Causes - 10 damage to user per turn
- Can only be used by Hidan
- No Genjutsu or taijutsu for whole battle
- Costs - 20 chakra per turn

~ Declined, do not resubmit this or anything like this which involves calling Jashin or Hidan getting a mode/appearance/abilities like CS2 ~

 

[Pervyy]

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Wind style - Wind binding Jutsu
Rank: A
Type: Attack/ Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 30
Description: After performing the necessary handseals, the user focusses their chakra into the air, after doing so they manipulate the air to wrap arround there opponents limbs holding them in place, spread out in the air unable to move while the wind cuts at them. The gusts of wind holding the targets arms and legs in place will prevent the target from moving and using hand seals

Note: Holds the target in place for 2 turns
Note: can only be used twice

~ Why do you never write the Japanese names ? This is declined anyways. ~

 

[Typhon]

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(Doton: Shou pure-to) Destructive Plates
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user performs a series of hand seals and stomps his foot on the ground. The earth below the opponent begins to converge on itself pulling the opponent in and crushing him between the two sections of earth.
(This is based on the movement of tectonic plates on the earth, specifically a convergent boundry.)
~ Can only be used three times per match.
~ No A rank or above earth jutsu next turn.

~ Declined, similar to existing jutsu ~

(Summoning: Sanbiki no Saru) Monkey Elders: The Three Wise Monkeys
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Descruption: The user bites their thumb and wipes the blood on any surface. This will summon the three monkey elders Mizaru, Kikazaru and Iwazaru. The elders resemble 3 older gray langur monkeys. They are covered in white fur with black faces and a mane of white fur surrounding their heads. Mizaru sits on the user's left shoulder with his tail wrapped around the user's left arm, Kikazaru sits on the user's head with his tail wrapped around the user's throat and Iwazaru sits on the right shoulder with his tail wrapped around the user's right arm. These three monkeys are very wise but are not great fighters. They severely lack skill in ninjutsu and taijutsu, but excel in the use of genjutsu.
~ Make the user invulnerable to genjutsu.
~ Can only be summoned once per battle.
~ Lasts for three turns after being summoned.
~ The monkeys cast jutsu in unison so they can only use one jutsu at a time.
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~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

(Genjutsu: Nokogiri no-Ashi, Hia no-Ashi, Anou no-Ashi ) See No Evil, Hear No Evil, Speak No Evil
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 45
Damage: N/A
Description: After summoning the three monkey elders the user lends them some of his/her chakra. The three monkeys preform a short series of hand seals in unison. After the seals are complete Mizaru covers his eyes, Kikazaru covers his ears and Iwazaru covers his mouth. When the opponent witnesses this they are instantly caught in a genjutsu in which they are unable to hear, see or speak. Inside of the darkness they've been cast into they will be forced to recall the strongest source of evil they have encountered in their life. This vision will cripple the opponent for the remainder of the turn.
~ This genjutsu cannot be broken out of by normal means.
~ Even a skilled sharingan user up to mangekyo level will succomb to it. (EMS will see through it).
~ Once used the monkey elders will disappear.
~ Lasts for one turn.
~ Due to lending their chakra the user will not be able to cast any jutsu above rank B for the rest of the turn.

~ Declined, do not resubmit. Just a question, did you seriously believe that a Genjutsu that can beat the MS will be approved ? ~

 

[Pervyy]

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One thousand hair needles

Rank: B
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:30
Description: The user expands there hair and then fires thousands of needs out of there hair at there apponent that are as sharp and hard as senbon.

~ Where's the Japanese name ? ~

(Ichi chi kami hari - One thousand hair needles)

Rank: B
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:30
Description: The user expands there hair and then fires thousands of needs out of there hair at there apponent that are as sharp and hard as senbon.
~ Can only be used by Jiraiya

~ Approved, I added a restriction ~

 

[Passion]

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( Mokuton: Sugoi ki kōzō ) - Wood release: Great wood structure

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Type: Supplementary - Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40 ( - 20 per turn when in field )
Damage points: N/A ( 20 per hit )
Description: User will make Snake → Rat → Dragon → Dog → Rooster → Boar handseals while focusing earth and water based chakra to create huge structure made of wood around the user's body in form of giant statue of Hashirama senju. After the statue is created user will control it from inside to attack against targets and the statue is capable of moving.
Note:
- Only earth, water and wood can be used by statue
- Statue lasts two turns
- The statue is size of Gamabunta, but due to this is also slow in moving and attacking.
- Causes extreme strain to user when the attack is done - he cannot use Ninjutsu or Genjutsu for one turn after
- Half his chakra is exhausted on use, leaving him weak.
- Can be used only once

~ Approved, I added restrictions ~

( Noroijutsu: Kage no Jashin ) - Curse style: Shadow of Jashin

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Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 50 ( - 20 per turn )
Damage points: N/A ( - 7 to user per turn )
Description: Hidan will focuse into chakra and atmosphere around him summoning the chakra of inglorious Jashin. After Hidan has acquired Jashin chakra he will gain wings of purple chakra and the skin will turn into sacrifice looks. When used Hidan will gain the speed of 1st gate and the power of Jinchuriki (Not jutsus).
Note:
- Hidan will move at the speed of 1st gate and gain the powers of Jinchuriki
- Can be used only once
- Causes - 10 damage to user per turn
- Can only be used by Hidan
- No Genjutsu or taijutsu for whole battle
- Costs - 20 chakra per turn

~ Declined, do not resubmit this or anything like this which involves calling Jashin or Hidan getting a mode/appearance/abilities like CS2 ~

( Mokuton: Qiān sugoi heiki no Vishnu ) - Wood release: 1000 Great arms of Vishnu

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Type: Offensive - Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40 ( - 10 per turn )
Damage points: N/A ( + 80 when they pierce opponent )
Description: The user will focus water and earth based chakra into own right hand and thrust it foward with palm open. After the palm is thrusted foward 1000 giant wooden hands will sprout out of it with fingers sharp like spears and impale, punch, crush and pierce opponent with huge power. The hands can also be used to make defending shield or they can grab the opponent.
Note:
- No handseal jutsus can be done while the hands are activated
- No wood jutsus can be used when these hands are in usage
- Costs 10 chakra per turn
- Wooden hands can either grab, pierce, crush and impale opponent or even guard the user.
- The wood used in this jutsu is special meaning that it isn't weak to lightning based attacks but they are slightly weaker to fire

~ No god names in jutsu O_O ~

 

[Xylon]

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Mach Punch (Mahha panchi)
Rank; A
Type; Offense
Range; Short-Long
Chakra cost; 30
Damage points; 60
Description; Mach punch is a bone breaking taijutsu technique requiring chakra usage, the user charges his fist with chakra and releases it in one blow performing a deflective punch that moves with blinding speed, so fast that until it leaves mid range, it moves with critical mach speed. The damage power of the punch is determined by the user itself, at minimum the punch can break through solid rock and move forward.
Note; Usable 3 times.
-Not usable again until a turn has passed.

~ Declined. Oped. No go on this, Makuhita. 0_0 ~

Mach Punch (Mahha panchi)
Rank; A
Type; Offense
Range; Short-Long
Chakra cost; 30
Damage points; 45
Description; Mach punch is a bone breaking taijutsu technique requiring chakra usage, the user charges his fist with chakra and releases it in one blow performing a deflective punch that moves with blinding speed, so fast that until it leaves mid range, it moves with critical mach speed. The damage power of the punch is determined by the user itself, the punch can break through solid rock if the user has a strong taijutsu background.
Note; Usable 3 times.
-Not usable again until a turn has passed.
~decreased offensive power~

~ I just realised something somewhat like this exists already ~

Great division seal (Fuukubun Oinaru)
Rank; S
Type; Supplementary
Range; Short-long
Chakra cost; 50(+10 per turn to maintain)
Damage points; N/a
Description; After performing the needed hand seals, the user forms a triangular shape with his hands which quickly expands in pyramid shape trapping everything in range, the seals serves the primary function of disconnecting the insides from rest of the world/dimensions, any technique requiring the manipulation of time or space (i.e. summoning, reverse summoning, flying thunder god) is unusable inside, further more the insides also have a limited supply of oxygen which kills the targets in roughly 2 turns.
*Usable twice.
*Does 20 Damage to the user/turn.
*user has to remain stationary to maintain.

