[Romance] Always There...

[Seffy]

When all hope is gone…..
When nobody is at my side….
​

Silence echoes painfully in my ears.
An unwelcome visitor that taunts me,
Showing me how lonely I am.
The air is still and calm,
But inside of me a storm is raging.
I feel myself slipping,
Each piece crashing to the floor and shattering.
My insides feel like they are being torn viciously apart,
As my heart aches with every beat.
My breathe is shallow,
My body feels weighed down,
By the invisible chains that bind me.
The numbing pain of agony spreads throughout my mind,
As the unbearable pressure feels like crushing my eyes.
With my body broken,
And seemingly beyond repair,
I cry out.
The warmth of tears stream down my pale cheeks,
But are quickly stopped,
Once the burden of misery is lifted from my fragile body.
My eyes snap open,
My body filled with relief.
Your arms wrapped around me,
Holding me together.
I wrap my arms around you as well,
Feeling thankful to have you.

You are always there….
To piece me back together.
​

Sorry I'm certain this isn't great. It's been a really long time since I've written anything, but I wanted to try. X_X

 

[Waindo]

You're certain this isn't great?:wesobi:

This is fantastic! A great sour and sorrowfull intro with a so kawai ending! An awesome romantic/short story piece! And I love the unique format of it all! :hooray:

 

[Seffy]

You're certain this isn't great?:wesobi:

This is fantastic! A great sour and sorrowfull intro with a so kawai ending! An awesome romantic/short story piece! And I love the unique format of it all! :hooray:

I kind of just threw something together in a short period of time. I don't think it's that great. Idk feels rushed to me and like I could have done better. I always beat myself up about my own works...

 

[Waindo]

I told you already...it's my job to lack self-confidence here. :stfu:

 

[Seffy]

I told you already...it's my job to lack self-confidence here. :stfu:

lol How about we can lack self-confidence together then. XD

 

[Waindo]

It's a deal.

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[fiend]

What I wanted to say has already been said by Waindo.
But I'll again reiterate by saying very nice poem with a beautiful end .
Nice work.
I'm keenly waiting for your great poems.

 

[Chie]

I'm not even a romantic, but I liked this. Well-done. :hug:

 

[Seffy]

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good! XD

What I wanted to say has already been said by Waindo.
But I'll again reiterate by saying very nice poem with a beautiful end .
Nice work.
I'm keenly waiting for your great poems.

I don't write poetry often but thank you so much for your words!

I'm not even a romantic, but I liked this. Well-done. :hug:

:hug: Thank you so much!