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Seijin Genkotsu | Sage Fist
Type: SenTaijutsu
Background: After Hashirama finished learning Senjutsu from Jiraiya-sensei, he moved on his on to develop his fighting style and enhances every bit of it with Senjutsu. One day, while Hashirama was wandering in Konoha, he came to find a young Hyuuga practicing the Hyuuga's infamous, Gentle Fist. It wasn't the first time he has ever seen or heard about Gentle Fist, but it certainly was the first time after learning Senjutsu. He was fascinated by the concept of the Hyuuga which is to inject chakra in the opponent's tenketsu in order to stop the chakra flow, a really smart concept. One that he decided to take and develop even more with Senjutsu.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: The Sage Fist is really similar yet really distinctive from Gentle Fist. While it has the same concept, which is injecting a kind of chakra or energy inside the opponent's body to do a certain effect, the energy used in the art is Natural Energy. Using any mean of Hand to Hand combat, whether it would be with a fist like gentle fist, a punch, a kick or anything really. It is just a mean of conduction to Natural Energy and by delivering the attack, the user would inject Senjutsu into the opponent's body, causing the part of the body which is attacked to turn into stone upon impact due to their inability to withstand Natural Energy.

Example Techniques:


Sage Fist: Punch
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range:Short
Chakra: 10
Damage: 20
Description: The users delivers a regular punch to the opponent's stomach, injecting natural energy in the said part and causing it to turn into stone upon impact.

Additional effects and Restrictions:
-Given how it depends on the opponent's inability to withstand natural energy, if it is done against someone whose body is used to Natural energy like other Senjutsu users, Juugo or the Valentines, then the natural energy has no effect, although the physical attack would still has effect.
-Can only be used by Sage Mode users


✦ Declined, this is really too OPed to allow because of what the effects themself are; one hit and they're turning into stone and note that you even said on impact; if they counter said attack with Taijutsu, they're still turning into stone. Dis tew much. ✦
Seijin Genkotsu | Sage Fist
Type: SenTaijutsu
Background: After Hashirama finished learning Senjutsu from Jiraiya-sensei, he moved on his on to develop his fighting style and enhances every bit of it with Senjutsu. One day, while Hashirama was wandering in Konoha, he came to find a young Hyuuga practicing the Hyuuga's infamous, Gentle Fist. It wasn't the first time he has ever seen or heard about Gentle Fist, but it certainly was the first time after learning Senjutsu. He was fascinated by the concept of the Hyuuga which is to inject chakra in the opponent's tenketsu in order to stop the chakra flow, a really smart concept. One that he decided to take and develop even more with Senjutsu.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: The Sage Fist is really similar yet really distinctive from Gentle Fist. While it has the same concept, which is injecting a kind of chakra or energy inside the opponent's body to do a certain effect, the energy used in the art is Natural Energy. Using any mean of Hand to Hand combat, whether it would be with a fist like gentle fist, a punch, a kick or anything really. It is just a mean of conduction to Natural Energy and by delivering the attack, the user would inject Senjutsu into the opponent's body. Being a foreign chakra that con only be controlled by select few, when natural energy hits the opponent's chakra system, it would cause interruption of the chakra flow which would lead to varying effects, from normal shock and stun to paralyzes to even turning the attacked part into stone after some time (it would take effect at least one turn after the hit), the effects depend on the technique used. The interruption of chakra would lead the opponents not able to mold chakra in the part that was hit.

Example Techniques:

Sage Fist: Punch
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range:Short
Chakra: 10
Damage: 20
Description: The users delivers a regular punch to the opponent's stomach, injecting natural energy in the said part and causing it to turn into stone upon impact.

Additional effects and Restrictions:
-Given how it depends on the opponent's inability to withstand natural energy, if it is done against someone whose body is used to Natural energy like other Senjutsu users, Juugo or the Valentines, then the natural energy has no effect, although the physical attack would still has effect.
-Can only be used by Senjutsu users; Sage Users, Valentines, etc...


Changed the bold.



