Approval for new character : akuria inazuma

[Shirou Emiya]

Basic Information
Name:akuria inazuma
Nickname: the bright blue bolt (haha I know it's cheesy)
Gender:male
Age:16
Clan:Inuzuka

Looks:Average size ninja
Medium blue hair
Blueish grey hypnoticle appearing eyes
Wears a pair of khaki colored shorts (what ever a ninja would wear)
And a cyan-green colored fitted shirt that seems to sway like a tree sways in the wind (short sleeves) along with a dark green vest to contain all equipment (kuni ect.)
Sandals like naruto but black
Wrapped fore arms as if likea boxer but do not reach or immobilize use of fingers
Tanned skin
Natural inuzuka clan characteristics (fangs ect.)
Strange red zigzag markings on top of palm
Distinctive scar looks sortof like bolt of lightning
wears standard ninja headband
He has small side burns about midway down to his ear

Personality:shy due to his past but yet playful and intelligent

Village Info.Konoha?
Village of Birth:Konoha
Village of Alliance:Konoha

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: please help
Specialty: please help
Elements:Lightning/wind
Your ninjutsu:chidori ? ( please help if this is wrong )


Background Info.
History:akuria inazuma grew up with a troubled past his parents would always fight each other and never got along he often stayed with his instructor who used to train him in the ways of the shinobi this was the closest toa parent he had late one evening akuria was on the way to go to one of his instructors lessons when he noticed a peculiar shadow it appeared to be moving towards his with nothing to have the shadow. It caught him when a ninja walked out of the shadows to pick him up here he took akuria to a remote location and tried to extract all of his chakra for research luckily akurias instructor came right before things got scary the instructor was killed trying to save akuria but akuria got away he watched as his instructor drew his last breath here he struck an oath of vengeance he would train to get stronger and eventually surpas his instructor

Other:akuria has A total of 3 dogs that fight with him one with a solid black coat with distinctive blue eyes female name=Sasha
One with a brown coat with green eyes female name=marley
And one dog with a pure white coat with red distinctive eyes male name=onyx

Picture:

Theme Song and Background Music: Donald trump Mac miller?

Battles: N/A

Won:N/A
Lost:N/A

 

[Sage of Infinity Paths]

Will consider it

 

[Izzy..]

Dull, very dull. It needs some pizazz but I guess this will do. U_U

You know there is a biography shop in Konoha Town if you lack creativity.

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Need some fixing...

- I doubt you have had any training in high level techniques like Chidori.
- You don't have an alliance because you are not in a village. Unless I am wrong otherwise please correct me.
- I may be wrong but you can't have dogs like that. You need to submit them separately in the CJ thread and see if they get approved (following the recommended guidelines ofc).
- Don't the Inuzuka Bios have restrictions?

 

[Shirou Emiya]

I'm sorry it's my first one my next one will be better promise also I didnt understand what to do where I said please help so could you guys maybe help ?

 

[Izzy..]

I'm sorry it's my first one my next one will be better promise also I didnt understand what to do where I said please help so could you guys maybe help ?

No Problemo Bro gimme a minute and I will help ya out. Let me go read the restrictions.

YOu can look in the thread too.

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Edit: The dog part was right but you could elaborate more.

 

[Zoro..]

Dull, very dull. It needs some pizazz but I guess this will do. U_U

You know there is a biography shop in Konoha Town if you lack creativity.

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Need some fixing...

- I doubt you have had any training in high level techniques like Chidori.
- You don't have an alliance because you are not in a village. Unless I am wrong otherwise please correct me.
- I may be wrong but you can't have dogs like that. You need to submit them separately in the CJ thread and see if they get approved (following the recommended guidelines ofc).
- Don't the Inuzuka Bios have restrictions?

Yes the first one is true.
The second one is up to him I believe most people just put whatever until they actually join a village.

Your dogs and entire bio should be more detailed.

Inuzuka bios just got restricted though you can have 3 dogs and can always be made.

I suggest adding more detai, colour and re reading all the rules to double check ^_^

 

[Izzy..]

