[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Sinister]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Katon: Kyousei Kouro Kaji)- Fire style: Great Chasing Fire
Type:Attack
Rank:S
RangeShort:-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:User Must have Sharingan activated. While Sharingan is activated the User spits out a Huge Fire from his mouth in the shape of a Dragon. Then using Fire Manipulation he/she can manipulate the fire with his/her hands to Strike his/her oponent.Since the Sharingan is activated If the foe decides to flee the user chases them with the fire.(as sharingan can follow/predict movements).

*Must Have Sharingan.
*Only Be taught and learned from Sinister



(Genjutsu:Sentou Kirikae)Illusion Technique- Fight Exchange
Type:Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Rank:B
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description: With Sharingan activated the user Must look into the Foe's eyes or vice versa for the jutsu to take affect. When the foe is trapped in the Illusion it seems as if everything is the same(If te foe is doing a move while being caught it will seem as though hey hit the useer but did not). In reality the the foe's body is motionless. Leaving a gateway for the user to make 1 direct hit with any jutsu or tech as long as it taes 1 move to do. This Jutsu Is irriversible once caught in it. This Tech is also over once the foe has gotten hit.

*Must Have Sharingan(Stage 3)
*Can Only Be taught By Sinister and only taught to Blood uchiha Members

(Raiton: Kyousei Kouro Chidori)- Lightning style: Great Chasing Chidori
Type:Attack
Rank:S
RangeShort:-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:User Must have Sharingan activated. While Sharingan is activated the User Concentrates his lightning based chakra through his hands forming a chidori that can extend out of his hands and chase his Opponent. Then using Lightning Manipulation he/she can manipulate the lightning with his/her hands to Strike his/her oponent.Since the Sharingan is activated If the foe decides to flee the user chases them with the Lightning.(as sharingan can follow/predict movements).

*Must Have Sharingan.
*Only Be taught and learned from Sinister

Grimm/Roku Please Check
Hells: all are oped =/

 

[Goro Kaguya]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Note to all. I understand being inspired by other anime, but i DO NOT WANT TO SEE other anime titles or references in the NARUTO custom thread.

Automatic Decline From Now On.​

 

[The_Empire]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kuchiyose no Jutsu:Yottsu-Kashiraed Ryuu)Summoning Technique:Four-Headed Axe
Type:Supplementary/Attack
Rank:S
Range:Short(If use with wind element mid range)
Chakra:40
Damage:80(Wind=15(Cuts all around the area hit))
Description:The user pulls out two scrolls and bits their thumbs and puts blood on all their fingers and performs the hand seals. Then place hands on scrolls. The user summons two axes with four heads. The axes can be used with wind element. The axes can be connected together at the end and made into something like a staff with four axe heads on each side. If any other person touches the axes spikes will come out and stab the person. The axes can be called back when the user puts their hands up.
(Can only be used by Shikamaru Teaguey)

Approved

 

[Daemon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Genjutsu- Himei Gama Songu) Illusion Techinque: Screaming Toad Song
Typeefense
Rank:S
Range:Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:When the user Summons a toad, The toad sings a consecutive notes that sounds beautiful to the toad and their partner but it sounds like screaming to the opponent.This jutsu is so deafening that it makes the opponent bleed out of their ears. The user can also sing with the toads for extra effect.
- Can only be used by ~Minato~
- Can only be used twice per battle.
- Must have a toad summoned to perform this jutsu
- Effects of this jutsu last for one turn

Approved

 

[Black Reaper]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Senpō: Shokushu Off Doki (Sage Mode: Tentacles Of Warth)
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: When in Sage Mode the user creates several invisible tentacles that are made out of natural energy. The user can do whatever he/she wants with them, this can vary from simply constricting the enemy or even killing them.

Note: Useable Twice per battle and must be in Sage Mode.