✦ Declined, I don't DNR often but that was one last cycle lol. You can turn this into a single CJ if you wish but not a CFS. DNR ✦
 
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( Ouryuujin Yarijutsu ) Serengeti Spears

Type: Bladed Bukijutsu

Background: The Serengeti Spears is a style of Kenjutsu that was based around a very specific process of honing a blade. This ancestral form has it's roots in old warring tribal clans, as they studied the nature around. Taking inspiration in the burrowing insects, especially ants, they noted the intricate patterns produced in the ground, and tried to apply them into their spears and other bladed weapons. Across many generations, they started to note quite a difference between drag of naked blades and patterned blades, and applied that knowledge into mastering the flow of the sword as it swooshed through the air.

The more they experimented, the heavier the blade seemed to be, so, naturally, they began to train themselves into wielding these seemingly ineffective but full of potential weapons. The style fused together the intricate honing ritual of complex indentations that served to trap and accumulate air as the drag increased across the blade, with the unorthodox physical regimen of motions and muscle power required to efficiently wield this drag and infuse it into their battle prowess.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: This style revolves not around a specific weapon, but around a specific alteration to bladed weapons. When honing a blade, the practitioners of this style will intricately carve out striped indentations throughout the side of the blade, which will increase the amount of drag going through the blade with every slash. This indentations, studied across millennia, are specifically engineered to collect the air around the blade, coating the sword with a vicious yet thin layer of wind, very much similar to Leaf Dragon God, which grants this style a much greater punch in terms of elemental clash, and is mainly used to counter elemental ninjutsu users.

But, because of the drag, the blade also becomes heavier to wield, and, accompanying the style come a specific set of forms and knowledge to both wield the wind-coated sword in a fast, fluid and efficient manner, but also to wield it in such a manner than the indentation do not collect air at all, giving a much greater versatility to the wielder, so much so that it can allow one to use normal kenjutsu with altered blades. While it might seem, to an oblivious bystander, that the motions are identical, a master Kenjutsu or Taijutsu practitioner will notice the minute wrist and arm motions that the practitioner of this style has to develop and perfectly execute, in order to efficiently fight. This requires extreme grace and strength, greater than a normal Kenjutsu practitioner.

Example Techniques:
( Ouryuujin Yarijutsu: Sougen Yari ) Serengeti Spears: Savannah Spear

Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user twirls his wrist while thrusting forwards, creating a spiraling sheen of wind around the blade. As the blade impales someone, the sheen is so smooth it creates a perfect circle wound. Once the blade is lodged onto an opponent, the user rests his writs, unleashing the accumulated air to widen and shred the puncture .

( Ouryuujin Yarijutsu: Sougen Katana ) Serengeti Spears: Savannah Blades

Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user slashes aimlessly at the opponent, whirling their wrist to create imperfect cuts, drawing more blood. After dealing 10 slashes, the user points their crimson blade downwards. With a flick of their wrist, the accumulate air dispels, and showering the target with their own blood, leaving the blade pristine.

( Ouryuujin Yarijutsu: Sougen Tate ) Serengeti Spears: Savannah Shield

Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user spins around, gathering wind in a loose and violent manner, creating a tornado around oneself. While the slashing and shredding power of this tornado is less refined than a normal katana, the tornado is tangible enough to push back and damage an opponent that gets too close.

Additional effects and Restrictions: Practitioners of this style possess blades that went through the ancient honing ritual. Any bladed weapon, from katana to kunai, scythe to dagger, can go through with the ritual, and as long as one is a practitioner of the style, every bladed weapon, including some CW, will be able to go through with the honing ritual. This, of course, comes as a double edged sword, as this can't be applied to indestructible CW, like the 7 swords of the Mist, both NB and Canon, nor can they be applied to CW that are not owned by the user, but merely lent. Though it means that untrained users will be unable to wield honed swords, as they will be much heavier and will not slash efficiently. As a practitioner, though, every kenjutsu technique is available and will behave as normal, due to intense training in countering the drag and air accumulation, while still being able to perform this style's technique when one wishes to.

This style has a relationship of neutrality against elemental ninjutsu, similar to Leaf Dragon God, though only when this style is used. Normal Kenjutsu techniques used through this style will behave as normal.

As a Master of this style, one is capable of, once per turn at max, execute a known Kenjutsu technique, canon or custom, while applying the necessary grace as to activate the drag and air accumulation, essentially turning a normal Kenjutsu technique into this particular form of Kenjutsu. This user also has access to a temporary honing technique, where the user spends the equivalent chakra to that of an A ranked technique ( 30 chakra ), and sustains a chakra layer that will mimic the indentations of this style, turning an indestructible or lent weapon into a honed weapon. It costs 1 move at the beginning of the technique, and the user is required to spend 1 chakra per turn for as long as one needs to have it active.


