An illusion with nathan

[Nathan]

One thing.... need to be more descriptive. I will show you a battle I am currently in. Obviously doesn't have to be that detailed. Just more then what you currently have showed me.

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Have a quick read, and if you have questions about anything do ask, please.

Some questions:
1. How thick is the fog? Do you create the fog using your mouth, or using a water source?
2. How does the tree bind me? Where does it come from, does the tree appear in front of me, behind me, or beneath me?
3. Which hand do you throw the shuriken with? Where did you grab out the Windmill Shuriken from? They are large. Not small.

And, when posting the techniques, put them in the order you are using them, so the (Kage Shuriken no Jutsu) - Shadow Shuriken Technique would be the last one you use.

 

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I start by concentrating my suiton chakra in my mouth , dispelling a thick mist from my mouth which blinds me and my sensei,knowing the last position he was in, i weave 5handseal,placing you under a genjutsu where a quickly tree grows out of the ground binds,making you feel immobilized,after which i throw 2 giant shurikens,with both hands at the same time,one in the shadow of the other,which is aimed at your neck and stomach which slices your throat as you gasp for death,slow and painful

Spoiler

(Kirigakure No Jutsu) - Hidding in Mist Jutsu
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This displacement technique creates a thick mist to spring forth by lifting up some water from either a pre-existing source or expelled from their mouth, then goes in and out of sight at will from within the pearly-white realm. The mist's thickness is controlled by the amount of chakra kneaded into it. It can't fool the Byakugan, but, due to the mist being created with the user's chakra, any Sharingan and Rinnegan-user will see the mist coloured by theiropponent's chakra, which will effectively hide the user from the dōjutsu.
Note: Can be created through releasing from mouth or manipulating a nearby water
(Magen: Jubaku Satsu) - Demonic Illusion: Tree Binding Death
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user makes five handseals, and appears to dissolve into a mist. Once they stealthily approach the target and get within short-range, the opponent feels completely immobilized, and believes they have been bound by a fast-growing tree and are unable to move. The user then appears as if they emerge from thetree to attack the target. In reality, the target is immobilized, allowing the user to strike or interrogate them.
(Kage Shuriken no Jutsu) - Shadow Shuriken Technique
Rank: D
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:20
Description: Kage Shuriken no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing a giant Windmill Shuriken. When throwing the shuriken, the ninja will also throw a second giant shuriken to hide in the shadow of the first. The hidden secondary shuriken can then approach the target without their being aware.

 

[Nathan]

Much better.

But, you didn't check the link. Since the link wasn't working, and you could have told me that.

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Click the link, check it out. Once done come back here, and we will resume.

 

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Checked it sir......

 

[Nathan]

Any questions?

 

[Lytes]

No ............

 

[Nathan]

Alright.

(Genjutsu: Ingemame Ketsugō Sakkaku) - Illusion Technique String Bean Binding Illusion
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: Similar to Illusion Technique: Tree Binding Death, where the user first disappears, while the target sees several bean vines growing from the ground. These vines bind the target body, lifting them into the air. Then a bean pod rises from the ground to reveal the user, ready to strike. In reality, the opponent is immobilized by the illusion, allowing the user to strike.

Similar to the last technique you learnt, but with small changes, as you just disappear I'd think like the latter. That starts the genjutsu, the target will see bean vines grow from the ground, and grabbing the target lifting them up into the air, then a bean pod emerges from the ground showing the caster, about to start the target. Seems what rather again obvious imo. I wouldn't use it, but if you were in a area with plants that big you could maybe pull it off.

 

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Advantage
-It can be used to fool the opponent that am a wood user
-It actually makes the opponent feel immobilized
-No handseal required
Disadvantages
-Since the vine just comes outta nowhere,easy to detect
-Can be seen through by dojutsu users
-If not used in hidden in mist,it will be obvious as i will just disappear
Use in battleI will use Suiton: Hidden in mist,then use this Jutsu as this blocks the opponent's view then i quickly make opponent feel immobilized by a growing vine ,i will then attack them with a kunai through the head
CounterHe is not a wood user ,and the vine just formed around me, it must be genjutsu while i bite a chunk of my cheek
PerformI concentrate my chakra into my head when i have gathered enough,i release it into the air making it get into the user's chakra pathway, forcing it into my opponent's brain while connecting to his optical sense producing a picture of a vine binding them and i also make them believe they are immobilized while in real life,they are just standing there

 

[Nathan]

Good.

(Genjutsu: Oshitsubusu Hebi Kubire) - Illusion Technique: Crushing Snake Constriction
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user puts the opponent into a genjutsu which has snakes appear beneath the opponent to constrict them and with the users command, they crush the opponent. In reality, the opponent is immobilized and takes damage due to the stress on his mind.

With this one all you need to do is look at your target or clap your hands, either one. Once you do one of those two, your target will be placed in the gen, he will see snakes appear from the ground, and with your command the snakes start to crush and hold back the target from attacking you, and crushing them also. The target will take metal damage. This is one of the more used techniques, since it is handy and less obvious.