Bobby do you mind if I fix up your bio for you? I have alot of time right now and am bored.

 

[Shirou Emiya]

Bobby do you mind if I fix up your bio for you? I have alot of time right now and am bored.

Sure man haha I didnt understand a lot of stuff so yeah I'll let you do it as long as your cool with it

 

[Izzy..]

Tell me what you think:

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Akuria Inuzuka

Nickname: The Bright Blue Bolt (haha I know it's cheesy)
Gender:

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Male
Age:16
Clan: Inuzuka clan (犬塚一族, Inuzuka Ichizoku)

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Looks

Average size ninja
Medium brown hair
Blueish grey eyes
Wears a pair of khaki colored shorts (what ever a ninja would wear)
And a cyan-green colored fitted shirt (short sleeves) along with vest to contain all equipment (kuni ect.)
Sandals like naruto but black
Wrapped fore arms as if likea boxer but do not reach or immobilize use of fingers
Tanned skin
Natural inuzuka clan characteristics (fangs ect.)
Strange red zigzag markings on top of palm
Distinctive scar looks sortof like bolt of lightning
Personality:shy due to his past but yet playful and intelligent

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Village Information

Village of Birth:

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Konohagakure

Village of Alliance:

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Konohagakure

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Rank/Chakra Info.

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*Credit NarutoBase for picture*

|Specialty|
None

|Elements|
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-Would like to learn-

|Ninjutsu: E-Rank|

Spoiler

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank: E

Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 5
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note: The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E

Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 5
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank: E

Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 5
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E

Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E

Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E

Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E

Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

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Background Information

History

Unlike the happy kids in Konoha, Akuria Inuzuka grew up in a troubled home. His parents never got along and on many occasions, to the dismay of Akuria, would end in terrible and violent fights. To escape the realism of his troubled youth Akuria found solace in his dogs companionship.

Akuria often stayed with his instructor Masanori who used to train him in the ways of the shinobi. It was quite rare for a sensei to allow a student to assimilate into one's household but to Masanori, Akuria was an exception. To him, this was the closest to a son had ever had and for Akira, the closest to a honorable father he would ever have.

Late one evening Akuria was on his way to one of his lessons with Masanori when he noticed a peculiar shadow following him. From his peripheral view it appeared to be moving towards him. Akuria thought it strange that the shadow belonged to no one. In a blink of an eye, Akuria was caught in a tight hold when suddenly a ninja walked out of the shadows. He approached the small child and grounded his fist on the back of Akuria's neck knocking him out. When Akuria came to, he was in a remote location unbeknownst to him. The masked ninja could be seen close by but somehow Akuria had been drugged and his vision seemed to phase in and out. He felt his chakra was being drained out of him because he started feeling weaker and weaker. All he could hear was someone saying, "...this chakra will be useful in my experiment...hope he survives...." Before Akuria collapsed he heard his sensei's voice and the sound of swords clashing. He was awake enough to hear, "Akuria!!.....I am taking you back....home...."

When Akuria came back to his senses he laid his eyes upon a horrendous sight. Masanori was hunched over while holding his ground. He had been battling the masked ninja and couldn't hold on much longer. Both of them seemed to have suffered serious injury but Masanori was worse. The masked NInja saw an opening when Masanori looked at Akuria and was struck down. The masked ninja mockingly spit on Masanori and yelled to the boy that if he wanted to beat him he would have to get off his ass and train harder. Then he poofed into a cloud of smoke and disappeared.

Akuria ran to Masanori and held him in his arms. As Masanori gasped for air he began to tell Akuria:

Masanori: Aku...ria......I...am...sorry...I-I...
Akuria: Master...don't speak your wounds will open more.
Masanori: H-hey...don't cry....listen to me....carefully...
You have done well....(cough)... but you have more to learn
Akuria: What are you talking about? Your not going to die on me old man!
Masanori: It is....my time....don't forget...what I taught...you...
Akuria: (crying) No no no no! Shhh...please don't die....I promise I will get better..I SWEAR! I promise I will listen to my parents and I promise I won't be a burden on you!
Masanori: (looks upon Akuria crying and smiles) Believe in yourself....I will always be watching....don't disappoint me son.....I-I-I.....

