Angelic Poem

[SandFreak]

You can trust me I'm Your friend so Don't be afraid to Take my hand and walk with me down the path to freedom through the gates of heaven a glorious light will surround thee with warmth and comfort

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[Yuka]

That was Nice

 

[RukiaKuchiki]

I told You She was Good

 

[Stream Of Tears77]

where the heck do u come up with this stuff I can only do it when death is im my head well most of the time

 

[Unpredictable]

Your reeling them up, like a pro 10/10 Nice Work

 

[Jewelz]

*bows to her* Your the queen of all writers ^-^

 

[Morteus]

In heaven your memory

On earth your torment

They worship you in suffering

They acclaim you in silence

Saying "god is good"

god in heaven

in his eternal forsake

with blood he bathes torment

caused by religions in their time

what torment

what lament

who is god?

god is just a dream

another lie from time

 

['Kurapika]

every time someone new comes i keep hoping that he will turn out to be this awesome , thanked

 

[Zith Driekwulf]

Nice but still I wouldn't call it a poem. You can line it up with quotes and proverbs due to how you construct them. Try searching up how to build up a poem or at least check out the definition and build up from there.

You have a good mind - you'll be able to build up a really decent one, I'm sure!