 

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ADVANTAGE
-It fools the opponent i can summon snakes
-Requires no handseal
-Lesz obvious
DISADVANTAGE
-Since the snakes appear outta nowhere without biting myself, it will be broken easily
USE IN BATTLE I will use this jutsu after hidden in mist, then use (Katon: Ryūen Hōka no Jutsu) - Fire Release: Dragon Flame Release Song Technique
COUNTER
Since the snakes appear without the opponent doing the summoning process , i bite my cheek
PERFORM I concentrate my chakra into my head when i have gathered enough,i release it into the air making it get into the user's chakra pathway, forcing it into my opponent's brain while connecting to his optical sense producing a picture of snakes binding them and i also make them believe they are immobilized while in real life,they are just standing there

 

[Nathan]

Last B-rank till A-ranks!

(Genjutsu: Hanaoka) - Illusion Technique: Flower Hill
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user summons up illusionary purple flowers from the ground in front of them, damaging enemies with a chance to paralyze them.
Note: Paralysis lasts one turn.

This technique leaves people a bit unsure, I think you perform a single hand seal which then places the person in the genjutsu, they will see some purple flowers grow from the ground in front of them, somehow damaging them, with a chance of paralysing them. If they do get paralysed it last for one turn.
Range is meh, seems obvious unless you're in a forest or whatnot.

 

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ADVANTAGE
-It fools the opponent i can use wood
-Requires Only one handseal handseal
-Less obvious for a wood user
DISADVANTAGE
-Since the flowers is obvious if not used by a wood user , it will be broken easily
USE IN BATTLE
I will use this jutsu after Deep Forest Emergence , then use (Katon: Ryūen Hōka no Jutsu) - Fire Release: Dragon Flame Release Song Technique
COUNTER
Since the flowers appear without the opponent being a wood user , i bite my cheek
PERFORM
I concentrate my chakra into my head when i have gathered enough,i release it into the air making it get into the user's chakra pathway, forcing it into my opponent's brain while connecting to his optical sense producing a picture of flowers growing in front of them and i also make them believe they are immobilized while in real life,they are just standing there

 

[Nathan]

This is a B-rank technique you'd have to do more than just bite your cheek, what is another thing you could do to get out of the genjutsu?

 

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I stab my arm with a kunai

 

[Nathan]

Good.

Moving onto A-ranks now! Come on get to 2,400 posts.

(Magen: Chō Shinka) - Demonic Illusion: Butterfly Evolution
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user makes one handseal, placing the opponent in a genjutsu. The user then tosses a large number of explosive tags at the opponent. To the opponent, it looks as if they are countless butterflies. The opponent then believes they are sinking into the ground, in reality making them immobilized; this allows the user to place one final exploding tag on their forehead before detonating all the tags simultaneously.

This one is nice. Perform the one seal, then with that seal placing my clone in your genjutsu, you will throw a good amount of explosive tags at my clone, he will see in the illusion an undefined amount of butterflies flying towards him, my clone will think the butterflies are sinking into the ground [wot] but outside the genjutsu, he is getting stunned, this allows you to walk up to him and place a single exploding tag on his forward. Once you have done that walk away from him, and then detonate them all at once.

 

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Advantage
-Can kill an opponent if no countered
-It can be easily activated requiring only one handseal
-Immobilizes the opponent
Disadvantages
-Pretty easy to cancel since only people who can summon butterflies can summon butterflies
-The user has to get into short before its complete

Use in battle
I will use this Jutsu after using lightning surge then quickly move
at the opponent putting a tag on them
Counter
He only weave one handseal,he hasn't summoned any butterfly in the battle,he isn't aburame , it must be genjutsu while i stab myself
Perform
I concentrate my chakra into my head when i have
gathered enough,i release it into the air making it get
into the user's chakra pathway, forcing it into my
opponent's brain while connecting to his optical
sense producing a picture of butterflies coming at them and them having the feeling they are sinking while
indeed its tags coming at them

 

[Nathan]

Good, get 20 more posts.

(Nehan Shōja no Jutsu) - Temple of Nirvana Technique
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user makes one handseal, placing all the targets in the area under an illusion where feathers appear to fall from the sky. This slowly puts the opponents to sleep after one turn.

This one has poor range, but yeah; perform the single handseal, with that handseal traps everyone but yourself in the genjutsu, of course within the said range, from there the target will see feathers falling from the sky placing said targets in a deep sleep, but only when one turn passes. Not the most used technique here, nor one of the most useful ones.

 

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Advantage
-It can be easily activated requiring only one handseal
-Immobilizes the opponent
Disadvantages
-Pretty easy to Since feathers just appear
-The user has to get into short using
Use in battle
I will use this Jutsu in short range then quickly tag the opponent's head
Counter
He only weave one handseal,he come feathers just show up in the battle,he isn't a bird , it must be genjutsu while i stab myself
PerformI concentrate my chakra into my head when i have gathered enough,i release it into the air making it getinto the user's chakra pathway, forcing it into myopponent's brain while connecting to his optical sense producing a picture of feathers raining on them and them having the feeling they are sleeping while indeed they are standing still

 

[Nathan]

Where would you stab yourself?

 

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My arm?,not so sure,the link you sent didn't specify