[NW] Angel the Broken

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B a s i c / I n f o r m a t i o n

Name: Angel Laidlaw
Nickname: The Broken, The Handsome Scourge
Age: 27
Gender: Male
Clan: Hyuuga

A p p e a r a n c e

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Angel stood at an imposing six feet three inches, a true giant among men. His physique was a testament to relentless, brutal training; every inch of him was carved from iron and discipline. A chiseled eight-pack rippled across his abdomen, leading up to a massive, "hench" upper body that bespoke incredible power.

His broad shoulders, thick neck, and bulging biceps were clearly defined even beneath his armor, leaving no doubt about the sheer force he commanded. His short hair was a striking contrast to his formidable frame – a mop of tightly coiled, blonde curly locks that seemed to catch any available light, framing a face that was usually stern and unreadable.

He was clad in a formidable suit of battle armor, a masterpiece of functional design and intimidating aesthetics. The metallic plates were a dark, somber grey, interspersed with strategic sections of matte black, giving it a sleek yet menacing appearance. While its true strength lay in his inherent abilities, the armor itself looked incredibly durable, designed to deflect blows and withstand extreme pressures. It was clearly built for a warrior of his stature, emphasizing his powerful build without hindering his movements.

His eyes were perhaps his most unsettling feature in repose: utterly devoid of warmth or light, they were soulless pools of obsidian black, hinting at a detached, almost predatory nature. This chilling gaze would persist until the moment he activated his Byakugan. When that happened, a network of prominent, engorged veins would suddenly crisscross his temples and around his eyes, and his pupils would sharpen into an intense, all-seeing white, transforming his expression into one of unparalleled perception and focus.




P e r s o n a l i t y

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Angel’s personality was complex and varied, shaped deeply by a turbulent and checkered past. Growing up in a dysfunctional world, surrounded by chaos and neglect, left subconscious scars that influenced him in ways he never fully understood. His emotions were intensely heightened, a raw undercurrent that surged beneath his every word and gesture. Depending on his tone or mannerisms, others often attributed these fluctuations to bipolar swings—a label born from his unpredictable outbursts. This volatility stemmed from a brutal upbringing, where he was left to fend for himself amid neglect and hardship. Though the suffering he endured as a child was immense, it forged within him a hardwired survival mechanism: a persona that could be brash, loudmouthed, violent, even savage at times. His psyche, fragile and battered, clung fiercely to image and reputation—especially in the eyes of those he admired and looked up to.

In his younger years, Angel had the uncanny ability to argue fiercely, even when alone in a room, wrestling with his own thoughts and emotions. But after enduring a long, grueling stretch of hardship and isolation, he gradually learned to cope—albeit by suppressing much of what he felt deep inside.

This process led him to adopt the lone alpha wolf persona: solitary, fierce, and self-reliant. Yet, beneath this tough exterior, Angel was surprisingly gregarious when among his trusted comrades or during quests with his motley crew. Over time, however, those circles grew smaller and smaller. Despite this, his reputation meant that requests for his skills kept coming from villagers and various organizations alike—contracts and missions piled up steadily. Even as he aged, he wrestled with the shadows of his past but eventually found a form of acceptance, recognizing that all that had happened served some greater purpose, even if he hadn’t directly confronted the root causes himself.

At his core, Angel remained a soft-mannered, well-spoken man. His hardships didn’t harden his heart completely; instead, they instilled in him a profound kindness toward others who struggled as he had. But those who were well-off, those wielding great power and privilege—he despised them with a burning intensity. He vowed to become powerful enough to vanquish any who stood in his way, to rise above the forces that had once crushed him.