(Masanori closes his eyes)

Akuria: ......master.....


From then on Akuria swore he would train harder than he has ever done in his life even if it kills him. Hoping one day he would come face to face with the masked shinobi and show him the pain inside his heart.

R.I.P. Masanori


Fellow Companions

Akuria has A total of 3 dogs that fight with him one with a solid black coat with distinctive blue eyes female name=Sasha
One with a brown coat with green eyes female name=marley
And one dog with a pure white coat with red distinctive eyes male name=onyx

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Pictures

Spoiler

To be announced

Theme Song and Background Music

Spoiler

Battles

Won:N/A
Lost:N/A

Here is the code if you want to use it. If it needs more work let me know.

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[border=][B][SIZE="5"][B][COLOR="Teal"]Akuria Inuzuka[/COLOR][/B][/SIZE][/B]

[B]Nickname:[/B] The Bright Blue Bolt (haha I know it's cheesy)
[B]Gender:[/B] [IMG]http://tinyurl.com/3rcpsz8[/IMG] Male
[B]Age:[/B]16
[B]Clan:[/B] Inuzuka clan (犬塚一族, Inuzuka Ichizoku) [IMG]http://tinyurl.com/7oq8gav[/IMG]
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[border=][B][SIZE="5"][COLOR="Teal"]Looks[/COLOR][/SIZE][/B]

Average size ninja 
Medium brown hair
Blueish grey eyes
Wears a pair of khaki colored shorts (what ever a ninja would wear)
And a cyan-green colored fitted shirt (short sleeves) along with vest to contain all equipment (kuni ect.)
Sandals like naruto but black
Wrapped fore arms as if likea boxer but do not reach or immobilize use of fingers
Tanned skin 
Natural inuzuka clan characteristics (fangs ect.)
Strange red zigzag markings on top of palm 
Distinctive scar looks sortof like bolt of lightning 
Personality:shy due to his past but yet playful and intelligent[/border]
 

[border=][B][SIZE="5"][COLOR="Teal"]Village Information[/COLOR][/SIZE][/B]

[B]Village of Birth:[/B] [IMG]http://tinyurl.com/29x6cx6[/IMG] Konohagakure

[B]Village of Alliance:[/B] [IMG]http://tinyurl.com/29x6cx6[/IMG] Konohagakure
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[border=][B][COLOR="Teal"][SIZE="5"]Rank/Chakra Info.[/SIZE][/COLOR][/B]

[IMG]http://tinyurl.com/7kaflxh[/IMG]
[SIZE="1"]*Credit NarutoBase for picture*[/SIZE]

[U][B]|Specialty|[/B][/U]
None

[B][U]|Elements| [/U][/B]
|[IMG]http://tinyurl.com/6pntmc5[/IMG]| 
-Would like to learn-

[B]|Ninjutsu: E-Rank|[/B]
[SPOILER]
[JUTSU="(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique"]
(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank: E

Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 5
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note: The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
[/JUTSU]

[JUTSU="(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique"]
(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E

Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 5
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
[/JUTSU]

[JUTSU="(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique"]
(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank: E

Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 5
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
[/JUTSU]

[JUTSU="(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder"]
(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E

Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
[/JUTSU]

[JUTSU="(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique"]
(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E

Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
[/JUTSU]

[JUTSU="(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill"]
(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E

Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
[/JUTSU]

[JUTSU="(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique"]
(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E

Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)
[/JUTSU]
[/SPOILER][/border]



[border=][B][SIZE="5"][COLOR="Teal"]Background Information[/COLOR][/SIZE][/B]

[U][SIZE="3"]History[/SIZE][/U]

Unlike the happy kids in Konoha, Akuria Inuzuka grew up in a troubled home. His parents never got along and on many occasions, to the dismay of Akuria, would end in terrible and violent fights. To escape the realism of his troubled youth Akuria found solace in his dogs companionship.

