Another Signature Attempt.

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I have posted maybe three signatures on the base and I have made five. All three were... well.... as someone called them, "shit-like"
Anyways, what do you think? Feedback is wanted!
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pretty shit, badly edited, terrible text placement, background is boring, you wanted feedback and you got it from me
 

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it looks awesome!! i wish i knew how to make gfx like that D:
 

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pretty shit, badly edited, terrible text placement, background is boring, you wanted feedback and you got it from me

oh god!!!!!!!!!!!! lol y u do him like that lololololololol
 
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pretty shit, badly edited, terrible text placement, background is boring, you wanted feedback and you got it from me
Thanks for your feedback! I will work on
-Placement
-Editing
-Making the signature more appealing
:D
 

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Its actually pretty good. If it was me.. the background color would've been a little lighter. Or had a green themed background seeing as the character portrayed has a green theme in himself. Its pretty good though. Keep at it.
 

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It's good for a unexperienced GFXer. Keep improving and you'll do great.
 

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It's good for a unexperienced GFXer. Keep improving and you'll do great.

theres no such thing as unexperienced, you only learn how to GFX through experience
 

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It's actually pretty good in my opinion, the placement of the render seems fine in my opinion, I like the text, perhaps a different font would've sufficed but the placement of the text is good and the little bits of text around it make it better. The background is too dark, the glow spots are too bright, there's no central light source to compliment the render, the flow is messy, the background is monotone in colour which makes it a bit boring. The render could've been blended in better by placing 1 or 2 C4Ds over it. You have some great C4D placement, you just need to work on making it all flow. Sorry if this is a bit harsh, but you have a good bit of potential and I don't want to see it go to waste :3.
 

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The Dog is right, the placement of your text is bad.
I've learned from a certain person, that the text should be near the render, what you did, near the bottom.
 

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woww!! amazing would you mind telling us what software you used?
 

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pretty shit, badly edited, terrible text placement, background is boring, you wanted feedback and you got it from me

OP: Don't listen to this dude, I have never seen him post a signature or any kind of art.

Its a decent signature, its just the background it a bit to dark, also the text IMO should be taking up that empty space over to the left more. Overall it a nice signature. Keep up the good work.
 
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Not harsh at all. Very good advice, thanks.
I use Photoshop.
 
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