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A image I got carried away with last night, haven't been able to complete anything for like two weeks. Got a break inbetween exams and took the chance.

I would really like it if people could offer strict CnC, as an art student, I want to improve. Preferably colour wise.

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Not bad. I'm no professional, but I don't see anything obviously wrong with the colors you used here. Heck, you even used darker colors on parts of the body that are covered by the pillar of ice, and brighter colors on spots where the light is touching. I guess the only thing that could use some work is the background, it's very bland. I think if you would have put your point of light in the upper right, and off into the distance it would have allowed for a much broader range of color.
 

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It's good but i'cant Tell you anymore about it Because I'm not an expert. But as a general person I'll say it good
 

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Not bad. I'm no professional, but I don't see anything obviously wrong with the colors you used here. Heck, you even used darker colors on parts of the body that are covered by the pillar of ice, and brighter colors on spots where the light is touching. I guess the only thing that could use some work is the background, it's very bland. I think if you would have put your point of light in the upper right, and off into the distance it would have allowed for a much broader range of color.
Thanks for the input, now that you point it out, it would have been a much smarter option.xd

It's good but i'cant Tell you anymore about it Because I'm not an expert. But as a general person I'll say it good
Thanks nonetheless.:)
 

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I m not really the one to critique but i will give it anyway :D
First of all,its not clear where is the light source,the light on ice shows that the light source is at top left,but as you have shaded the right arm it seems that light source is at top right,and then there are those cyan-ish "light lines" around the shoulders showing that light source is behind.
Ice actually doesnt have those dark colors you painted
but the composition is quite nice though :)
 

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the colors are amazing...your input aswell...only i think the blank background is a bit too...blank...maybe some more mountains there wouldve made it very nice...but nevertheless this is amazing aswell....:)
 

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Okay then, gotta make sure to fix up lighting and improve backgrounds~ thanks.:)
 

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this is an amazing picture,
 

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Woah, this is amazing. I'm really liking this piece and the previous alot ! ;)

I'm kinda jealous of your talent with colour. :p Especially with the ice. I rarely use colour in my drawings, but this is really, really, really good ! xd



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The field of colour, is one of the things that keep me going with art!XD Thankyou both.:)
 
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