Akuria often stayed with his instructor Masanori who used to train him in the ways of the shinobi. It was quite rare for a sensei to allow a student to assimilate into one's household but to Masanori, Akuria was an exception. To him, this was the closest to a son had ever had and for Akira, the closest to a honorable father he would ever have. 

Late one evening Akuria was on his way to one of his lessons with Masanori when he noticed a peculiar shadow following him. From his peripheral view it appeared to be moving towards him. Akuria thought it strange that the shadow belonged to no one. In a blink of an eye, Akuria was caught in a tight hold when suddenly a ninja walked out of the shadows. He approached the small child and grounded his fist on the back of Akuria's neck knocking him out. When Akuria came to, he was in a remote location unbeknownst to him. The masked ninja could be seen close by but somehow Akuria had been drugged and his vision seemed to phase in and out. He felt his chakra was being drained out of him because he started feeling weaker and weaker. All he could hear was someone saying, "...this chakra will be useful in my experiment...hope he survives...." Before  Akuria collapsed he heard his sensei's voice and the sound of swords clashing. He was awake enough to hear, "Akuria!!.....I am taking you back....home...." 

When Akuria came back to his senses he laid his eyes upon a horrendous sight. Masanori was hunched over while holding his ground. He had been battling the masked ninja and couldn't hold on much longer. Both of them seemed to have suffered serious injury but Masanori was worse. The masked NInja saw an opening when Masanori looked at Akuria and was struck down. The masked ninja mockingly spit on Masanori and yelled to the boy that if he wanted to beat him he would have to get off his ass and train harder. Then he poofed into a cloud of smoke and disappeared.

Akuria ran to Masanori and held him in his arms. As Masanori gasped for air he began to tell Akuria:

[I][B]Masanori:[/B] Aku...ria......I...am...sorry...I-I...
[B]Akuria:[/B] Master...don't speak your wounds will open more. :(
[B]Masanori:[/B] H-hey...don't cry....listen to me....carefully...
              You have done well....(cough)... but you have more to learn
[B]Akuria:[/B] What are you talking about? Your not going to die on me old man!
[B]Masanori:[/B] It is....my time....don't forget...what I taught...you...
[B]Akuria:[/B] (crying) No no no no! Shhh...please don't die....I promise I will get better..I SWEAR! I promise I will listen to my parents and I promise I won't be a burden on you!
[B]Masanori:[/B] (looks upon Akuria crying and smiles) Believe in yourself....I will always be watching....don't disappoint me son.....I-I-I.....

(Masanori closes his eyes)

Akuria: ......master.....
[/I]

From then on Akuria swore he would train harder than he has ever done in his life even if it kills him. Hoping one day he would come face to face with the masked shinobi and show him the pain inside his heart.

R.I.P. Masanori


[U][SIZE="3"]Fellow Companions[/SIZE][/U]

 Akuria has A total of 3 dogs that fight with him one with a solid black coat with distinctive blue eyes female name=Sasha 
One with a brown coat with green eyes female name=marley
And one dog with a pure white coat with red distinctive eyes male name=onyx[/border] 

[border=][B][SIZE="5"][COLOR="Teal"]Pictures[/COLOR][/SIZE][/B]

[SPOILER]To be announced[/SPOILER]


[B][SIZE="5"][COLOR="Teal"]Theme Song and Background Music[/COLOR][/SIZE][/B]
[SPOILER]
[YOUTUBE]74TFS8r_SMI[/YOUTUBE]
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[B][SIZE="5"][COLOR="Teal"]Battles[/COLOR][/SIZE][/B]

Won:N/A
Lost:N/A[/border][/CENTER]

 

[Shirou Emiya]

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Akuria Inuzuka

Nickname: The Bright Blue Bolt (haha I know it's cheesy)
Gender:

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Male
Age:16
Clan: Inuzuka clan (犬塚一族, Inuzuka Ichizoku)