~ Declined, unrealistic ~

 

[Ben-sama]

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(Frostmourn Ittou) Frostmourn Blade

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Rank : S
Type : Supplementary
Range : Short
Chakra Cost : 40
Damage Points : N/A
Description : The Frostmourn is a one handed (can be held with two hands for more power) blade that was originated from the waterfall village. It is made from an unknown metal that is light weight, but is very powerful. The Frostmourn boosts the power of water techniques, however it reduces the power of fire techniques. The blade contains one main blade with two hidden knives that travel in air faster than normal kunais of their light weight (they are made from the same metal as the blade itself).
- Blade lasts 5 turns
- Once per battle
- +15 To suiton
- -15 To katon

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~ Approved ~

I am dropping my previous weapon for the one above, the old weapon :

(Buki Kuchyose : Dyuaru Katanas No Shunshuu) Weapon Summon : Dual Blades Of The Prodigy

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Rank : A
Range : Short
Type : Supplementary
Chakra Cost : 30
Damage Points : 60
Description : The User Summons Two Dual Blades That Have A Black Handle And Black Metal. The Blades Were Originaly Made By Ben Uchiha. They Were Created From An Unknown Material That Is Very Light, But Cuts Like Steel. The Blades Are Attached To The User With A Metal Chain So They Can Be Used For Ranged Attacks.
Note : Only Ben Uchiha (Benazz) Posseses This Blade.
Note : Every Weapon Orientated Attack With These Blades Is Much Faster Due To The Light Weight
Note : Blades Last For 5 Turns; then can only be summoned once.

 

[HiddenShadowNinja]

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(Toa-a-tae)- Double Layer Limit
Type- Attack
Rank- S
Chakra cost- N/A
Damage- 80
Description- The most advanced variation of the Futae No Kiwami. Using this technique the user can transfer the power of a Futae No Kiwami through objects such as a sword. The user then thrusts the object, or his fist, into the ground, creating a shockwave that pulverizes anything within a 3 foot radius of the user.
*Only HiddenShadowNinja can use this jutsu
*On;y thrice per battle
(2:58 to 3:20 in same Youtube vid as Futae No Kiwami below)

I'd also like to resubmit this to make it A-rank

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(Futae no Kiwami)- Mastery of the two layers
Type- Attack
Rank- B
Chakra cost- N/A
Damage- 40
Description- An attack in which the user preforms two hits in quick succession with any part of his body. If done with a punch for example, the user would make the first punch with the front knuckles of the hand which neutralizes the hardness of the target, then the second blow, struck with the main knuckles, breaks the target before it recovers from the force of the first blow. This technique can easily shatter rock and even bone. The power of a Futae no Kiwami attack can be compared to one of Tsunade’s strikes because it first breaks the objects natural resistance with the first blow, so the second strike seems more powerful. In reality the second strike is merely utilizing a punches full potential.
*Only HiddenShadowNinja’s bios can use/teach this jutsu
(7:50-8:30 on youtube vid)

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(Futae no Kiwami)- Mastery of the two layers
Type- Attack
Rank- A
Chakra cost- N/A
Damage- 60
Description- An attack in which the user preforms two hits in quick succession with any part of his body. If done with a punch for example, the user would make the first punch with the front knuckles of the hand which neutralizes the hardness of the target, then the second blow, struck with the main knuckles, breaks the target before it recovers from the force of the first blow. This technique can easily shatter rock and even bone. The power of a Futae no Kiwami attack can be compared to one of Tsunade’s strikes because it first breaks the objects natural resistance with the first blow, so the second strike seems more powerful. In reality the second strike is merely utilizing a punches full potential.
*Only HiddenShadowNinja’s bios can use/teach this jutsu

~ Both Approved, I added bits to the first one ~

 