Declined. Already An Existing Jutsu

 

[KeotsuEclipse]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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Prometheus’ Chains (Sokubaku Jukei Hanshin)
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: Zero
Description: The user sends a massive, extremely fast, but very short pulse of chakra through the ground that travels up anything touching the ground. If the opponent is in any kind of contact, no matter how small, with the ground when the chakra wave passes by, the jutsu activates. Because of the wave of chakra, it fires up in a double helix formation, and binds to the opponent(s). It wraps around the captured’s feet, legs, thighs, midsection, upper arms, forearms, hands, neck, and around the finer joints, and in-between the fingers themselves. The double helix then solidifies, forming near-unbreakable (destroyable with S rank and above Fire) chakra chains. The chains can either restrict the captured’s movement where they are, or pull them onto a rock, or the ground itself, depending on which direction the user wants the chains to come from, and restrain them there. The chains last indefinitely, at a cost of an additional 20 chakra per turn. This jutsu can only be used three times per battle, but can capture as many people as possible in a single use, as long as they are in contact with the ground, or something touching the ground. The user must maintain some kind of contact with the ground to keep the captured, captured. Likewise, if the user breaks contact with the ground, the chains hold on the opponent breaks.

*declinedremove highlighted and limit twice per battle

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Prometheus’ Chains (Sokubaku Jukei Hanshin)
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: Zero
Description: The user sends a massive, extremely fast, but very short pulse of chakra through the ground that travels up anything touching the ground. If the opponent is in any kind of contact, no matter how small, with the ground when the chakra wave passes by, the jutsu activates. Because of the wave of chakra, it fires up in a double helix formation, and binds to the opponent(s). It wraps around the captured’s feet, legs, thighs, midsection, upper arms, forearms, hands, neck, and around the finer joints, and in-between the fingers themselves. The double helix then solidifies, forming near-unbreakable (destroyable with S rank and above Fire) chakra chains. The chains can either restrict the captured’s movement where they are, or pull them onto a rock, or the ground itself, depending on which direction the user wants the chains to come from, and restrain them there. This jutsu can only be used two times per battle, but can capture as many people as possible in a single use, as long as they are in contact with the ground, or something touching the ground. The user must maintain some kind of contact with the ground to keep the captured, captured. Likewise, if the user breaks contact with the ground, the chains hold on the opponent breaks.

Um, about your above post too...you said no other anime references, but Prometheus is mythology...Does that mean I need to change the name?

Mythology is fine, but saying it's Kenpachi sword from bleach is too much.

PendingSpeak to Grimm, i believe he has a jutsu similar to this.
Hells: This is a sealing jutsu

 

[Kiba Inuzuka]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Summoning: Rashomon (口寄せ・羅生門, Kuchiyose: Rashōmon; English TV "Summoning Jutsu: Rashomon")
B-rank
Type: B-rank Defensive
Chakra cost: 70
Damage Points:none
This summoning creates a demonic form of the main gate of old Kyoto which is capable of blocking almost any attack. It was believed that two people were required to summon it, as both Sakon and Ukon did; however, Orochimaru was able to summon three of these gates by himself with his Summoning: Triple Rashomon. To do so, he simply used both hands, instead of one as is common in a summoning

*sakon and ukon can use this
*can be use 2 time

*Declined* Jutsu Exist. Cannon jutsu cannot be customized.


(bakuha anaboko) blast hole
Rank A
Type:Attack
Range:low-long
Chakra cost: 70
Damage Points:70
Descrption:This jutsu is a blast out of the user plam of water that go 400 mph if this touch any thing or any one this can blast right in it and make a hole.
(this 1 is for m new bio)


Declined

Hiramekarei Unleashing
Rank A
Type:Attack/Supplementary
Range: short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Descrption: Chōjūrō unleashes his sword Hiramekarei, shaping chakra around it to form a giant hammer. This causes the bandages that are wrapped around the sword to unravel,and can blast a hole in a wall

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Approved

 

[Yagura]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Genjutsu: Akuma Kon Kagami ) - Illusion Technique: Demon Soul Mirror
Rank: S
Type: Defense
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage cost: 80(-80 to user)
Description: When the user is in a genjutsu, the opponent only sees the bijuu of the jinchuuriki roaring, making the opponents genjutsu disturbed and cancels the genjutsu. The user gets the same damage as to the opponent's as a side effect for the jutsu. The jutsu can only be used 3 times and cannot be used again during the fight. The user can re-use the jutsu after 2 turns.

Note - Only jinchuurikis are allowed to use the jutsu.
- Can be used without the use of bijuu mode.
*declinedremove damge and limit to once per battle.