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Looks

Average size ninja
Medium brown hair
Blueish grey eyes
Wears a pair of khaki colored shorts (what ever a ninja would wear)
And a cyan-green colored fitted shirt (short sleeves) along with vest to contain all equipment (kuni ect.)
Sandals like naruto but black
Wrapped fore arms as if likea boxer but do not reach or immobilize use of fingers
Tanned skin
Natural inuzuka clan characteristics (fangs ect.)
Strange red zigzag markings on top of palm
Distinctive scar looks sortof like bolt of lightning
Personality:shy due to his past but yet playful and intelligent

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Village Information

Village of Birth:

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Konohagakure

Village of Alliance:

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Konohagakure

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Rank/Chakra Info.

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*Credit NarutoBase for picture*

|Specialty|
None

|Elements|
|

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-Would like to learn-

|Ninjutsu: E-Rank|

Spoiler

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank: E

Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 5
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note: The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E

Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 5
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank: E

Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 5
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E

Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E

Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E

Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E

Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

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Background Information

History

Unlike the happy kids in Konoha, Akuria Inuzuka grew up in a troubled home. His parents never got along and on many occasions, to the dismay of Akuria, would end in terrible and violent fights. To escape the realism of his troubled youth Akuria found solace in his dogs companionship.

Akuria often stayed with his instructor Masanori who used to train him in the ways of the shinobi. It was quite rare for a sensei to allow a student to assimilate into one's household but to Masanori, Akuria was an exception. To him, this was the closest to a son had ever had and for Akira, the closest to a honorable father he would ever have.

Late one evening Akuria was on his way to one of his lessons with Masanori when he noticed a peculiar shadow following him. From his peripheral view it appeared to be moving towards him. Akuria thought it strange that the shadow belonged to no one. In a blink of an eye, Akuria was caught in a tight hold when suddenly a ninja walked out of the shadows. He approached the small child and grounded his fist on the back of Akuria's neck knocking him out. When Akuria came to, he was in a remote location unbeknownst to him. The masked ninja could be seen close by but somehow Akuria had been drugged and his vision seemed to phase in and out. He felt his chakra was being drained out of him because he started feeling weaker and weaker. All he could hear was someone saying, "...this chakra will be useful in my experiment...hope he survives...." Before Akuria collapsed he heard his sensei's voice and the sound of swords clashing. He was awake enough to hear, "Akuria!!.....I am taking you back....home...."

When Akuria came back to his senses he laid his eyes upon a horrendous sight. Masanori was hunched over while holding his ground. He had been battling the masked ninja and couldn't hold on much longer. Both of them seemed to have suffered serious injury but Masanori was worse. The masked NInja saw an opening when Masanori looked at Akuria and was struck down. The masked ninja mockingly spit on Masanori and yelled to the boy that if he wanted to beat him he would have to get off his ass and train harder. Then he poofed into a cloud of smoke and disappeared.

Akuria ran to Masanori and held him in his arms. As Masanori gasped for air he began to tell Akuria:

Masanori: Aku...ria......I...am...sorry...I-I...
Akuria: Master...don't speak your wounds will open more.
Masanori: H-hey...don't cry....listen to me....carefully...
You have done well....(cough)... but you have more to learn
Akuria: What are you talking about? Your not going to die on me old man!
Masanori: It is....my time....don't forget...what I taught...you...
Akuria: (crying) No no no no! Shhh...please don't die....I promise I will get better..I SWEAR! I promise I will listen to my parents and I promise I won't be a burden on you!
Masanori: (looks upon Akuria crying and smiles) Believe in yourself....I will always be watching....don't disappoint me son.....I-I-I.....

(Masanori closes his eyes)

Akuria: ......master.....


From then on Akuria swore he would train harder than he has ever done in his life even if it kills him. Hoping one day he would come face to face with the masked shinobi and show him the pain inside his heart.

R.I.P. Masanori


Fellow Companions

Akuria has A total of 3 dogs that fight with him one with a solid black coat with distinctive blue eyes female name=Sasha
One with a brown coat with green eyes female name=marley
And one dog with a pure white coat with red distinctive eyes male name=onyx

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Pictures

Spoiler

To be announced

Theme Song and Background Music

Spoiler

Battles

Won:N/A
Lost:N/A

Here is the code if you want to use it. If it needs more work let me know.