[Icemyster]

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(hi-disuku Jutsu) Ice Disk Technique
Type- Offensive/Defensive
Rank-A
Chakra-30(-10 per turn if maintained)
Damage-60
Description
This jutsu turns the moisture particles in the air into an ice disk. They can be hurled with tremendous force at a target and are hard to dodge because of their transparency. They can also be strung together to spy on areas. They can also be used defensively, creating highly durable shields or disks to stand on to hover in the air.
*Can only be taught by icemyster*
*may only be used to hover in the air twice per battle, for three turns*

(hi-haretsu jutsu) Ice Explosion Jutsu
Type-Offensive
Rank-S
Range-Short/Long
Chakra-40
Damage-80
Description-
The user, by focusing on an ice source, causes the area in the center of the ice to rapidly heat up, and by doing so builds up pressure on the inside of the ice, causing the ice to explode, sending multiple ice shards everywhere in range. If the user is in range they will be hit.
*can only be taught by Icemyster*
*can only be used twice per Battle*

~ Declined, techniques exist ~

 

[Artimis]

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X- mo-do(X-Mode)
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: N/A(user 15 damage per turn this is active)
Description: This is one of the Strongest moves the X-Gloves can perform once fusion with the Mare Sky ring, the user will drain all the power from the X-Gloves this will cause the Gloves and the ring to become powerless and fall off, once the gloves fall off the user hands, the user eyes will turn red and his body will heat up in to a incredible rate causing steam to come from his nose every time he breaths while in this Mode the user speed will be enhanced speed and all fire jutsus performed will go up a rank and other fire jutsus used on the user will become useless
Note: While in this Mode can only use Fire Jutsus
Note: this Mode will burn the user inside per turn If the user stays in this mode longer then 3 turns his inside will be burned to the point where he will be unable to fight
Note: Gloves and ring are gone for the rest of the fight after the user comes out of this mode he will be unable to use any fire for the rest of the fight

~ Declined, too similar in effects to existing fire modes ~

 

[mangekyou sharingan]

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(raiton:re-za shushi):lightning release:laser finger
Type:Attack
Rank:Forbidden
Range: short-long Range
Chakra Cost:50
Damage Points:90
Description:The user uses the index finger to point at the enemey and by concentrating lightning chakra in the finger the user can shoot a beam that goes at the speed of light and can pierce almost through everything.
Note:can only be used one per battle and no lightning next turn.
Note:can only be used by Mangekyou sharingan and anybody teached by him.

(Fuuton:nagareboshi panchi)Fuuton:meteor punches
Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range: short Range
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:the user puches ten times the air,sending 100 punchs of air that are directed to the enemy
Note:can only be used one per battle.
Note:can only be used by Mangekyou sharingan and anybody teached by him.

~ Both Declined, do not resubmit ~

 

[Pain..]

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( Raition: Go Finga- Denkou ) Lightning Style: Five finger of Lightning

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Rank: B
Type: Attack
Chakra: 25
Damage: 30
Description: The user focus lightning chakra on his five finger and put lightning to the five
finger and do taijutsu or attack him or her and the user can get knock out
it can be in his or hers feet to if her or him wish.

NOTE: Can Only be teach by Obito-Uchiha.

~ User gets knocked out ? Wth ? ~

( Raition: Go Finga- Denkou ) Lightning Style: Five finger of Lightning



Rank: B
Type: Attack
Chakra: 25
Damage: 30
Description: The user focus lightning chakra on his or her five finger and put lightning to the five
finger and this jutsu can do taijutsu or attack him or her and the user can get burn.
it can be in his or hers feet to if her or him wish.

NOTE: Can Only be teach by Obito-Uchiha.

~ Declined. -_- Please improve your grammar ~

 

[Emperor]

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( Dairiyourinin no Juhitokui ) - Cannibalistic Cooking Utensils of a Great Chef

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Rank: B
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 30 per hit
The Cannibalistic Cooking Utensils of a Great Chef are a set of weapons summoned by Zetsu to aid in his battles. The set consists of :
Chitanfuraipan - A large frying pan with a curved bottom, it has a foot long handle and a wide pan, over three feet in diameter. The pan is highly heat resistant for easy cooking of Zetsu's meals, but can also be used as a defense against low to medium fire techniques [ up to B ranks ]. The curve and smoothness of the bottom make any physical hits glide off its surface, acting as a defense. The pan is also hard enough to be used to hit an opposing shinobi on the head to knock them out. The inside of the pan is however flammable, which means that with heating, a mini-fireball can be made in the pan and then flung at an opponent.
Santoku - Inspired by traditional Japanese cooking, the Santoku is a large knife with a six foot blade and two foot rubber handle, and is generally used for skinning, slicing or shaving Zetsu's meals. The sharpness of the blade and its long reach, however, make it usable for swordfights.
Koshosheka - A large ceramic container with some holes in its lid, it contains pepper to spice up Zetsu's meals. However, it can be used with great effect to spray the pepper into someone's eyes or nose for either distractions or for pranking.
Sugibashi - A set of two chopsticks, they are normally used to pick up food to eat. However, at the touch of a switch, the chopsticks expand from ten inches to four feet, because a hidden compartment opens up. They can then be used to grab opposing shinobi's limbs/weapons in a pincer-like grip or to lift far away objects.
Shokunanka - Classically resembling a meat tenderiser for softening the meat of pesky Iwa shinobi [ who generally cover themselves in rocks ] before Zetsu eats it. The mallet can however, also be used to great effect in splintering weapons or smashing kneecaps and other bones. The most dangerous use of this weapon would be to smash it violently into the "family jewels" of a shinobi.
In each fight, only up to three of these five utensils of mass destruction may be used.

-Approved-

( Hitokuigen: Bishoku no Sanzai ) - Cannibalistic Illusion: Presence of Gourmet Food

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Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self-Affecting
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
The above illusion is one of the most feared techniques in Zetsu's arsenal. Strong men, all over the Shinobi nations quail on hearing the name called out. Women faint and children cry.
Zetsu places this illusion upon himself, making him see the opponent as a food - for example, instead of seeing an Uchiha standing in front of him and spitting a fireball at him, he would see a rice dumpling with hands and legs spit a fireball at him. He can see the opponent as any type of food he wants. The illusion, therefore, points him to his real target even in the presence of clones, because he sees the clones as human and the original as a rice dumpling, which is an easy differentiation to notice. It also spurs Zetsu to fight harder, due to his food standing right in front of him, giving him a speed boost equal to a certain green spandex wearing Jounin without weights on.
The very principle of an illusion is that it affects the opponent's chakra in a specific way to produce a certain effect. However, this illusion is already affecting Zetsu's chakra in a certain way, meaning that when the opponent attempts their illusions, the overall affected chakra will be in a different pattern than the opponent requires. This means that though the opponent's Genjutsu will work on the user, the effects will be completely different. For example, an illusion designed to show the user's worst fears may show a swarm of pink butterflies.
The effects of this illusion last for three turns.

-Approved-

( Rekishiteki Togoku Suiji: Sushi Soshutsu ) - Traditional Eastern Culinary Art: Sushi Creation

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Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Zetsu's first ever culinary art technique, he uses it to turn opponents [ generally Mist-nin since they are naturally fish-flavoured due to their affinity to water, though the technique is not limited to them ] into Sushi. He makes the ram handseal, and numerous blades of wind form themselves in front of and behind the opponent. Should all the blades strike, the opponent will be sliced into many thin cylindrical rolls. Simultaneously, his other half focuses his unique abilities creating large leaves from a venus flytrap to form underground, which then wrap around the thin rolls [ or the opponent if he survives the blades ] immobilising him completely.
This is how the opponent will look if the technique succeeds completely -

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Sushi can only be created twice per battle. Secondly, attempting to create sushi makes Zetsu short of breath for a turn, limiting his Taijutsu abilities and ninjutsu abilities to A-rank and below for 1 turn.