(Genjutsu: Akuma Kon Kagami ) - Illusion Technique: Demon Soul Mirror
Rank: S
Type: Defense
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage cost: n/a
Description: When the user is in a genjutsu, the opponent only sees the bijuu of the jinchuuriki roaring, making the opponents genjutsu disturbed and cancels the genjutsu. The jutsu can only be used once and cannot be used again during the fight..

Note - Only jinchuurikis are allowed to use the jutsu.
- Can be used without the use of bijuu mode.


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(Sandaime No Yoroi) - The Third`s Shield

Rank:S
Typeefense
Range:Long
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:N/A
Description: A huge statue of the third Kazekage that is made from the hardest minerals of Iron Sand and is very hard to break into.

Approved

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(Satetsu Rou) - Sand Prison

Rank:A
Type:Supplementary/Attack/Defense
Range:Short-Long
Chakra cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: A huge sphere of iron sand that traps the opponent in and then crushes them. Can also be used to protect the user from incoming attacks.


Declined______________________________________________________________

(Satetsu Kadou Tsunami no Jutsu) - Iron Sand: Vortex Tsunami Technique
Rank:S
Type:Supplementary/Attack
Range:Short-Long
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:A highly advanced technique that draws all the Iron Sand into one point, this single point spins at high speeds, so high that they begin to pull the opponent into them. The final effect of this technique is a swirling storm of Iron Sand mixed with senbon that crushes towards an opponent in a fierce tidal wave like motion.
The speeds that this vortex spins at are so fast that it is able to cut through armor. This technique, once sent out is almost impossible to stop and will continue going until the chakra supporting it runs out. As a downside, the storm will chase down an opponent and anything near an opponent, including the user of the jutsu .

You just copied a rain jutsu and added iron sand -_-

Super Declined

 

[Kaze..]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Katon: Daienkai)- Fire style: Great Flame Commandment
Type:Attack/Defense
Rank:S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:By Gathering Fire Charka throughout his body Kaze then forms a series of an signs an creates a gigantic fireball resembling the sun. The Fireball has great destructive power when it hits its target. Because of its size the fireball with absorb any blast of lesser size.
Note: Not the Size of the sun just resembles it in appearance
Note: A Large amount of Water is needed to put this jutsu out
Jutsu looks Like

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DeclinedSimilar Jutsu exist.

 

[Daemon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Suiton: Kihou Oshi Mizu Kyanon )- Water Style:High Pressure Water Cannon
Type:Attack
Rank:S
RangeShort:-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:User Must have Gamatatsu summoned. While Gamatatsu is summoned the User stands on top of Gamatatsu's Head.Then they Concentrate their water chakra in their stomachs and moves it up the esophagus into their mouths. They Spit out a highly condensed water cannon that is capable of slicing a giant boulder in half.This jutsu can drown out Fire/wind combos.
-Can only be used by ~Minato~
-Must know how to summon toads
- this jutsu can only be used 3 times per battle.


Approved

(Suiton:Kyousei Mizu KamiKiri) - Water Style: Great Water God Slicer
Type:Attack
Rank:S
RangeShort:-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:This is a more highly condensed form of "Water Style: Water God Slicer".
-Can only be used by ~Minato~


Declined

 

[-Ventus-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Summoning:Toad swarm
Type:Supplementary
Rank:B
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:25
Description:The user will summon a swarm of toads from everywhere
*Only be used once*
*Only shinn can use this jutsu*


Declined

Toad art:Toad Clone
Type:Supplementary
Rank:B
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:25
Description:The summoned toad will create a shadow clone of himself.
*Only shinn can use this jutsu*


Declined

Toad Art:Toad Clone Explosion
Type:Supplementary
Rank:A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Description:The summoned toad will create a shadow clone of himself that can be exploded by summoned toad(the larger the bigger explosion O_O)
*Only shinn can use this jutsu*


Declined

Sage Art:Toad elder Call
Type:Supplementar
Rank:A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Description:The user will summon fukasaku and shima.The two toad sennin are then suummoned in the shoulder of the user while in sage mode.Ma nad pa will then gather the natural energy because the user cannot cause the user won't be able too because of moving too much.The turns of sage are not change(The ssge mode turn will always remain 4 turns)
*note:the user will not be affected of genjutsu because of there are ma and pa can put threr chakra on the user to break the genjutsu


Declined

Sage Art:Earth Control
Type:Supplementary/Defensive
Rank:S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:The user will emit a portion of his natural energy and bind it in the ground.Thus allowing him to control the earth by his will it will also let the user feel anything that would affect the ground(ex:the user goesunderground the user will feel the disturbance becaus eof the natural chakra he emited)the user will also be able to tell where the enemy is because of the natural chakra he emited.


