[Photoshop] Android from Space + an avatar

[Horus]

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I got the render from Sikk's render pack! Thanks Sikk!

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[suki]

Amazing work! Everything looks perfect.

 

[Shuuya]

The lighting is just :ilu:

 

[Sikk]

Ohhh it looks great! I'm loving the colors, and text is very fitting :flowers

 

[Horus]

Thanks everyone! And thanks especially to Sikk for the render

Anyone has any CnC? T_T

 

[Beastbomb]

Nice job mate

Those colors always work well together so they are a nice choice. I feel the tag lacks depth though, and I think a lot of that is due to the c4d work in the background. They actually overwhelm the entire background due to the size of them. With the canvas size you should have gone either with a background entirely made of c4d's, or made the c4d's smaller. I think smaller would have been the better option, that way you get more of your background image which has some blur on it, then keep the smaller c4d's sharper and some foreground c4d's with a bit of blur as well. Maybe a 0.4px guassian blur this would maximize the depth, and would have worked perfectly with the lighting and shading you have, which is spot on imo.

I also think you could have worked on the flow a bit more, there is some flow but there is more of a chaotic appearance tbh. But other than that its a pretty good job

 

[Deliquesce]

Awesome !

 

[Horus]

Nice job mate

Those colors always work well together so they are a nice choice. I feel the tag lacks depth though, and I think a lot of that is due to the c4d work in the background. They actually overwhelm the entire background due to the size of them. With the canvas size you should have gone either with a background entirely made of c4d's, or made the c4d's smaller. I think smaller would have been the better option, that way you get more of your background image which has some blur on it, then keep the smaller c4d's sharper and some foreground c4d's with a bit of blur as well. Maybe a 0.4px guassian blur this would maximize the depth, and would have worked perfectly with the lighting and shading you have, which is spot on imo.

I also think you could have worked on the flow a bit more, there is some flow but there is more of a chaotic appearance tbh. But other than that its a pretty good job

Thanks for the tips Beast Bomb
I really appreciate the CnC!

Awesome !

Thanks ^^

 

[Sol Uchiha]

Great work, loving the colors

 

[Azu]

Looks great! xD

 

[LitzSabr]

For the tag, bit excessive use of C4Ds but more importantly, with that amount you would want to make sure the flow is good. It's kinda messy here, especially towards right of her head. Text is good, not too sure on the placement though. Can work better if placed near the focal above. Rest is pretty good, GJ. :hmm:

 

[Elmage G Ace]

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Well it's a masterpiece, but I'd try to CnC

I'd start with the background, flow, lighting and depth. Personally I think a basic key to an awesome tag is in creating a nice background, and you've done quite good here but I'd just have to point out some flaws, as they say; no one is perfect.
The C4Ds are a bit too large and covers most part of the background, now this would've been perfect had you used a bg made of C4D entirely, but in this case it doesn't always come out nice,and this affects the flow of your sig too, making it look, as said earlier chaotic abit I'd suggest reducing them a bit, and maybe repositioning them, I know its not always easy in verticals but that would improve the flow, and also use more C4Ds that makes the flow perfect while not affecting the depth. The depth here is not bad, the only problem is the c4d, but I think bb has cleared that already.
The lighting is great and I like how well blended it is, overall really nice, don't mind all the technicalities of tag making too much

 

[Horus]

Great work, loving the colors

Thanks

Looks great! xD

Thanks Spongebob

For the tag, bit excessive use of C4Ds but more importantly, with that amount you would want to make sure the flow is good. It's kinda messy here, especially towards right of her head. Text is good, not too sure on the placement though. Can work better if placed near the focal above. Rest is pretty good, GJ. :hmm:

Hey thanks Litz
Yeah the placement is a bit screwed up but when tried placing it at the rule of thirds grid intersections, it made the bottom look empty and I was pretty much too lazy to fix that lol
Thanks for the CnC though

Well it's a masterpiece, but I'd try to CnC

I'd start with the background, flow, lighting and depth. Personally I think a basic key to an awesome tag is in creating a nice background, and you've done quite good here but I'd just have to point out some flaws, as they say; no one is perfect.
The C4Ds are a bit too large and covers most part of the background, now this would've been perfect had you used a bg made of C4D entirely, but in this case it doesn't always come out nice,and this affects the flow of your sig too, making it look, as said earlier chaotic abit I'd suggest reducing them a bit, and maybe repositioning them, I know its not always easy in verticals but that would improve the flow, and also use more C4Ds that makes the flow perfect while not affecting the depth. The depth here is not bad, the only problem is the c4d, but I think bb has cleared that already.
The lighting is great and I like how well blended it is, overall really nice, don't mind all the technicalities of tag making too much

Most of my tags usually defy the idea of flow >_>
Even if I try not to xD
Thanks for the CnC though, I really appreciate it