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I will be writing an entirely different fanfic, which will be the best I've ever written. I have taken your advice to not rush into it. I am making an outline (idea courtesy to DarkPhoenix :) ) right now. I will postpone the sequel because it takes place after the Fourth war. Obviously, I have no idea how that will turn out! Two questions I asked, and need before writing:

1. Should it be all action-packed like Parts I and II, literary like Part III, or both like the novella as a whole. I say novella since it wasn't that long. This one will be longer!

2. Also, should I stray off the normal plot of Naruto, (FOR EXAMPLE: My new character crashes the summit instead of Sasuke and the summit is between the Rainbow, Rain, Grass, Rain, and Darkness villages) or be like "Hikusa" and try to stick to Naruto plot? Either way, i can promise you fights with at least 2 kage!!!!

Please respond, I can't write unless you do. The longer you take, the longer you'll have to wait!



P.S. I was thinking far into the future, when I'm either in the middle of this work or towards the end, doing a collaborative work with people like Sharingdork and michael92... Let me know!
 
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I think it should be a little more action packed like parts 1 and 2 and you should spend a little more time when going in depths with the characters.
We want to know more about them and be able to simpathize with each of them.....


I think it would be good if you strayed a little from the Naruto plot, this way the main character won't be cast into Naruto's shadow and be compared to him all the time...Give him a sense of identity, so he or she can be their own individual

By the way I think a collaboration between yourself, Sharingandork and Michael92 would be epic, just saying:):):)
 
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I think it should be a little more action packed like parts 1 and 2 and you should spend a little more time when going in depths with the characters.
We want to know more about them and be able to simpathize with each of them.....


I think it would be good if you strayed a little from the Naruto plot, this way the main character won't be cast into Naruto's shadow and be compared to him all the time...Give him a sense of identity, so he or she can be their own individual

By the way I think a collaboration between yourself, Sharingandork and Michael92 would be epic, just saying:):):)
I agree for the most part of what Roxey said.
on the first though i would say that it need not be so action packed as long as you are able to make the story compelling.
it would be best that you try to stray from naruto's path so that you have more freedom of movement rather than following a certain timeline from the series.
as to a collaboration, may i request a link to your stories roxey and that of michael92? i'm not familiar with your fanfics therefore i cannot say for sure how a collaboration between the four of you might turn out. for the moment though, i believe sharindork and gaara could make a collaborative effort since they have a somewhat similar style.
:)
 
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