Declined
*Only be used once*
*Last 3 turns*
*takes 1 turn of sage mode*
*Must be in sage mode*
*Only shinn can use this jutsu*
*Must be in sage mode*

 

[Emperor]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Doton: Rasen-shindou ) Earth Release : Impact Sphere

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Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short:-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
The user creates a huge sphere made of Earth, which is extremely heavy, and drops it on the ground. The weight of the sphere causes the ground, starting from the point it was at, to shatter and release a huge cloud of dust and makes rocks fly to the sides. The sphere then disintegrates into a number of sharp rocks which fly at the opponent. The sphere, being made of Earth, absorbs any water it touches, making it heavier and increasing its effects.
~ This jutsu can only be used once per battle.
~ Costs 15 damage to user

Approved

( Kiri Senpuu ) Mist Tornado

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Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 35
Damage Points: N/A
Once the user creates a mist by using Hidden Mist Technique ( or any variants of mist with custom techniques ) the user charges their chakra with the mist to make it surround the opponent in a huge tornado. This does no damage to the opponent, but thickens the mist around the opponent completely, leaving no mist anywhere else. Should the opponent attempt blowing the mist away, the user can charge 25 chakra to reform the tornado.
~ Costs 10 chakra per turn to user

Limit it's usage

(Soukei-shou ) Complete Annihilation

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Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short:-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
The user heats the surface of any large water source with their fire chakra, causing a differential heating scenario. This causes the air above the water source to spiral around in a vast tornado, much like the formations of cyclones/hurricanes on the sea. The user then guides the hurricane to the opponent's location by using Wind chakra, causing the opponent to face a huge swirling mass of wind, over five stories in height, with winds blowing at over 750 kmph. The tornado, unlike most wind tornadoes, will merely use any fire directed at it to turn itself into a fire tornado, true to the characteristic of hurricanes being " a dynamo with no off-switch ".
~ This jutsu can only be used once per battle.
~ Requires a large water source
~ If the user is near the tornado in its movement, it will attack the user as well
~ User takes 50 damage
~ User can only use one other technique in the turn this is used

DeclinedOped

 

[Artimis]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Custom Weapon: X-Gloves
Rank: S
Range: Short
Type: Weapon
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user puts on Special Gloves Called X-Gloves,When the user infuses with fire chakra the gloves give the use the power to do more and stronger fire jutus but the back draw is once the gloves are on the user can only do fire jutus any other element jutus would result in the user hand catching fire being burned by his own weapon

*These gloves can only be used by Mato~kun*
*Gloves can be removed but must be done by another jutus*
*The fire jutus are stronger by one whole rank so any B rank fire jutus with the gloves would be a A rank fire jutus and any A rank would be a S rank.


DeclinedOped

X Glover Levitation
Rank: B
Range: long
Type: Weapon
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description Once the user has equipped there self with the X Glover this jutus will give the user the ability to fly. This Justus work by making the flames for the gloves fire down warder towards the ground giving them the power to take flight. The back draw to this jutus is while the user is in the air he is unable to perform any jutsu that require handsigns because if the user would to try any he would fall because the gloves would not be pointing down anymore.
*These just can only be used by Mato~kun*
*This jutus cant be performed without the X Gloves


DeclinedGet the x gloves approved first, then try this again.

 

[aishwary]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Before you start asking me in vms, NO you are not starting over, NO you don't have to resubmit.
I was instructed to close the previous thread, since it had too many posts of members who aren't here now, for obvious reasons of safety as many would try to copy them.
The group will be restored after Nexus is done checking it.

