~Approved~ well, here's my first bio

[Ushiro]

Basic Information
Name: Roy Satoru
Nickname:
Gender: Male
Age: 14
Clan:

Looks: like the pic

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Personality:
Roy doesn’t show too much emotion, he’s a logical thinker, and can sometimes be cold towards people that are weaker than him.Roy is lazy but quick acting when he needs to be. In a pinch, he could come up with a strategy to get through most situations but not any long term planning; thats too much effort. He’s fine with group missions but doesn’t want to be grouped with useless people who could get him killed.

Village Info.
Village of Birth: Konoha
Village of Alliance: Konoha

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: Chunin
Specialty: Taijutsu, Twin short swords
Elements: Lightning and water
Your ninjutsu:

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(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
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(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

Background Info.
History:

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Roy Satoru was born in Konoha and raised by his mother and father, who was a jonin. Roy's parents bbelieved that going to the ninja academy would be a good experience for him since he spends his time slacking off. With much objection from Roy, he eventually was forced to go. His father was away on missions alot, but when he was home he would tutor Roy in ninja techniques and help him practice. He learns quickly so he easily graduated later on at age 11 and became a genin. Soon after, Orochimaru attacked Konoha and during this, Roy realized the true responsibility of a ninja as he protected his mother while his father was fighting off the invaders elsewhere. When when it was over, another ninja gave Roy and his mother the news that his ffathr was killed fighting one of Orochimaru's giant snakes. 2 years later, Roy became a Chunin and was more talented than most of his peers but he wasn't satisfied. He decided to find someone who can teach him more advanced techniques so he could get stronger and be able to protect the village when he's needed.

Other

Picture:

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Theme Song and Background Music:

Battles

Won:
Lost:
~Approved~

 

[Seblax]

Re: well, here's my first bio

I love seeing Chuunins and Genins around, feels like an fair world not just sannins and kages because they spam alot.

i think you must add some history and remove your families name, you must select two or one element to start with, and you need to train on the jutsus to be able to use them.
and fill everything because it meant help such as the Specialty.

 

[Caliburn]

Re: well, here's my first bio

I love seeing Chuunins and Genins around, feels like an fair world not just sannins and kages because they spam alot.

i think you must add some history and remove your families name, you must select two or one element to start with, and you need to train on the jutsus to be able to use them.
and fill everything because it meant help such as the Specialty.

Why should he remove a part of his name? There's nothing wrong with it.
And as it's his first bio, he needs to place one element, the first element in which he wants to be trained.
It's his first bio, he doesn't have a specialty.

As this is your first bio, you haven't learned ninjutsu and certainly not up to C-rank. Being a chunin means you have the potential to learn ninjutsu up to C-rank, but that doesn't mean you get them be default. Delete that and at these:

Spoiler

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
_____
(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
_____
(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
_____
(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
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(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

Also make your history a bit longer.

 

[Ushiro]

Re: well, here's my first bio

Thx for the advice. this stuff is complicated. :crazy:
btw how do i make that button that says SHOW?

 

[Faceless]

Re: well, here's my first bio

Thx for the advice. this stuff is complicated. :crazy:

And it doesn't get less complicated as progress on. Better be ready for that, mate. =O

 

[Nero]

Re: well, here's my first bio

Please edit the bio with what caliburn said and take out all e-c rank jutsus because you havent learned them from what I understand.

 

[Caliburn]

Re: well, here's my first bio

Thx for the advice. this stuff is complicated. :crazy:
btw how do i make that button that says SHOW?

Those are spoiler tags. Just click on the button that says "spoiler", it's between the Youtube-tags.

And it's simple as this is your first bio, you haven't learned a single thing, so remove the E-C rank part jutsu's and add the jutsu's I posted in my previous post.

Also add the first element you want to learn where it says "Elements: ". For example if you first want to learn fire, add fire.

Last expand your history a bit and then it should be fine to go. As this is your first bio, you don't have (or more precise you can't) say much more.

 

[Ushiro]

Re: well, here's my first bio

okay i updated it and can i have a weapon like a sword or do i have to 'learn' that too?

 

[Seblax]

Re: well, here's my first bio

okay i updated it and can i have a weapon like a sword or do i have to 'learn' that too?

Its ok to have any kind of weapons as long as its not special like creating fog or whatever or you should then submit it in the custom jutsus thread.

PS: creating fog was the first idea that pop in my mind

 

[Ushiro]

Re: well, here's my first bio

ok its done and i guess ill wait for approval. :zonder: