Ame-No-Wakahiko: Chapter 2

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"setting: on hiroshis roof*
"time: night"


Woman: We blew it.

Man: No there's still another way...there has to be. I can't let this happen, it's my fault if that demon get's loose.

*He grips the cloth of his pants in frustration as the woman places her right hand on his left shoulder.*​


Woman: I'll try to think of something.

*She then places her hand on her chin thinking*​

Woman: Hmm well ther is one way, but it breaks the rules of the spirit world.

*The man grabs the woman by her shoulders*​

Man: Tell Me right now!

*The woman smacks his hands away*​

Woman: Fine, just calm down!

*the man relaxes*​

Woman: Okay now I thi-

*She pauses in the middle of her sentence.*​

Man: whats wrong?

Woman: D- Do you feel that?

Man: Feel what?

Woman: Stop talking and focus on the energy around you.

*The man closes his eyes trying to focus on the energy.*​

Man: Yeah, the pattern in the energy here has changed. What does that mean?

Woman: It means that there is now another being here that has such high spiritual energy that it messed up the pattern of the human world.

Man: But how could we miss something like that unless it's, oh no!

Woman: It's already begun!

Man: We have less time than we thought! If you have any idea of how to kill the demon then you need to tell me right now!

Woman: Okay he's still a sleep, which means that you should be able to enter his body and fight the demon, but there's a catch.

Man: what is it?

Woman: Not only does entering another human body break one of the rules of the spirit world but, since your dead that means you can't take the life of another, in other words you can enter Hiroshis body and weaken the demon but Hiroshi has to land the final blow.

Man: What happens if I try too anyway?

Woman: Then your attack would just phase right through the demon.

Man: Well okay then, lets do it.

Woman: Hold on.

*The woman takes out a small piece of paper a brush and a cap of ink, she dips the brush in the ink, writes a symbol on the paper and puts the paper on the center of the mans back*​

Man: What the heck is that supposed to d-

*The symbol glows and the man instantly passes strait through the roof and enters hiroshis body as if he was a magnet.*​

(For now the character named "man" will be Hiroshi)​

*Hiroshi opens his eyes as the woman passes through the roof and walks to the foot of hiroshis bed*​

Woman: So, how do you feel?

*She smiles at him*​

Hiroshi: WOULD IT HAVE KILLED YOU TO GIVE ME A WARNING!?

Woman: Shhh! You're going to wake everyone up. Also I'm already dead and we don't have time for arguments.

*Hiroshi gets off of the bed*​


Hiroshi: I guess we should get going then.

*He starts walking around the bed to a wall near a window and walks into the wall causing him to bump his head*

Woman: You're alive remember? Meaning you have a real body, so it looks like you're going to have to use the window.

*She points to a window to the left of Hiroshi she passes through a wall and is standing out side*​

*She floats up to the window*​

Woman: Are you coming or not?

Hiroshi: Yeah yeah I'm coming.

*He opens the window and climbs out. He then jumps to the ground and lands*​


Scene changes

Setting: walking in a forest on a trail"
"Time: sun rise 6:30 am"

Hiroshi: This is taking forever

Woman: Were getting close, as long as we keep focusing on the energy, following it to the source then we'll get there.

Hiroshi: Did you just feel that?

Woman: Yes it seems we've just passed through the barrier of where his unsealing will take place. Everything beyond this barrier is invisible to the people out side of it.

30min pass as they're walking​

*They stop walking and they see a place on the ground 20ft away that is slowly cracking and has light shining out of the cracks*​

Hiroshi: That's where I buried my sword. After 800 years I'm surprised it's still there.


*The woman begins writing a symbol on another piece of paper*​

Hiroshi: What are you doing?

Woman: You've still got your abilities but you don't have a sword.

Hiroshi: I've been training in the spirit world for 800 years, I'm sure I could do fine without one.

Woman: Yes, but Hiroshi has to land the final blow since you can't kill him remember?

Hiroshi: Oh yeah that's right.

*She presses the paper to the ground, moves her hand away and a sword starts to rise up out of the paper. The sword fully rises and she grabs it and hands it to Hiroshi*​

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Woman: Here

*He grabs the sword with his right hand*​

Hiroshi: This seems a little cheaply made, what the heck kind of sword is this?

Woman: Just shut up and be thankful I'm even helping you.

*He looks at the sword.*​

Hiroshi: *Inner thoughts* My sword was the strongest and sharpest sword of that time and could barely cut into Sengen. I had to use the moon light technique just to get a better edge so I doubt this sword could do anything.

Woman: Quit staring at the sword and get focused!

Hiroshi: *sigh* I guess it will have to do.


Woman: Take this seriously! You only have 1 hr left until the seal keeping you in that body, breaks!

Hiroshi: Wait what!? you never said anything about that!

Woman: I didn't think I would have to, after all you have been in the spirit world for a long time.

Hiroshi: Well that doesn't mean I pay attention and read up on every little thi-!

*The ground slowly cracks further until it explodes as if something erupted from it and light fills the forest for a few moments*​

Hiroshi: its!

Woman: Sengen!

*The demon rises from the ground and into the air*​

Sengen : Hoshiro, its been 800 years and you haven't changed? No, your energy signature is slightly different. you must be his reincarnation but I'm getting two different signatures from you. Ha, I guess you couldn't get your reincarnation to pull through so you had to do it yourself.


The one who first sealed the demon was named Hoshiro, for now on the character named "man" will be referred to as hoshiro but since hes in Hiroshis body for right now he will be called Hiroshi



Hiroshi: Well Sengen, what shall you do now that you're free? fight me? You don't seem too eager, or maybe you learned your lesson in the 800 years you were sealed?

*Sengen laughs slightly at Hiroshi and smirks*​

Sengen : No dear boy im not fighting you nor has that 800 years of being sealed changed me. actually it gave me time to think of more clearly of how I would take my revenge.

Hiroshi: *Inner thoughts: Damn it, I can feel my seal starting to weaken, I have to end this quick!*

*Hiroshi's body glows slightly with an outline of spiritual energy*​


Hiroshi: Sorry Sengen but regardless of your intentions, I'm finishing this now!

*He vanishes and appears in the air front of Sengen with his sword in hand, aimed for Sengen's throat as he swings it*​

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END OF PART 2

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damn cliffhangers :T_T:

It's really, really, good Yard. Can't wait for the next chapter to come out
 

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Wondeful chapter Yarduat!

Need. Next. Chapter. Now!!! O_O"

+reps
 

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Thank you both ^^
 

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Nice...Awesome...
 
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YARD

WHY U TORTURE US WITH CLIFFHANGERS?!

Hahaha, awesome :) Can't wait for part three so I can get over the damn cliffhanger!
 

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nice job yard lets get the rest of it plz im hangin by a thread over here lol
 

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we should make disscusion and prediction threads haha :D
 

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How come ur ff goes to popular threads automatically and mine doesn't??
 

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this one is better than part 1
interesting ill wait patiently for the next
 

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Great beginning. I'm looking forward to the rest of the story. Thanks for sharing it with us, those less endowed in writing talent.
 

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Lacks consistency. Did you proof read any of it? Half the sentences have periods, the other half don't. Some sentences start with capital letters, others don't. It could also use a lot more description. Just my two cents.

Please, please, please proof read your work. And using pictures instead of describing things?
 
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