~Thanks.

oh kay

 

[aishwary]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Buki Kuchiyose: Ikazuchi Oni Subeta RaiRyu )- Weapon Summoning: Thunder Demon Sword RaiRyu
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short- Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Users summons a large longsword that is infused with lightning chakra that slightly shocks anyone who touches the blade. Using their chakra, the user can send a blast of static electricity from its tip (like Ichigo’s Bankai) to attack and make the shocks even worse than they were previously.

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(Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Tigrerra Howaido Tora)-Summoning: White Tiger Tigrerra
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: User summons Tigrerra, a huge white tiger,about the size of Manda, with her battle armor on. Tigrerra can use her fierce claws and teeth to destroy whole forests, and maul the opponent to bits on the user’s command.

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(Kuchiyose: Tigrerra’s Howaido Toras) Summoning: Tigrerra’s White Tigers
Rank: B
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short- Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: User summons several white tigers who obey their queen, Tigrerra, a huge white tiger, about the size of Manda, with her battle armor on. They use their fierce claws and teeth to destroy whole forests as well as maul their opponent to bits on the user’s command.

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type;water /attack ATTACK: rotating involute range:long chakra:40 damage:80 discription: it rotate as an opening involute & is more powerful near water area it has a high speed flowing water which can cut a mountain sharply


Declined You cannot create custom jutsu with your current rank.

 

[Nadare]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kuchiyose:Fukurou Taishou:Fukuroubunta ) - Summoning: Owl Boss: Fukuroubunta
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range:N/A
Chakra Cost: 40
Description:The user bites his finger, and then puts it on the neck, where there is a tatoo saying ''Nasu sore Yuki''(make it snow).There is a loud bang and a white cloud appereas around the user.When it clears, there is a giant owl standing behind the user. Fukuroubunta is about 20 meter high, and weights about 1 ton. The user can fly on it, or it can attack the enemy, or it can even be used to crush buildings or walls.It can create wind by swinging it's wings.
*Note: can only be used by the owners of the contract.*

Approved

(Kuchiyose:Fukurou Chiisai Touzoku) - Summoning: Tiny Owl Thief
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range:N/A
Chakra Cost: 20
Description:The user bites his finger, and then puts it on the neck, where there is a tatoo saying ''Nasu sore Yuki''(make it snow).There is a tiny bang and a white cloud appereas around the user.When it clears, there is a tiny owl standing on the user's shoulder. Chiisai is about 20 cm high, and weights about 0.5 kg. The user can send it as a messenger.It is also very usefull at tracking because it can whatch a huge area from above, wtihout to be seen. It can attack smaller beings, but it isn't meant to kill them but to distract them.
*Note: can only be used by the owners of the contract.*

Approved

 

[Shig]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Weapon Arts: Dance of the Serpent [Tsurugi no Gigei: Hebi no Buyo]

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Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40 ( +10 for each scale that the enemy gets hit with.)
Description: After it gets slammed in the ground, Kouryuu will transform in a small serpent-like creature, that can travel towards the enemy unseen during the battle.After Kouryuu reaches the enemy it blows up sending all the sharp scales it posseses upon the enemy.
- May be used four times per battle.
- Must possess Kouryuu in order to use this Dance.

Declined

Ninja Art: Scale Regeneration [Ninpou: Shakudo Saisei]

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Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: -
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: -
Description: After placing his hand on Kouryuu, the user emits chakra waves on the sword, and the scales start regenerating.
- May be used once per battle.
- It takes a whole turn for all the scales to be regenerated.
- It requires the user's hand on the sword the whole time during the regeneration.
- Must possess Kouryuu in order to use this technique.

Approved

Weapon Arts: Dance of Power [Tsurugi no Gigei: Ryoku no Buyo]

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Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80 (+10 to the user)
Description: After Kouryuu is slammed in the ground, the ground starts shooting out giant sharp scales, that stab can pierce through diamond.After the technique ends, the scales return into Kouryuu.
- May be used once per battle.
- Kouryuu cannot use any Tsurugi no Gigei techs for 3 rounds.
- Kouryuu must be in the ground at all times.
- Must possess Kouryuu in order to use this technique.