-Need Roku to also check this, I'm unsure:/-
~Approved~ added 1 thing. Wtf is wrong with you? xd

 

[Artimis]

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Old approved jutsu

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Custom Weapon: X-Gloves
Rank: S
Range: Short
Type: Weapon
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user puts on Special Gloves Called X-Gloves, When the user infuses with fire chakra the gloves give the use the power to do more and stronger fire jutus .
*These gloves can only be used by Mato~kun*
*Gloves can be removed but must be done by another jutus*
*Any fire jutsu done with the gloves adds 10+ damage

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Custom Weapon: (waga sukai ringu) Mare sky ring
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:50
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The Mare Sky ring is one of the six strongest rings in the world. After the user has equipped himself with the X-Glovers he can then active the Mare sky ring .When the user infuses the rings with chakra the ring will then fusion with the gloves doubling the gloves power. So now if the user was to do battle with a fire jutsu of the same rank the X-gloves would easily overpower to other jutus. The ring has lots of other powers but this is the only one known at the moment .
notes:
The rings can only stay fusion with the X-gloves for 3 turns
Only can be used with X-gloves
Once the three turns are up the X-gloves will be unable to use any fire jutsu for 2 turns
Can only be used once per fight
Only can but used by Mato~kun

New updated jutsu

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Custom Weapon: X-Gloves
Rank: S
Range: Short
Type: Weapon
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A(30+ to any fire jutsu used with it)
Description: The user puts on Special Gloves Called X-Gloves, when the user infuses with fire chakra the gloves give the use the power to do more and stronger fire jutsu. The gloves are always hot so if the gloves were to come in contact with skin they would cause very bad burns to a point that the opponent may find it hard to continue fighting.
*These gloves can only be used by Mato~Kun*
*Gloves can be removed but must be done by another jutsu*
*any fire jutsu done with the gloves adds 30+ damage

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Custom Weapon: (waga sukai ringu) Mare sky ring
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:50
Damage Points: N/A(Doubles gloves power)
Description: The Mare Sky ring is one of the six strongest rings in the world. After the user has equipped himself with the X-Glovers he can then active the Mare sky ring .When the user infuses the rings with chakra the ring will then fusion with the gloves doubling the gloves power. So now if the user was to do battle with a fire jutsu of the same rank the X-gloves would easily overpower the other jutsus. Water jutsus used against fire jutsus with the ring on will become least effected, meaning that if the user uses a fire jutsu a rank higher than a water jutsu the fire should still beat it but if they are the same rank they will both cancel out.
notes:
The rings can only stay fusion with the X-gloves for 3 turns
Only can be used with X-gloves
Once the three turns are up the X-gloves will be unable to use any fire jutsu for 1 turns
Can only be used once twice fight
Only can but used by Mato~kun

~ I need more restrictions for both ~

 

[ZetsuPOD]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Doton:Okami's Meimei Ekusupuro-jon) Earth Release: Emperor's Divine Explosion
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid (If Long half the damage)
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Descruption: Yamato will perform one handseal then by releasing earth chakra, a huge mountain will start to form in the air with earth flying to it, creating a mountain, then focusing earth in it, Yamato will then duck down into the earth protected. Then, the mountain will start to slowly turn into a black hole of such, but different, that explodes seconds later as it forms very fast and is done fast, this sends million parts of earth in every direction but the blast, if the opponent is short range to the blast, the damage is an added twenty.
-Taught by Yamato/ZetsuPOD
-Is only usable 3 times per battle
-After use, Yamato will have to do one more seal for every earth jutsu
-User not affected

~ Declined, unrealistic ~

(Taijutsu: Hisan Kurasshu Kire) Body Techniques: Flying Crash Chop

Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Firstly, The User will face the opponent then with there back foot, pushing up, and front foot with chakra, The User will jump high into the air, then by tumbling towards the opponent, in a ball, but instead of hitting the opponent by ball, the user will bounce off the ground (Using chakra to keep protected) and then above the opponent chopping downwards striking through their head with both arms filled with chakra, stopping the brain from working properly, and causing problems with movement.
-Make sure your ready for this
-Must be taught by ZetsuPOD

~ I cannot understand anything ~

 