✦ Declined, was approvable until the Additional effects part; Can't allow this for CW or other special weapons as it already creates an elemental neutrality with jutsu and then the weapons effects would also factor in. Also, the honing ability needs to be removed and will have to be submitted as a technique in order to use though I can say 1 chakra per turn will certainly not be approved with it. ✦
 
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† Kamigami no Zaimushō - Treasury of the Gods †

Type: Fuuinjutsu | Bukijutsu | Kenjutsu | Ninjutsu

Background: Having fought in hundreds of battles throughout his life, winning most of them and creating thousands of weapons in the process, Archer was never satisfied, regardless of the outcome. His reliance on close combat and weaponry had served him well but, with every battle that passed, it was becoming more evident to him that times were changing. Fewer people were willing to engage in close combat and the ones that did, possessed power that far surpassed his own.

Despite his best efforts to evolve not only himself but, his battle style as well, it turned out to be futile. Simply increasing the speed at which he was able to create weapons did little to help him since he was only able to wield two weapons at a time and he still had no way of dealing with opponents who preferred to keep their distance. It was becoming a problem that affected him in battle, costing him fights due to his inability to deal with long range fighters but, that changed when he learned the art of sealing from a close friend.

Utilizing its ability to seal and unseal objects, he combined it with his weaponry to create a style that allowed him to overwhelm opponents by attacking from ranges and angles not often associated with a bukijutsu specialist.

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: This style revolves primarily around the utilization of Fuuinjutsu and Bukijutsu, focusing on the creation of seals (will be referred to as portals from this point) that allow the user to bring forth weapons (swords, tridents, lances, chains, etc,) which he is able to use for multiple purposes.

Seals/Portals

A fundamental part of the style, the portals are what makes the style so versatile, allowing the user to attack his opponent from different ranges and angles. Through precise chakra control, the user creates portals (diameter of 1m) that act as a gate, allowing weapons to pass through them (portals will be created through the use of techniques) that can be used for close or long range combat.

Short Range

Like every fighting style, there are limitations to what they can do and this style is no exception. Perhaps the biggest downside to this style, when creating portals within short range (5m or less) of their opponent, the user is unable to launch the weapons (explained below) at them but, this does not prevent them from being created altogether. While portals can be created, the weapons can only be used for supplementary purposes and close range combat, which is where the Kenjutsu aspect of the style comes into play. (When creating portals within short range of the opponent, the weapons will protrude [basically half the weapon will be seen and the other half will be in the portal] from them and can only be drawn by the user due to his chakra being present in the portal.)

Mid-Long Range

Whilst still abiding by the above limitations, the user can create portals anywhere on the battlefield (again through the appropriate technique) but, instead of using the weapons for Kenjutsu purposes, they can be launched (at the speed of shot arrows) from the portals like projectiles.​

Ninjutsu

Implemented into the style to strengthen the weapons and so that opponents may not use the weapons. Utilizing their great chakra control and ability to shape chakra, the user will coat every weapon with a compressed layer of his chakra as they leave the portal, allowing them to fight equally against elements. The other reason for this is, if the weapons are launched into the ground, they cannot be used by opponents due to the users chakra still being present within them.

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Example Techniques:

(Kamigami no Zaimushō: ) - Treasury of the Gods:
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will create several portals within short range of his opponent, each with swords protruding from it (the hilts will be protruding to allow for easy transitions between gabbing and attacking). Once the portals are created, the user can take advantage of their positioning by attacking from different angles to catch the opponent off guard.

(Kamigami no Zaimushō: ) - Treasury of the Gods:
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short (capable of launching weapons up to Long range)
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will create several portals behind him with swords protruding from them, each directed towards the opponents direction. With a swing of the hand, he can choose to launch all of them at his opponent. Alternatively, he can send them in two waves, each with a swing of the hand, in order to create a type of delayed attack.