Pending

 

[-Naruto Uzumaki-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Sage Art: Nature's Defense (Senpo: Kidate Difensu)
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defense
Range: Short (Mid if used for offensive purposes)
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A (60 if used for offensive purposes)
Description: The user releases a fair amount of natural energy from their body, manipulating it to surround them in the form of a spiraling sphere. The powerful rotating sphere is capable of protecting the user from very powerful elemental ninjutsus. By performing a certain hand seal, the user can make the sphere expand outward in all directions in order to collide into and damage anyone or anything in range. The user can execute jutsus while within the protection of the sphere.
~Can only be used twice per battle
~Lasts one full turn unless the user makes the sphere expand
~User must be in Sage Mode
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~Declined~
Specify which powerful elemental ninjutsus it can block. Make it S-rank

 

[Caliburn]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Amakakeru Ryū no Hirameki) - Heavens Gliding Dragon Flash -

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Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short/Medium
Chakra cost: 60
Damage Points: 120 (-15 for the user and -5, -10 or -20 depending on the amounts of spins)
Description: The user grabs the hilt of Yubashiri with his right hand and he grabs the scabbard of it with his left hand, while Yubashiri is still in its scabbard at the users left hip. The user then starts to focus enormous amounts of chakra into both his arms and into the scabbard. Then the user pulls out Yubashiri from its scabbard with extreme force, but he does this at the exact same time he makes a step forward with his left foot. As a result the momentum from the step goes over into the horizontal slash, making it even stronger. This is the fastest supersonic slash in the world, it's impossible to see for the opponent, even the user can't see his sword clearly. Due to its speed it's impossible to dodge it and due to its strength it's impossible to block, it would shatter any other weapon in an instant. Of course this only counts if the opponent is close. In the rare case the opponent still would succeed in it, the momentum from the step forward is used by the user to spin around his axis. This way he can come in for a second attack, even stronger than the first one, because it now uses the strength of the spin too. Because the force of the sword is so strong, it kicks all the air molecules away, creating a vacuum. This vacuum sucks then everything in from outside, including the opponent. The opponent can't move and can't preform any jutsu when this happens, he is sucked into the vacuum and into the path of the sword. When the user comes in for a second attack, the opponent is hit.
This technique can also be used as defence, because the vacuum can also suck in things like kunai and shuriken, also non-solid jutsu's like fire, water, wind, lightning, mud can be sucked into the vacuum. When the user stops rotating, these jutsu's are blasted outwards with extreme force. These spins are extremely fast.

*Due to the enormous strain that is put on the body, the user takes -15 damage, the strain is comparable to the effects of the 8 Inner Gates*
*The amount of damage on the user can rise, depending on how much the user spins. This also counts for the jutsu's it can absorb:

1. One spin = standard, the vacuum can absorb up to B-rank jutsu's
2. Two spins = the user takes -5 additional damage, the vacuum can absorb up to A-rank jutsu's
3. Three spins = the user takes -10 additional damage in total, the vacuum can absorb up to S-rank jutsu's
4. Four spins = the user takes -20 additional damage in total, the vacuum can absorb up to Forbidden-rank jutsu's

Earth jutsu's that are still bound to the earth will not be sucked into the vacuum, because they are connected to the earth. However if the jutsu's looses connection with the earth, the chunks are sucked in nontheless*
*Four spins is the maximum*
*Can only be used once per battle*
*Can only be used by Caliburn*
*Can only be used with Yubashiri*
*The slash of the sword only works short-range, however it can suck things in from mid-range and sends them back mid-range*
*Yubashiri can't be used anymore for any jutsu's during the entire battle*
*The user can't use any forbidden-rank taijutsu the next three turns*

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First picture of the vacuum that is created, the second one of the attack after the first spin

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*declinedsorry kenshin, but Oped and Kinjutsu

Note: I don't care if I have to put even more restrictions on it, but I will make this technique approved >.<

(Kaguzuchi) - Fire-Producing Spirit God -

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Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user pulls out Yubashiri from its scabbard, but then the user slides the blade along the metal edge(from the guard to the tip) of the scabbard. Yubashiri is an ancient sword that killed thousends of men and creatures across the ages and absorbed their fat into the blade. Fat is very flammable, thus due to the friction with the metal edge, Yubashiri is set on fire. Yubashiri gets surrounded by quick-spinning mini-cyclone of fire, this fire is extremely hot and can even melt boulders and other metal weapons when it collides with them and the user keeps pressuring on the boulder/weapon with Yubashiri.

