Another decent poem xD

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I write poems sometimes, heres the last one

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Here is my new one..

A child is so innocent and free,
Not troubled by eternity,
Not burdened by the daily woes,
That make us treat upon our toes.

A child is quite content to play,
Inside his head day after day,
Dreaming up a magical place,
Where everyday worries leave not a trace.

A child's laughter, soft and sweet,
Melting hearts of those it meets,
Bubblying up from hidden places,
Bringing smiles to everyone's faces.

If only we were like the child,
Whose carefree life is still so mild,
To live in the moment, here and now,
Embracing each moment that God allows.

 

[DaruiUchiha]

Cool yo

 

[Groundwalker]

Insperational! Keep up the good work.

 

[OhReary]

I liked it

 

[CleverMonkey]

I liked it, except the last line
Good work ^^

 

[Zeref]

nice poem

 

[Pendulum1337]

nice. keep it up