Village of Birth
Unknown​
V i l l a g e & C h a k r a I n f o
WSE Clan
Tsumi​

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R a n k // C h a k r a ⬗ I n f o r m a t i o n
Chakra
1200​
Rank
Jounin​
Health
160​
Specialty: Apex Handseal (Steel) Single Handseal (Caramel) Advance Tracking Specialist Chakra Fortification (Steel) Mind's Keen Eye Apex Speed Resistance​
E l e m e n t s
▸ Water Release
▸ Earth Release
▸ Fire Release
▸ Wind Release
▸ Lightning Release
▸Steel Release
▸ Caramel Release​
S k i l l s
▸ Ninjutsu
▸ Genjutsu
▸ Taijutsu
▸ Fuuinjutsu
▸ Kenjutsu
▸ Imperfect SM​
C F S
▸ N/a
S u m m o n i n g s
▸Toads
▸Monkeys

C u s t o m s
[X]
A t t r i b u t e s
▸Mind: 7
▸Body: 4+1
▸Spirit: 2
▸Agility: 8
▸Dexterity: 4
▸Vitality: 0
Total: 26​

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"I do this for good of humanity though you never get gratitude just distain until you wither away though Angellic safrafice would be the greatest honour"

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History

Part I: The Forging of the Body
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Far from the Hyūga compound, Angel trained in the mountains where thunder never ceased. There, he discovered that he had an affinity and quickly learnt to mold his chakra and learnt he could manipulate the metallic minerals in the earth, forming armor and weapons. Through this he awakened the Steel Release (Kōton) — a rare fusion of Earth and Lightning Release that hardened his chakra into steel.He would spent many years here from 12 year old onwards, learning what he could accomplish with his justu and what elements he could learn and develop. He excelled in ninjustu just as well as is inherent clans prowess to taijustu. As well as developing his ninjustu he would remain on refining his close combat moves. Planning what he could against the mountains hard rock; improving his conditioning and durability though in his seclusion actually getting live combat sparring was hard to come by.
Part II: The Twin Contracts

Angel's search for balance led him to Mount Myōboku, home of the toads. There, he met Fukasaku and Shima, who recognized his unusual chakra and agreed to guide him.

He learned to draw in nature energy, merging it with his own chakra network until he gained toad features When he entered Sage Mode, Toad markings spread across his face runing his Handsome looks. This would be until he achieved perfect sage mode

But Angel nature was not solely serene — he carried the fire of rebellion against his clan’s traditions. That unbridled spirit attracted another legendary summon: the Monkey King Enma, longtime companion of the Third Hokage. Enma tested Angel in combat among the Iron Country’s peaks. When the battle ended, Enma laughed — “You have the soul of iron and the will of fire. I will lend you my strength.”

PartIII The Dance of Shadow, Jade, Steel, and Venom
The scene was set atop a treacherous, high mountain pass, a place of crumbling stone and thin, biting wind. It was not the majestic, weathered peaks of Mount Myōboku, but a secluded, jagged spur that felt closer to the clouds than the earth. The sky was an unforgiving, oppressive gray, matching the cold, oxidized color of the exposed bedrock. This isolation amplified the spiritual energy of the three combatants, creating an unnerving tension.

Wei Wuxian made no attempt at stealth; he was simply enjoying the view. Perched carelessly atop a moss-covered boulder, he used his flute, Chenqing, to play a tune that was by turns wistful and chaotic—a perfect reflection of his nature. He was an anomaly in this barren landscape: his flowing black robes with red trim a splash of color, his long, unkempt black hair held only by a simple ribbon, swaying freely. Despite his famously playful personality and outwardly flawless, jade-like skin, his eyes held the deep, knowing focus of a master cultivator. He preferred to live freely, but the spiritual current running through the mountain had pulled his attention—a tremor of calculated malice that he found utterly irresistible. He was waiting for the source of the chaos to reveal itself.

The source arrived moments later, standing a hundred paces below. Shirou, the Nara prodigy, was the embodiment of serene threat. His silvery white hair was unbound, cascading over the collar of his striking red holy shroud and vestments. The golden cross around his neck and his peaceful posture contradicted the visible evidence of a brutal life: a tanned body covered in the faint lines of scars, body seals, and summoning tattoos. His dark, ageless golden eyes fixed on Wei Wuxian with the surgical focus of a predator. He was unnaturally intelligent and supremely arrogant, his inner ambition—a brutal path to "peace"—barely contained beneath his innocent exterior. The Kāma mark on his right palm throbbed a faint, ominous crimson, a ticking clock of power that he was clearly enjoying controlling. He saw Wei Wuxian as little more than an obstacle or, worse, a tactical element to be toyed with.


