(in the midst of battle shows someone struggling against 10's of people with his comrades dead on the ground around him)
Hobisu- pant pant (hobisu's sharingan fades away)
Shinobi- Is that all?
Hobisu- I'm the great grandson of Rikudou Sennin! Don't underestimate me!
Shinobi- you're just shaming the name! You're nothing special. The sage took on the ten tails. then nearly created peace
until he passed. You have nothing to show for it. Now!
(the shinobi gather in a formation)
Shinobi- Katon-
(Hobisu closes his eyes then a flashback starts with a baby crying)
Hobisu's wife- what should we name her?
Hobisu- umm we really should have thought of this sooner but you deny every name that I come up with!
Doctor- you seem to have pulled it off everyone is fine and went smoothly.
Wife- I want to give her a lucky name. It's wise for me to come up with the name. You call me lady luck after all..
Hobisu- there you go being all sassy as usual
Doctor- now now no such attitude in front of the baby. (she then takes the baby and calms her down)
(a shinobi rushes in)
Shinobi- Hobisu! Sorry to rush in but no interruptions! You're desperately needed in the front!
Wife- Hobisu!
Shinobi- I'm so sorry to have run in on you. I know the feeling. I recently became a father. But we have to ensure that our children are safe. When we come back I can be the father I always wanted and you can be to.
Hobisu- Don't worry I'll come back (activates his sharingan
(back to the present)
(hobisu looks down at the lifeless body of the man that just became a father like he has been)
Shinobi's- Katon Fire phoenix Jutsu!
Hobisu- damnit (he dodges but half of his body is caught)
Hobisu-AAAAAAAHHHHHHH! (after which shows him on the ground with his body smoking)
Shinobi- Let's let him suffer. come on before reinforcements show up.
(Hobisu wakes up to someone using medical ninjutsu on him)
Hobisu- what jutsu is this?
Elderly woman- It's a good thing I found you in time. You have impressive natural healing. But you wouldn't have made it when I found you?
Hobisu- Did the reinforcements come. are you them?
Elderly woman- I can't say if any of them and no I'm not?
Hobisu- Who are you and what jutsu did you use on me?
Elderly woman- It's medical ninjutsu. Your great grandfather taught me the technique before he died. you're not healed fully. give me your hands. Now I'm transfering my chakra into your hands and this will allow you to use my jutsu. I'm doing this because you are family.
Hobisu- Who are you?
Elderly woman- I'm your grandmother.
Hobisu-!?
Elderly woman- Not only did I use medical ninjutsu. I used a special jutsu. So I won't be around for long. Both the brother's families of the 6 paths have abandoned their surname and waged war on each other. Try to end it. At least for me.
Hobisu- Why didn't you show yourself before
Elderly woman- I have my reasons. I'll pass away very soon. Go my grandson.
Hobisu- hugs his grandmother before he leaves
(Hobisu then finds the 30 shinobi that nearly killed him)
Shinobi- So the great grandson of the 6 paths has returned. I'm surprised you survived.
Hobisu- I did survive and I'm gonna kick all your asses!
Shinobi- hmph you were good to survive against all of us and survive as long as you did. but to be honest I don't believe you are his great grandson. Now
(all the shinobi get in a line then throw shiruken, spears, axes, and use numerous jutsu. Hobisu dodges but is hit numerous times. He falls to the ground, gets up, places his hand on his chest, then all of his wounds start disappearing.
Shinobi- What jutsu is that!?
Hobisu- My great grandfather's
Shinobi- I'll finish you off right here! (all the shinobi use a collaberation) Katon Tornado Whirl Wind! A giant wall of swirling flames encircle hobisu. Then black flames take over creating a swirling tornado of it, Hobisu walks out with blood flowing from his eyes. With his sharingan glowing
Hobisu- I'll be the reaper that will send all of you to hell!
The end
(the next part will be done tomorow. I hope you liked it)
Hobisu- pant pant (hobisu's sharingan fades away)
Shinobi- Is that all?
Hobisu- I'm the great grandson of Rikudou Sennin! Don't underestimate me!
Shinobi- you're just shaming the name! You're nothing special. The sage took on the ten tails. then nearly created peace
until he passed. You have nothing to show for it. Now!
(the shinobi gather in a formation)
Shinobi- Katon-
(Hobisu closes his eyes then a flashback starts with a baby crying)
Hobisu's wife- what should we name her?
Hobisu- umm we really should have thought of this sooner but you deny every name that I come up with!
Doctor- you seem to have pulled it off everyone is fine and went smoothly.
Wife- I want to give her a lucky name. It's wise for me to come up with the name. You call me lady luck after all..
Hobisu- there you go being all sassy as usual
Doctor- now now no such attitude in front of the baby. (she then takes the baby and calms her down)
(a shinobi rushes in)
Shinobi- Hobisu! Sorry to rush in but no interruptions! You're desperately needed in the front!
Wife- Hobisu!
Shinobi- I'm so sorry to have run in on you. I know the feeling. I recently became a father. But we have to ensure that our children are safe. When we come back I can be the father I always wanted and you can be to.
Hobisu- Don't worry I'll come back (activates his sharingan
(back to the present)
(hobisu looks down at the lifeless body of the man that just became a father like he has been)
Shinobi's- Katon Fire phoenix Jutsu!
Hobisu- damnit (he dodges but half of his body is caught)
Hobisu-AAAAAAAHHHHHHH! (after which shows him on the ground with his body smoking)
Shinobi- Let's let him suffer. come on before reinforcements show up.
(Hobisu wakes up to someone using medical ninjutsu on him)
Hobisu- what jutsu is this?
Elderly woman- It's a good thing I found you in time. You have impressive natural healing. But you wouldn't have made it when I found you?
Hobisu- Did the reinforcements come. are you them?
Elderly woman- I can't say if any of them and no I'm not?
Hobisu- Who are you and what jutsu did you use on me?
Elderly woman- It's medical ninjutsu. Your great grandfather taught me the technique before he died. you're not healed fully. give me your hands. Now I'm transfering my chakra into your hands and this will allow you to use my jutsu. I'm doing this because you are family.
Hobisu- Who are you?
Elderly woman- I'm your grandmother.
Hobisu-!?
Elderly woman- Not only did I use medical ninjutsu. I used a special jutsu. So I won't be around for long. Both the brother's families of the 6 paths have abandoned their surname and waged war on each other. Try to end it. At least for me.
Hobisu- Why didn't you show yourself before
Elderly woman- I have my reasons. I'll pass away very soon. Go my grandson.
Hobisu- hugs his grandmother before he leaves
(Hobisu then finds the 30 shinobi that nearly killed him)
Shinobi- So the great grandson of the 6 paths has returned. I'm surprised you survived.
Hobisu- I did survive and I'm gonna kick all your asses!
Shinobi- hmph you were good to survive against all of us and survive as long as you did. but to be honest I don't believe you are his great grandson. Now
(all the shinobi get in a line then throw shiruken, spears, axes, and use numerous jutsu. Hobisu dodges but is hit numerous times. He falls to the ground, gets up, places his hand on his chest, then all of his wounds start disappearing.
Shinobi- What jutsu is that!?
Hobisu- My great grandfather's
Shinobi- I'll finish you off right here! (all the shinobi use a collaberation) Katon Tornado Whirl Wind! A giant wall of swirling flames encircle hobisu. Then black flames take over creating a swirling tornado of it, Hobisu walks out with blood flowing from his eyes. With his sharingan glowing
Hobisu- I'll be the reaper that will send all of you to hell!
The end
(the next part will be done tomorow. I hope you liked it)