Additional effects and Restrictions:

♒ Due to the high level of shape manipulation and compression of the chakra, the weapons will be able to fight on equal terms when interacting with elements

♒ Due to the constant usage and creation of seals, users of the style have better chakra control than the average shinobi

♒ Specialists of the style have slightly better tracking than regular shinobi in order to keep up with faster targets

♒ In order to learn this style, the person must have finished Fuuinjutsu (non-medical), Ninjutsu and Kenjutsu

♒ Can only be taught by Lee




Declined

There is no such application of sealing jutsu in this style, this is merely the creation of portals and weapons out of thin air. This would be more akin to a Space Time than sealing.

More to the point of a custom fighting style, there is no martial application either. Simply having weapons inside the submission does not make this a fighting style that follows the rules. Summoning weapons be them projectile in nature or melee does not make a custom fighting style. I also believe that this line collides with another technique of fighting style based off the Fate Series (It may be one owned by Mathias as I was told) so there's the collision with that.

There is little difference between this and Tenten's series of weapon summoning techniques or simply sealing weapons inside of a scroll with the generic sealing technique. You can summon a multitude of projectile or melee weapons with over a dozen ninjutsu techniques in the canon list.

The addition of chakra around the weapons as they exit their "portals" which give them equivalency to elemental natures is not something I personally agree with. I was told it could be allowed in cases like this to make a CFS not be weak against elemental natures. However, honestly you'd be better off if you were coating the weapons with elemental natures rather than pure raw chakra. The level of shape manipulation you suggest is nothing spectacular to warrant equivalency, though it could work. Your way of wording it was just not great.

If you're going to resubmit this you're going to want to make it so there is a clear difference between the generic weapon summoning techniques that already exist canonically. Make sure you use fuinjutsu properly and make it so there is something that gives semblance to an actual style of fighting.


 
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Flight of the Sonic Arrow-(Hishou no Furaito)

Type: Ototon Kyūjutsu

Background:

The style is based upon the tales of a shinobi named Apollo. He was one of two twin shinobi of legend from the time of the Rikoudou Sennin. The elder twin was named Apollo, and was referred to as Taiyō no kami (God of the Sun). Apollo was famed for using the sun's rays to mask the approach of his arrows, and was a fine master of the art of Kyūjutsu. This was not the extent of his talent however, as he was also called Ongaku no kami (God of Music). Eventually, after reading tales of his exploits, modern shinobi sought to merge his two skills. Hence, Flight of the Sonic Arrow was created, and passed down until the present

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

The user of the style utilizes sound release, in conjunction with archery in two specific ways. The first way, is the utilization of special arrows, with speakers attached instead of arrow heads. These speakers are capable of releasing destructive sound waves, upon physical contact which propagate through the target after they make physical contact. The Sound waves can either be similar in composition to (Ototon: Oto no Ken) - Sound Release: Sonic Fist or to (Ototon: Shinsei) - Sound Release: Divinity, depending on the specific situation.

Moreover, users of this fighting style utilize a specific kind of bow. It looks to be a combination of a Lyre (Apollo's signature instrument), and a normal bow.
An arrow is loaded into one of the four strings, pulled back, and fired. Then, the sound of the bow string drawing back would create a sweet sound, pleasing to the ears. Very unlike the short sharp sound of a normal now and Arrow. The sound would begin to infuse the arrow with Ototon chakra, in a similar manner to (Ototon: Chūnyū no Jutsu) - Sound Release: Infusion Technique. The sound of the arrow, as it nears the opponent is able to trigger specific hindering affects on the opponent, depending upon the specific technique, the effects may vary.

Furthermore, in a more freeform aspect, the user's of this style become proficient at using bows in close range. Augmenting their taijutsu, by using their bows to attack as make shift staves. Moreover, this allows the user to be able to quickly load and shoot arrows, even in the midst of taijutsu battles.

Example Techniques:

Flight of the Sonic Arrow-(Rage of Apollo)
Type: Offense
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user loads a special arrow, with a small speaker at the tip instead of an arrow head. The Arrow is then shot at the opponent, and as it makes physical contact with him, would release numerous sonic waves of low frequency but extremely high amplitude, similar to those found in (Ototon: Oto no Ken) - Sound Release: Sonic Fist. The sound waves spread through the point of impact, causing extreme bruising. Depending upon the targeted area (if it is near the head, or heart), the attack may prove fatal. This is because, the sound waves are meant to target soft tissue.