Angel's presence was the least natural of all. He had been stalking Shirou, sensing the volatile, destructive nature of the Kāma, and arrived in silence, a massive, imposing figure positioned strategically behind Wei Wuxian. Angel stood at a towering six feet, three inches, his muscular, hench body encased in heavy grey and black metallic armor. His short, blonde curly hair seemed to absorb the muted light. His soulless black eyes were devoid of warmth, fixed entirely on Shirou’s posture and energy flow. He was a creature of singular focus, his mind working with a warrior's discipline. The sheer volume of his physical power and the deadly nature of his steel razor blades (dormant but felt in the air) was a coiled spring of pure force, awaiting the command to unleash.


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To be continued...​
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Weapons/technology


(Hairihhi Bōgun) - Holy Bow
Type: Weapon
Rank: N/A
Range: N/A
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Curated for marksmen, the Holy Bow is composed of a highly malleable and adaptive unknown material, labeled Reishi, granting the bow a unique set of abilities that work to both protect and enhance a marksmen's combat capabilities, severely improving the lethality of those who properly wield it. Holy Bow has three forms, but throughout all of them multiple sealing scripts appear on it, relating to the bow's functions. In it's default state, the Holy Bow is in the form of 3 collared layers of Reishi in silver coloring with a tint of purple. In it's partial release, it assumes the shape of silver coloured bow that can also be used in close quarter combat in place of a bladed weapon. The user can also form the Bow. In it's full release, it's shape undergoes another drastic change, now taking on the shape of numerous molecular sequenced purple Reishi that appear on the majority of the marksmen's upper body in the form of belts, bracelets, wings, and other basic shapes up the user's discretion. In this form, the user would not need to physically act to fire off arrows, but would simply pay 5 additional chakra to fire off of his arrows, with them being released from the circular portions. Up to ten circles can be made, with the user gaining the ability to fire off multiple arrows at a single go, but naturally splitting the power between them.

(Za Desudīringu) - The Deathdealing
The Bow's first and passive ability, present in all of it's forms, it is the Bow's inane function of detecting and absorbing toxins, poisons, and other inhibiting chemical/biological substances that enter short range of it through an invisible barrier. Through The Deathdealing, the user is able to absorb said substances and infuse them into the Holy Bow at increased potency, allowing attacks performed through the Holy Bow to carry said traits. In regards to the increased potency aspect, the substances would either have their offensive capabilities increased by a rank/next level if applicable, or have their defensive capabilities increased, making them more resistant to cures or attacks that seek to destroy it. This comes at the cost of decreasing the time the substances would have lasted by a turn, with the infusions themselves lasting that duration. Notably, each substance can only be enhanced by one quality of the two. In it's passive usage, The Deathdealing is capable of taking in any unranked substance from an opposition, whereas it can take in any of the user's own regardless of it's rank, consuming 5 chakra points. Should the user wish to absorb ranked substances from the opponent, they can up to three times per battle, at a cost of fourty chakra, separated by a turn interval. While The Deathdealing serves no offensive purpose in the Bow's default state, in it's partial and full releases, the infusion's add an overall lethality to the user's attacks through the traits they may add upon the bow. Notably, the DeathDealings cap for absorbed substances is five, with only two substances being absorbable per turn.

