An Impossible Threat. Chapter Four: True Strength

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Madara settled onto the ground, surveying the scene before him. Sasuke and Zetsu in a pile on his left, completely chakraless, four ninja in the trees a little ways away, nearly chakraless, and a strange man never before seen by any member of the current Akatsuki, with enough chakra to make it seem as though he had taken everyone's chakra for himself.
Madara: What's going on, here!? Sasuke, who is this; what happened!?
Sasuke slowly gets to his feet, pushing on Zetsu for support, and makes his way over to Madara.
Sasuke: He's... Strong. When his chakra cloak is active, he's so invunerable to genjutsu, even Tsukuyomi doesn't work. And ninjutsu does nothing, except elemental ninjutsu. He can use all elemental ninjutsu of yours of whatever element you hit him with! And don't even try taijutsu, he sends back the force you hit him with to whatever you used to hit him!
Madara: What about without this, chakra cloak, that I have yet to see?
Sasuke: He used some sort of jutsu that drained Zetsu and my chakra level's to absolute zero, and then called himself some sort of 'taijutsu god' and beat us to the ground.
Madara: Why didn't you stop the 'taijutsu god' with taijutsu of your own?
Sasuke: Because I hit him with Chidori, and he hit me with Kirin! And my Chidori did nothing!
Madara: I see...

Gredon had just finished translating all of Sasuke's words, but not Madara's.
Kyden: This may be new to you, but we need to know what everyone's saying!
Gredon: Well excuse me for not being able to read the lips of people who wear masks!
Shinto: That's enough, you two! Gredon, I want to know about chakra status!
Gredon: The guy's absorbed all the chakra around him, absorbing less from things that are farther away. I have enough chakra to use my Byakugan, but that's about it. For people closer to him, like Sasuke, he can't even use the most basic Sharingan.
C: Wait, he's absorbed all of these chakra's!?!?
Gredon: Yes, he has a massive chakra reserve-
Kyden: But he can't use any of it until he uses his External Chakra Flow Jutsu!
Gredon: That's right, and I watched the action of chakra nodes going into his body; not as easy as it sounds. It looks dreadfully complex, and while he has a massive chakra reserve, I think that's the exact problem.
Shinto: Why?
Gredon: Because when his nodes come out, all of his chakra comes out with it, right? Well, when he uses that jutsu, he compresses all of his chakra into tiny threads, and with the ammount of chakra he has right now, such a concentration of chakra could literally tear him apart!
C: Well, we can't just leave him; this guy could be our key to winning the war!
Shinto: But he doesn't want to pick a side.
C: Maybe he will once he sees how truely evil Madara is.
Kyden: Let's just hope that doesn't bring out his evil.
Kyden pulled out the scroll he had used to contact Gredon and began writing.
Gredon: Who are you writing to now?
Kyden: Lady Tsunade.
Dear Lady Tsunade.
We request Naruto to come out to our mission, as this guy may be our key to winning the war, and he's about to die at the hands of Madara. The only one who can possible save him is the great, Naruto Uzumaki, Jinchuriki of the Kyuubi! ~Kyden.

Request granted. ~Godaime Hokage.
The communication scroll worked simmilarly to the previous scrolls, used by Nigashi and Kyden, but these transfered written word from one scroll to another, instead of spoken word to written word.

Meanwhile, on the battle field...
Madara: So, I will ask this one more time. WHO ARE YOU!?!?!?!?
???: And I will say, one more time, I have no name!
Madara: That's it, you've had your chance!
Madara rushed the man, and swipped his weapon at the man, pushing him into a tree.
???: GAK!
???(To himself): This chakra had better leave my body fast; I'm not sure how much longer I can last without my shield, and the fight's just begun!

Gredon: Hey, guys. Something wierd's going on.
Shinto: What?
Gredon: He's pushing the chakra he's absorbed out of his body, probably to use his chakra cloak safely, but it's how he's doing it that's wierd.
Shinto: Of course it is. How's he doing it?
Gredon: From the farthest point in, instead of the closest point out.
Shinto: That doesn't even make any sense!
C: Everything about this guy makes no sense!