[Typhon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Buki: Bo sono Kaze-Kakuchou) Custom Weapon: Staff of the Noble Winds
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: This weapon is a legendary staff that was said to be wielded by the wind God Fujin. The staff itself is as long as an average sized man but very thin. It consists of two intertwined jade colored poles that come to a sharp point at the bottom. At the top of the staff is a clear colored jewel with golden leaves that surround it. The staff is extremely light for its size making it easier to wield. A thin vortex of wind in constantly swirling around the staff with no chakra input needed by the user. This wind not only makes the staff lighter, but gives it the ability to slice through objects as if it were a sword. The staff itself is used to create strong wind attacks without the need of hand seals. It also powers up the attacks so that they are a full rank above their listed strength.
~ Wind jutsu do not require hand seals.
~ Wind jutsu are increased in strength by one rank. (B=A, A=S, S=Forbidden, etc.)
~ Can only be wielded by Sacrifice.
~ No lightning jutsu while being wielded.

~ Declined, too similar to other weapons ~

 

[Mugiwara]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Chinou-Nai no jutsu)- Brain-dead technique

Spoiler

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Range: Self
Damage Points: N/A
Chakra cost: 85
Description: The user blocks most of the chakra going towards his brain, making himself go into a near unconscious state. While in this state, the users natural instinct is increased by tenfold and appears like grass swayed by the wind, uncounsiously dodging incoming projectile and taijutsu attacks entirely on instinct.
*Cannot attack or use any other jutsu while this technique is active:

Spoiler

If this is the first attack of the round, the user cannot use any more the same round. The technique is deactivated after 1 round.

*The user cannot use A rank and above techs for 2 rounds after using this tech cause the brain needs time to recover to fully conscious state.
*Only once per battle.

~ Approved, I edited bits ~

 

[aTastyCookie]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Katon:Ryuujin Himei)Fire Styleragon Scream
Type:Attack
Rank:B
Range:Short-Mid
Chakara Cost:25
Damage:40
Description:To use this technique, the user must be proficient in using the Katon element. Before executing the jutsu, the user must perform the following handseals: Dragon, Dog, Monkey, Serpant. The user will then concentrate a vast amount of Katon chakra into the lungs, it must be released quickly or the lungs could easily be burned. You then force the chakra out of the mouth in a powerful and explosive burst of fire, this is incredibly deadly when performed at a close range.

(Fuuton:Heki Tekidan)Wind Style:Burst Grenade
Type:Attack
Rank:B
Range:Short-Mid
Chakara Cost:25
Damage:40
Description:To use this technique, the user must be proficient in using the Fuuton element. Before executing the jutsu, no hand seals are needed to be performed. The user will cause a large ball of wind energy in his or her hand. The core of which is a ball of unstable chakra. When the ball is thrown, it causes the wind and chakra to explode and let out a forceful burst of wind. The gale is strong enough to snap trees and toss a person around like a rag doll.

(San Shushi Sankaku: Dan'atsu Tesaki)Three Finger Triangle: Pressure Fingers
Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range:Short
Chakara cost:40
Damage:80
Description:The user hand flows with chakra upon their finger tips, protects the users fingers and allows them to pierce inside skin of the users muscle tissue to tangle and damage. This technique cannot pierce the skin, it just presses firmly and hard into the body of the user and stretches the skin so the fingers can attack inside organs of the enemy and cause bleeding of some sort, the extortion of this technique can lead to internal bleeding and sevre damage to any internal organs, depending on which organ is struck with the technique.
-Can Only Be Used 2 Times

~ All Declined ~

 

[Pain..]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( Kairai Kuro-n Kasai ) Puppet clone of fire

Rank: B
Type: Defense
Range: Long
Chakra: 25
Description: The user create a clone of other puppets but the puppet clone can't use the same move as the original puppet. The puppet clone can be use with a clone this puppet clone can do taijutsu alone.

NOTE: Can only be use for a Sasori bio.
NOTE: Can only be used thrice per battle
NOTE: Only me can teach this jutsu.

~ Approved, I edited bits ~