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[border=][B][SIZE="5"][B][COLOR="Teal"]Akuria Inuzuka[/COLOR][/B][/SIZE][/B]

[B]Nickname:[/B] The Bright Blue Bolt (haha I know it's cheesy)
[B]Gender:[/B] [IMG]http://tinyurl.com/3rcpsz8[/IMG] Male
[B]Age:[/B]16
[B]Clan:[/B] Inuzuka clan (犬塚一族, Inuzuka Ichizoku) [IMG]http://tinyurl.com/7oq8gav[/IMG]
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[border=][B][SIZE="5"][COLOR="Teal"]Looks[/COLOR][/SIZE][/B]

Average size ninja 
Medium brown hair
Blueish grey eyes
Wears a pair of khaki colored shorts (what ever a ninja would wear)
And a cyan-green colored fitted shirt (short sleeves) along with vest to contain all equipment (kuni ect.)
Sandals like naruto but black
Wrapped fore arms as if likea boxer but do not reach or immobilize use of fingers
Tanned skin 
Natural inuzuka clan characteristics (fangs ect.)
Strange red zigzag markings on top of palm 
Distinctive scar looks sortof like bolt of lightning 
Personality:shy due to his past but yet playful and intelligent[/border]
 

[border=][B][SIZE="5"][COLOR="Teal"]Village Information[/COLOR][/SIZE][/B]

[B]Village of Birth:[/B] [IMG]http://tinyurl.com/29x6cx6[/IMG] Konohagakure

[B]Village of Alliance:[/B] [IMG]http://tinyurl.com/29x6cx6[/IMG] Konohagakure
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[border=][B][COLOR="Teal"][SIZE="5"]Rank/Chakra Info.[/SIZE][/COLOR][/B]

[IMG]http://tinyurl.com/7kaflxh[/IMG]
[SIZE="1"]*Credit NarutoBase for picture*[/SIZE]

[U][B]|Specialty|[/B][/U]
None

[B][U]|Elements| [/U][/B]
|[IMG]http://tinyurl.com/6pntmc5[/IMG]| 
-Would like to learn-

[B]|Ninjutsu: E-Rank|[/B]
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[JUTSU="(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique"]
(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank: E

Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 5
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note: The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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[JUTSU="(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique"]
(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E

Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 5
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
[/JUTSU]

[JUTSU="(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique"]
(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank: E

Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 5
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
[/JUTSU]

[JUTSU="(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder"]
(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E

Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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[JUTSU="(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique"]
(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E

Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
[/JUTSU]

[JUTSU="(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill"]
(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E

Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
[/JUTSU]

[JUTSU="(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique"]
(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E

Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)
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[border=][B][SIZE="5"][COLOR="Teal"]Background Information[/COLOR][/SIZE][/B]

[U][SIZE="3"]History[/SIZE][/U]

Unlike the happy kids in Konoha, Akuria Inuzuka grew up in a troubled home. His parents never got along and on many occasions, to the dismay of Akuria, would end in terrible and violent fights. To escape the realism of his troubled youth Akuria found solace in his dogs companionship.

Akuria often stayed with his instructor Masanori who used to train him in the ways of the shinobi. It was quite rare for a sensei to allow a student to assimilate into one's household but to Masanori, Akuria was an exception. To him, this was the closest to a son had ever had and for Akira, the closest to a honorable father he would ever have. 

Late one evening Akuria was on his way to one of his lessons with Masanori when he noticed a peculiar shadow following him. From his peripheral view it appeared to be moving towards him. Akuria thought it strange that the shadow belonged to no one. In a blink of an eye, Akuria was caught in a tight hold when suddenly a ninja walked out of the shadows. He approached the small child and grounded his fist on the back of Akuria's neck knocking him out. When Akuria came to, he was in a remote location unbeknownst to him. The masked ninja could be seen close by but somehow Akuria had been drugged and his vision seemed to phase in and out. He felt his chakra was being drained out of him because he started feeling weaker and weaker. All he could hear was someone saying, "...this chakra will be useful in my experiment...hope he survives...." Before  Akuria collapsed he heard his sensei's voice and the sound of swords clashing. He was awake enough to hear, "Akuria!!.....I am taking you back....home...." 

