[Romance] Am i in love ?

[Kishi Uzumaki]

I can't forget your beauty ,
I'm lost in your eyes ,
those eyes that beautiful
-as two bloomed flowers...
you are the one i sees ,
when i close my eyes....
i can't figure this out ,
what's happening to me ?

become a whisper , that i always hear ,
deep inside my heart .
this have never happened ,
before i saw you ,
but now i can't forget you ,
is this just an attraction ,
or my heart is falling for you ,

there nothing that i can't do ,
i would take anything on your strides ,
just tell me this , who are you to me ?
-is your arms my sanctuary ?
are you the one , i waited for long time ,
now please come and tell me ,
am i in love ?

 

[KillerbYo]

Im sorry but i puked in the middle of the first sentance so you your poem is probably good.

 

[Lady Tsunade Sama]

It's beautiful poem <3

 

[Zorø]

its good man good choice for valentines aswell reminds of some girl I used to go out with.

 

[KillerbYo]

I honestly cant even finish it i have to look away its like magic i just cant read it.

 

[demon of the leaf]

It's good dude

 

[Aquarius]

I wish there could be contest regarding poem or so anyway that's a nice poem though and if you're asking through this poem that you're in or not i would rather yes you are, congratulations

 

[IamtheGodofUchihaforever]

If you want honesty its not good.

 

[Allsymbolsparttwo]

the only one you can truly love is yourself

 

[Ōkami]

All this talk about beauty.

 

[Wparker6804]

If I'm romancing a woman, I usually try Haikus

"Haikus can be fun"
"But sometimes, they don't make sense"
"Refrigerators"

 

[Erza Scarlet]

Nice I like it.

 

[KillerbYo]

If I'm romancing a woman, I usually try Haikus

"Haikus can be fun"
"But sometimes, they don't make sense"
"Refrigerators"

Smokin.
this is so that there wukk be atleast 10 chaa.

 

[Kishi Uzumaki]

Thanks guys for commenting .

 

[itachi uchiha fiance]

poem is awsome

 

[Kishi Uzumaki]

poem is awsome

Thanks man .