(Hairihhi Pufairu) - Sacred Destruction Arrows
Only usable in the Bow's partial and full releases, Hairihhi Pufairu is the Bow's main combat function, enabling the user to release arrows up to long range away, at varying strength levels, starting at freeform, and capping at fourty chakra points, wherein A ranks levels can be used thrice, and S rank levels can be used twice, but separated by a turn interval. Through the sealing scripts on the weapon, the user is capable of summoning arrows from their personal armoury, negating the need to carry arrows on their person. Alternatively, the user can fire off chakra based arrows, carrying the traits of the used chakra type, but costing an additional 10 chakra to utilise. In the Bow's full release, the fired off arrows would emerge from the circular points of the Reishi, functioning without any impediment to range and power. Naturally, the summoning of arrows itself does not take up a move slot. The arrows, be it physical or chakra based, carry a detonation function, having the arrows explode either on contact or through the user's will, with physical arrows having the infused substances released in a short range raduis, whereas chakra based ones would release both the chakra and infusions. This means physical arrows would not cause pure damage to the afflicted area, whereas chakra based ones would depending on it's used rank.

(Hasuhain) - God's Posion Taster
Only accessible in the bow's full release, Hasuhain is the Bow's final supplementary function, relating to manipulating the Reishi into various different forms, such as a a staff, or other simple manipulations, enabling the user to shape the Reishi into other weapon forms that would be capable of firing off Hairihhi Pufairu through the circular portions. What makes this function dangerous is the user's ability to remotely control the Reishi, somewhat akin to the Lightning Blades Levitation technique, but on a more specific level wherein the user can control each individual Reishi up to long range, allowing the user to potentially fire off attacks from the opponents blindspots. Notably, this costs five chakra per turn per each individual Reishi the user chooses to manipulate. Due to the interconnected nature of the bow and the seals on it, the effects of Deathdealing would not be restricted to around the user, but around each Resihi circle, with the effects being shared across the different Reishi points through one of the intricate Fuin seals that serve as gateways for the Reishi to one another.

Holy Bow carries an S Rank durability, with lower ranked attacks on it not weakening it, but breaking from anything higher, with the user naturally not being able to use that for defensive purposes. When in it's full release form, specifically in Hasuhain, the power of the Reishi would be split amongst each circle of Reishi and it's chosen shape. Changing between the weapons forms is passive, costing five chakra points, with the weapon itself consuming five chakra points to be considered active.



( Abusōbu Ude ) - Absorption Arm
Type: Tool
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra: N/A ( 40 chakra per use )
Damage: N/A
Description: A cyborg attachment to the user's body, the user has a robotic limb that allows for him to create spheres of energy that are capable of absorbing chakra up to S rank level. These spheres are capable of dealing brute force on impact as well, growing to large heights, up to 4 meters in radius. Starting at roughly rasengan size, these spheres grow proportionally to the size of the technique absorbed. Normal Ninja are able to make use of one of these devices via specialized gloves that allow them to absorb 1 Ninjutsu per turn up to S rank while Cyborgs have these attachments and are able to absorb up to Forbidden powered attacks and 1 from each arm per turn.
Note: Can be used a max of 3 times for Ninja and 6 for Cyborgs.
Note: Cyborg can have up to 2 Absorption Arms.

( Mikagami Dorōn ) - Mirror Drone
Type: Tool
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30 Initial Cost (-10 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: This Scientific Ninja Tool is a disk-shaped drone that can be controlled remotely with chakra to fly and attack. The user can have up to four drones which he can use to fire Jutsu Bullets from that are strong enough to render a target unconscious and move at comparable speed to Lightning jutsu. These drones are able to be used up to long range, or one landamark adjacent to the user's location.
Note: User can only have 2 max. Cyborg bios can have up to 4, either counting as 1 slot.
Note: Once deployed, Mirror Drones last up to 8 turns before their battery dies, requiring a break of the same amount of time before they can be used. Cyborg bios have double the using time for half the charging time ( only 4 turns to recharge battery).
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I'm sure you'll pick a decent character one day O_<

ooo repeating yourself, im sure you be less boring as the years grown on z.z

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ooo repeating yourself, im sure you be less boring as the years grown on z.z

Waiting for someone to drop someone *cough cough*
If you want a decent bio... delete this... go c/p the coding from prototype on my alt... post that...
 
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