Madara: I asked you a simple question; tell me what I want to know!
???: I've been trying, but you weren't listening!
Madara: I WAS listening, but your answer made no sense!
Madara brought down his weapon like an ax, and the man blocked it with his sword. Then the man tried to cut Madara by the waist, by his sword went right through the phasing Madara.
Madara: You have your way to stay invincable, and I have mine! Wind Style: TORNADOE CLAW!
Madara span his weapon around fast enough to make a miniature tornadoe, and slashed through the man with it. The man was blown over to Sasuke, who had picked up his sword and was ready to stab the man. The man flipped to his feet, knocked Sasuke's sword out of his hand, nearly cutting off his wrist in the process, and continued unsuccessful attempts to impale, and then behead, the chakraless Sasuke.
Madara: ALMIGHTY PULL!

Gredon: That literally just left a chakra form in the shape of that guy! And I can actually see a little bubble of chakra closing in on him.

Sasuke: I can't believe this guy's power! If it weren't for Madara, I'd be dead by now!
Zetsu: If you just did what I did, try not to fight him again, you wouldn't even have needed Madara's help!
Sasuke: Shut up, you bi-polar daisy.
Zetsu: DAISY!?!?!?
Madara held the mysterious man up in the air with his Almighty Pull.
Madara: All I want to know is your name, and I'll set you down, nice and gentle.
The chakra bubble the man was creating in an attempt to use his External Chakra Flow Jutsu closed in around the sensors, restoring them to their original chakra levels. Then it closed on Sasuke and Zetsu, returning to them their entire set of chakra that they had lost before in the fight. And then the bubble slowly came down to the man hiself.

Gredon: Five... Four...

Madara: I give up! I'm just going to kill you! Do you have any last words, mister?

Gredon: Three... Two..

???: Yeah, actually.

Gredon: One....

???: EXTERNAL CHAKRA FLOW JUTSU!!!!!!
There was an explosion of chakra as the chakra bubble closed in on the man. Sasuke, Gredon, and Madara were all blinded due to their dojutsu looking straight at the chakra blast. The man's chakra nodes turned into chakra rings, and surrounded the parts of his body they should've been at inside. Then the rings exploded massive waves of chakra, flowing all around his body, creating the same shield he had before. This chakra blast sent a ripple of power down the forest, pushing grass as if it were a strong wind that went on and on and on. Madara was pushed into the ground, and Sasuke and Zetsu were pushed back into their wall. The four sensors were nearly ripped right off of their pearch, if it weren't for their own chakra holding on. The man fell gently to the ground and faced Madara.
???: Now, I ask you. Do you have any last words, Madara Uchiha!?
Madara: How do you know my name!?
???: The man from the Joint Shinobi Alliance told me that a man with both the Sharingan, and Rinnegan is called Madara Uchiha.
Madara: Fine, I have some final words. Just one, and it's just for you. DIE!
Madara's Sharingan went from a three tomote, to Mangekyo, and to Eternal Mangekyo.
Madara: ETERNAL AMATRATSU!
The man literally brushed off the more powerful Amatratsu.
???: Is that all you've got?

Naruto: Hey, am I too late!?
Shinto: If you look at it one way, yes. If you look at it another, no.
Naruto: What's that supposed to mean?
Gredon: You missed him when he was defensless, but you're just in time to see him kick Madara's little Uchiha butt!
Naruto: What?
Naruto peered over the branch to get a better look.

???(To himself): I sense the nine-tails. It must be the ninja which they call, 'Naruto Uzumaki'. We'll have to talk later.
Sasuke: I told you, Madara! Ninjutsu's nothing!
Madara: Quiet!
Madara spun his strange weapon.
Madara: Wind Style: MASSIVE TORNADOE DESTRUCTION!
Madara swipped his weapon, sending a growing tornadoe towards the mysterious man.
???: It appears as though you like wind style, no?
Before Madara could answer, the tornadoe hit the man, and sent him flying into a tree. He didn't take any damage, it was more like being pushed onto a cushin for him. He did more damage to the tree than the tree did to him.
Sasuke: Now, I know that you absorb and reuse average elements, but what about special ones? Blaze Style: AMATRATSU HAMMER!
The blazing hammer came down hard on the man, still in the tornadoe, and thus creating an even more hazardous enviroment for him; a blazing tornadoe, and right against the tree the sensors were in.
???(To himself): Blaze Style, a combination of fire and lightning. I have lightning at my disposal, but it's been over two and a half hours since I've been in contact with fire, making Blaze Style usesless to me. However, my ingenious with lightning and wind styles, which came with the styles themselves, should be enough to send these guys packing!