*Can only be used by Caliburn*
*Can only be used with Yubashiri*
*Can only be used twice per battle*
*This not a fire-jutsu, this is real natural fire, thus making it stronger than fire made by jutsu's (it's the same as with Kirin)*

*ApprovedUm it wouldn't be stronger than natural fire. Fire and electricity (specifically raition and lightning work completely differently) Also i've edited so that effects last one turn.

(Kuzu-Ryūsen) - Nine-headed Dragon Strike -

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Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user grabs Yubashiri with two hands and holds the sword in front of him. The user then runs at the opponent at great speed (though still less than Raikage's Raiton Armour, Minato Namikaze and the Inner Gates). However when he reaches the opponent, he hits the opponent at nine different places (Head, shoulders, wrists, both sides of the waist, between the legs, and the chest) with such speed that it is almost like he hits them simultaneously. It's impossible to block or avoid this attack with only another weapon or sword-attack. The final attack of this technique is so fast the opponent doesn't even see the user moving from its standard place to all nine targets.

*Can only be used by Caliburn*
*Can only be used with Yubashiri*
*Can only be used twice per battle*

The attack:

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The attack when it hits the opponent:

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*DeclinedOped

(Tenrai Kiritentou) - Divine Slash of the Heavens -

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Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: S-Forbidden
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra cost: 40 (+10 if it is forbidden)
Damage points: 80 (+20 if is forbidden)
Description: The user grabs the hilt of his sword that's still in its scabbard. The user starts to focus their chakra into the scabbard. Then he pulls the sword out if it, aiming at the opponent. Instantly a vertical slash is released from the sword that travels at the opponent with incredible speed. This slash is strong enough to cut through almost everything, but it can only go in one straight line. The slash doesn't only appear above ground, but also underground with the same lenght as above. The slash is so powerful it cuts almost through anything, it's so strong that it creates shockwaves on the left and right of the slash.
The user can also, instead of normal chakra, infusing the scabbard and the sword with chakra of the five basic elements. When this is the case, this becomes a forbidden-rank jutsu for the respective element with all its strenghts and weaknesses.

*Can only be used with swords made by Caliburn and with Yubashiri*
*Chakra slashes can only be used three times*
*Elemental slashes can only be used once and only with one element*
*Depending on the element used, the user can't use that element in the next turn*

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*Declined
~abit oped O_O~

This one already got approved, but I changed the part about being stronger than normal fire jutsu as you asked, so this doesn't count as one of my five customs.

(Kaguzuchi) - Fire-Producing Spirit God -

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Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user pulls out Yubashiri from its scabbard, but then the user slides the blade along the metal edge(from the guard to the tip) of the scabbard. Yubashiri is an ancient sword that killed thousends of men and creatures across the ages and absorbed their fat into the blade. Fat is very flammable, thus due to the friction with the metal edge, Yubashiri is set on fire. Yubashiri gets surrounded by quick-spinning mini-cyclone of fire, this fire is extremely hot and can even melt boulders and other metal weapons when it collides with them and the user keeps pressuring on the boulder/weapon with Yubashiri.

*Can only be used by Caliburn*
*Can only be used with Yubashiri*
*Can only be used twice per battle*
*This not a fire-jutsu, this is real natural fire*

Hells: ~Approved~

Grimm said that this one was only slight OP and that I should reduce the amount of uses for getting it approved. It used to be 3 chakra slash and 1 elemental slash, so 4 in total. I made it 2 in total now, though it can be both chakra/elemental.

(Tenrai Kiritentou) - Divine Slash of the Heavens -

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Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: S-Forbidden
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra cost: 40 (+10 if it is forbidden)
Damage points: 80 (+20 if is forbidden)
Description: The user grabs the hilt of his sword that's still in its scabbard. The user starts to focus their chakra into the scabbard. Then he pulls the sword out if it, aiming at the opponent. Instantly a vertical slash is released from the sword that travels at the opponent with incredible speed. This slash is strong enough to cut through almost everything, but it can only go in one straight line. The slash doesn't only appear above ground, but also underground with the same lenght as above. The slash is so powerful it cuts almost through anything, it's so strong that it creates shockwaves on the left and right of the slash.
The user can also, instead of normal chakra, infusing the scabbard and the sword with chakra of the five basic elements. When this is the case, this becomes a forbidden-rank jutsu for the respective element with all its strenghts and weaknesses. If the user only focuses normal chakra, he doesn't need to focus into the scabbard, but can do it just in the blade.