Additional effects and Restrictions:

Users of this style due to constantly wielding bows have grown accustomed to nocking, and firing arrows. Hours of practice have allowed them be able to load and fire a bow in the time it would take normal shinobi to throw a kunai. Moreover, archers would of course be able to logically perceive and react to higher speeds.


✦ Declined, sorry but not approving more Archery based styles. ✦
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Flight of the Sonic Arrow-(Hishou no Furaito)

Type: Ototon Kyūjutsu

Background:

The style is based upon the tales of a shinobi named Apollo. He was one of two twin shinobi of legend from the time of the Rikoudou Sennin. The elder twin was named Apollo, and was referred to as Taiyō no kami (God of the Sun). Apollo was famed for using the sun's rays to mask the approach of his arrows, and was a fine master of the art of Kyūjutsu. This was not the extent of his talent however, as he was also called Ongaku no kami (God of Music). Eventually, after reading tales of his exploits, modern shinobi sought to merge his two skills. Hence, Flight of the Sonic Arrow was created, and passed down until the present

Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

The user of the style utilizes sound release, in conjunction with archery in two specific ways. The first way is through sounds released from the bow string itself instead of infusing Arrows with chakra. The sounds released from the bow string could take the form of destructive soundwaves, forming themselves into physical shapes composed of sound chakra, or simple shockwaves. The Sound waves can either be similar in composition to (Ototon: Oto no Ken) - Sound Release: Sonic Fist or to (Ototon: Shinsei) - Sound Release: Divinity, depending on the specific situation. The soundwaves can cause either soft tissue damage to tissue, or would deal damage to physical objects.

Moreover, users of this fighting style utilize a specific kind of bow. It looks to be a combination of a Lyre (Apollo's signature instrument), and a normal bow.
An arrow is loaded into one of the four strings, pulled back, and fired. Then, the sound of the bow string drawing back would create a sweet sound, pleasing to the ears. Very unlike the short sharp sound of a normal now and Arrow. The sound would begin to infuse the arrow with Ototon chakra, in a similar manner to (Ototon: Chūnyū no Jutsu) - Sound Release: Infusion Technique. The sound of the arrow flying through the air, as it nears the opponent is able to trigger specific hindering affects on the opponent, depending upon the specific technique, the effects may vary. Of course, the bow and arrows themselves are never actually infused with chakra.

Furthermore, in a more freeform aspect, the user's of this style become proficient at using bows in close range. Augmenting their taijutsu, by using their bows to attack as make shift staves. Moreover, this allows the user to be able to quickly load and shoot arrows, even in the midst of taijutsu battles.

Example Techniques:

Flight of the Sonic Arrow-(Rage of Apollo)
Type: Offense
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user draws a string on his special bow, releasing a destructive soundwave which takes the shape of a powerful shockwave composed of destructive soundwaves similar to those from the echo assault skill, which would deal soft tissue damage if it was to hit the opponent.

Additional effects and Restrictions:

Users of this style due to constantly wielding bows have grown accustomed to nocking, and firing arrows. Hours of practice have allowed them be able to load and fire a bow in the time it would take normal shinobi to throw a kunai. Moreover, archers would of course be able to logically perceive and react to higher speeds.




✦ Declined, issues here. The usage of the sound is based on forming Sound arrows through strumming strings that form physical objects. Thing is, this is neither actually taijutsu or bukijutsu - this is a Sound Ninjutsu actually. There's no aspect that's actually weapon based because you're attacking with ninjutsu created arrows. Also, increased perception isn't going to be approved either. ✦

 
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Re: Custom Fighting Styles Submission

✦✦ Thread Checked ✦✦

Checked the CFS submitted this cycle; exceptions this time being one that I'll need to check myself and 3-4 being used for training. If your submissions hasn't been checked, vm the link and it'll be checked soon. Other than that, you know the rules I hope. Don't just submit anything as a CFS; it has to have either Hand to Hand CQC involved, or some form of weaponry. I cannot stress this part enoughNo, throwing dynamite isn't a CFS. Quoting someone into submissions isn't a CFS. Arguing until someone kills themselves isn't a CFS. I know, I know: "But it works". Still. A new CFS thread will be posted soon and linked in this post after the CFSJ are checked soon.
 
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