another poem lol

[Honoo of the fire]

my main inspiration is izinagi54. i think he is one of the best poem writiers in the base. in fact me and him go to school together so.... here it is

a warrior lost

im a warrior lost to the world
the places i have been have been so cold
it would mold the meek into the sleek.

as we climb a mountains peak
we leak blood and sweat
but alas are goals are met

forever i wish i could collect
all the skulls on the battlefield
that hell may return to our diseble
so i once again to take them with my sword and shield

rate and comment

 

[Honoo of the fire]

sorry i went back through i have habit of skipping words around
but broke a personal record of making it in 45 seconds

 

[Sabuto Hayashi]

That's good!
You're a fine poet.

 

[Konohas Itachi]

Nice Poem man

 

[KyoshiroSenju]

Nice poem dude ill give it a 4/5

 

[Yuka]

I Give this lovely poem a 5/5 Good work