*Can only be used with swords made by Caliburn and with Yubashiri*
*Can only be used twice*
*Depending on the element used, the user can't use that element in the next turn*

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Hells: i agree wit goro. i think u should remove the cut tru almost anything part

Still Declined. Remove the elemental part, for it becomes a kinjutsu. Not to mention your rank doesn't allow you to use Forbidden jutsu.

(Ryu Tsui Sen) - Dragon Hammer Flash -

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Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: S
Range: Short/Medium
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user focuses chakra in both his legs and by bending his legs while he's focusing chakra, he builds up momentum (just like with a flikker of a finger) and then he jumps up till a maximum height of 10 meters. The user grabs his sword with both hands and starts to focus chakra in it. When the user goes down he makes a vertical slash right on the opponent, using the force of the gravity to make the slash a lot stronger then when he would do it on the ground. The strength this generates is enough to cut the opponent almost vertically in half, however there is more. When the user does the slash, the chakra that was focused in the sword is forced to the tip of the blade, where it is released as a shockwave at the point of impact, making the damage even higher. This shockwave can also be used as a defence to block an opponents attack when the user stays on the ground, though he can also block them when he's in the air, but then his attack is aborted.

*Can only be used by Caliburn*
*Can only be used by Yubashiri and swords made by Caliburn*
*Can only be used three times per battle*

Hells: ~Approved~ it does not seem that oped =/ i have seen this kind of move is most animes that have samurai fighting. caliburn is just makin it more naruto contect

(Doton: Do Ryu Sen) - Earth style: Earth Dragon Flash -

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Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: A
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user grabs his sword with one hand and poins it to the air, while the user focuses doton-based chakra into the sword. The user then slams the sword on the ground, creating a shockwave that travels straight to the opponent. However this shockwave rips large chunks of earth from the ground and catapults them at the opponent, bombarding his entire body. So the opponent is hit both by a shockwave and large chunks of earth.

*Can only be used by Caliburn*
*Can only be used with Yubashiri and swords made by Caliburn*

Approved


(Kaigan Yubashiri: Keijikatana Akumakingu) - Awaking of Yubashiri: The Apocalyptic Sword of The Demon-King -

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Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The chains that were stripped around Yubashiri break (if the chains were still around it) and are catapulted away into all directions, slamming on the earth violently causing craters into it. Yubashiri has a set of unique effects. The sword itself can change its own temperature, making it as hot as the sun or as cold as on Antarctica and can instantly switch between them. Of course this only does damage if it touches the opponent. The sword itself was already physically indestructable, but now it's completely immune to everything else (fire, wind, poison, etc. the user can still be harmed, but it doesn't affect the sword). It can also be infused with all kinds of chakra. Another special effect is that it automatically detects even the slightest temperature fluctuations (heat<->cold) and that includes if it just pops up somewhere, but it does not sense chakra. By a spiritual bond Yubashiri lets the user knows this info, this is not a sense.
Every jutsu that needs a sword to be used gets +25 damage if preformed with Yubashiri.
Also Yubashiri acts like a lightning rod, it can completely nullify E-D rank lightning jutsu's. Higher lightning jutsu's still do normal damage, however Yubashiri directs some of it away, just enough to make the user survive if hit directly with one. Lightning based custom weapons have no effect at all.

*Can only be wielded by Caliburn*
*If anyone else touches it, he gets burned or frozen*

Declined Oped to the extreme. The highlighted portion says way, although the entire jutsu could have been highlighted.

 

[Sora.]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Doton:gesuidou (earth style: drain)
Type:Supplementary
Rank:S
Range: Long
Chakra Cost:60
Damage Points:N/A
Description: By slamming their hand to the earth all sources of water will be drained away from the battlefield, (this includes mud) and any water left over from a jutsu, only water jutsu that require no source can be used This jutsu is very simple but can be very effective.

*Lasts 5 turns
*only taught by Sora
*Only water jutsu that require no source may be used for 5 turns during the activation of this jutsu
*useable twice per battle

Declined Change the amount of turns it last.