Shinto: Everyone, back up! This thing's going to burn to a crisp!
The four sensors and Naruto jumped to the tree behind them, watching the tree before them, which they were just on, burn to the ground.

???: Wind Style: Four Winds Gathering!
Winds blew from all directions, causing Madara, Sasuke, and Zetsu to come to the same spot. It also caused clouds to merge and concentrate into rain clouds.
Sasuke: He's doing it again!
???: KIRIN!
The lightning bolt crashed down upon the three Akatsuki, Madara phasing through it, Zestu trying to go underground (not fast enough), and Sasuke completely vunerable to the blast.
Madara: It seems as though you've hit everything except your target.
Then Madara turned his head back to the man, who was already at his throat with his sword, which was also affected by External Chakra Flow Jutsu. Madara jumped back in shock, but the man was able to get a clean cut across his chest.
Madara(To himself): I should've phased through that! What's happening!?
???: Your jutsu is no match for mine. You cannot phase through it, because it's unique structure makes it impossible to phase through.
Madara: Sasuke, you were right. He IS too powerful. And as he refuses to join us, I'm done here.
Madara began to warp away when the man threw a chakra cloaked kunai at him. This kunai not only hit, but it shook Madara so off balance, that his jutsu stopped.
???: You're not going anywhere, Madara. So far, you're my most fun opponent in many, many years.
Madara: I thank you for the flattery, but I really must be-
Once again, the man was at Madara's throat in the blink of an eye.
???: FIGHT!
The man and Madara traded blows, the man landing some hits, Madara landing alot of hits, but none of the hit's Madara made were successful in doing any damage.
Madara: ALMIGHTY PUSH!
Madara tried to warp away, hopping that his jutsu would push the man away for long enough, but the man's chakra cloak merely ate all of the chakra that was trying to manipulate him and cut Madara's arm, for the fourth time.
Madara: You really are a b******, aren't you? Sasuke! Zetsu! Come fight!
So the battle raged on. The man mainly focused on Madara, but whenever Zetsu went underground to try and plant his spore like before, the man jumped into the air, and came straight down with his sword, impaling Zetsu every time, if he hadn't gone back under. After nearly ten minutes of fighting, Sasuke and Zetsu were exhausted, and Madara was as close to tired as he had been in years.
Madara: No one's been such a good match for my powers since my own brother, Izuna.
???: Is that so?
Madara: But this battle has gone on for long enough!
???: I agree.
The man rose into the air, preparing for his Absolute Chakra Absobtion Jutsu. All three Akatsuki looked at each other, from their positions in a triangle formation around him.
Sasuke: Bye!
Sasuke warped away.
Zetsu: I'm not staying for that again!
Zetsu disappeared underground with Mayfly.
Madara: If Sasuke and Zetsu are so scared of whatever this is, I don't care how powerful I am, I'm not sticking around to see it!
Madara warped away.

Gredon: He's going to do it and leave himself vunerable for them to come back!
Naruto: RASENGAN!
Naruto launched himself from the tree and towards the floating chakra-cloaked man. He made contact, doing no damage, but still stopping the jutsu.
???: What was that for!?
Naruto: They're gone, and I didn't want you to leave yourself vuneralbe for when they come back.
???: Then I suppose a thank you is in order, Naruto Uzumaki.
Naruto: How do you know my name?
???: I was told by the non-Hyuuga with a Byakugan that the one with the nine-tails is Naruto Uzumaki, and I can sense the nine-tails in you.
Naruto: What? HOW!?
???: Ask your friends, they can tell you. As for myself, I'm done fighting for a while. I will return when you least expect it, so be ready. I wish you luck on your war, Naruto Uzumaki.
The man used chakra propulsion to launch himself far into the forest, away from the strongest sensors range in a single bound.
???: And thank you...
 
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yeah, it's all off the top of my head. and i'm going to say this right now, the next three chapters don't continue the story thus far, but they fit in later! yes, like a prequal. it gives more of a background to ???, some of his checks an balances, and even, his name! you read right, the next chapter reveals his name!
 
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yeah, it's all off the top of my head. and i'm going to say this right now, the next three chapters don't continue the story thus far, but they fit in later! yes, like a prequal. it gives more of a background to ???, some of his checks an balances, and even, his name! you read right, the next chapter reveals his name!
one question in the next chapter will it show how the mystery guy got so powerful?
 
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