When Akuria came back to his senses he laid his eyes upon a horrendous sight. Masanori was hunched over while holding his ground. He had been battling the masked ninja and couldn't hold on much longer. Both of them seemed to have suffered serious injury but Masanori was worse. The masked NInja saw an opening when Masanori looked at Akuria and was struck down. The masked ninja mockingly spit on Masanori and yelled to the boy that if he wanted to beat him he would have to get off his ass and train harder. Then he poofed into a cloud of smoke and disappeared.

Akuria ran to Masanori and held him in his arms. As Masanori gasped for air he began to tell Akuria:

[I][B]Masanori:[/B] Aku...ria......I...am...sorry...I-I...
[B]Akuria:[/B] Master...don't speak your wounds will open more. :(
[B]Masanori:[/B] H-hey...don't cry....listen to me....carefully...
              You have done well....(cough)... but you have more to learn
[B]Akuria:[/B] What are you talking about? Your not going to die on me old man!
[B]Masanori:[/B] It is....my time....don't forget...what I taught...you...
[B]Akuria:[/B] (crying) No no no no! Shhh...please don't die....I promise I will get better..I SWEAR! I promise I will listen to my parents and I promise I won't be a burden on you!
[B]Masanori:[/B] (looks upon Akuria crying and smiles) Believe in yourself....I will always be watching....don't disappoint me son.....I-I-I.....

(Masanori closes his eyes)

Akuria: ......master.....
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From then on Akuria swore he would train harder than he has ever done in his life even if it kills him. Hoping one day he would come face to face with the masked shinobi and show him the pain inside his heart.

R.I.P. Masanori


[U][SIZE="3"]Fellow Companions[/SIZE][/U]

 Akuria has A total of 3 dogs that fight with him one with a solid black coat with distinctive blue eyes female name=Sasha 
One with a brown coat with green eyes female name=marley
And one dog with a pure white coat with red distinctive eyes male name=onyx[/border] 

[border=][B][SIZE="5"][COLOR="Teal"]Pictures[/COLOR][/SIZE][/B]

[SPOILER]To be announced[/SPOILER]


[B][SIZE="5"][COLOR="Teal"]Theme Song and Background Music[/COLOR][/SIZE][/B]
[SPOILER]
[YOUTUBE]74TFS8r_SMI[/YOUTUBE]
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[B][SIZE="5"][COLOR="Teal"]Battles[/COLOR][/SIZE][/B]

Won:N/A
Lost:N/A[/border][/CENTER]

dude this is amazing :whoa: I really got into the new story dude thanks but one last question do I need to make a new thread for this one or just edit the original ?

 

[Izzy..]

dude this is amazing :whoa: I really got into the new story dude thanks but one last question do I need to make a new thread for this one or just edit the original ?

Make a New thread. Will help you in the long run when you want to update your bio which, if you didn't know, is monthly. So once your bio gets approved you can't edit it or you will be infracted (punished). So before you hit the submit button make sure you are absolutely sure everything is like you want it. You wont be able to change anything till your month is up.

 

[Shirou Emiya]

Make a New thread. Will help you in the long run when you want to update your bio which, if you didn't know, is monthly. So once your bio gets approved you can't edit it or you will be infracted (punished). So before you hit the submit button make sure you are absolutely sure everything is like you want it. You wont be able to change anything till your month is up.

Okiedokie and thanks again man here is that + rep I saw coming for ya earlier. Lol xd

 

[Izzy..]

Okiedokie and thanks again man here is that + rep I saw coming for ya earlier. Lol xd

Thanks but I do it to help the community not for rep. Keep your head high and if you get stressed take a breather and comeback when you feel better.