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I'm going redo this story is was so interesting.
"Twelve years passed since the end of the Fourth Shinobi War. Thanks to combined might of the world's Shinobi, and the perseverance of Team 7, the world was saved. Directly afterward, while everyone but team 7 was under the effects of the Infinite Tsukuyomi, Sasuke decided to become a villain, the ultimate evil, to kill the 5 Kage to ensure the safety of the leaf village, giving the Great Nations a central villain, as opposed to fighting one another. Naruto was outraged. He wouldn't let Sasuke do so, he fought him, he was determine to beat some sense into Sasuke or die trying. Naruto died trying. After that. Sasuke went on to kill Kakashi-sensei, The fight Kage, but spared me, he said he needed a witness, someone who could possibly avenge the people he killed. And disappeared releasing the people from the eternal slumber, I was the only one who knew what happened. People were confused, and scared. The leaders dead, Naruto dead, and me sitting alone, scared...not because of Sasuke, just of what he had become. Because of all that happened in went on the run, never to be seen again, by anyone. With no leaders, the world emerged from chaos, civil wars on who should be in charge, other nations wanting to claim land for themselves, you know... the world as it is today."
Said a pink haired woman, with bright green eyes, in a gloomy tone. She was dressed in a white fitted tank top, olive green muti-pocketed pants, adorned with holsters containing weapons and scrolls, black boots with an elevated heel,finger-less gloves, and the burgundy leather jacket, that hugged her form, with a white circle plastered on the back.
The woman leaped through the tree, with her short hair blowing in the wind, as she leaped. A small child dressed in a similar outfit, through but with glasses, and a backpack, hung from Sakura's back, with her black hair blowing in the wind.
"The Sasuke man sounds annoying. I don't see how you could stand being on a team with scum like him. He sounds so...Shannarooo." said the raven, haired girl. " I'd help you to avenge your fallen comrade if you want momma."
Sakura was shocked to hear those words come from her daughter's mouth. A cold chill ran up her spine, as a sudden sense of Deja Vu hit her.
"Sarada, I don't want you to talk ever like that!." Sakura snapped. "He used to think the same way!" Sakura added as she stopped, placing her daughter down on a tree branch. Sarada looked down at her feet, teary eyed because of her mother scolding her.
Sakura bends down eye level to Sarada. " I'm sorry for raising my voice, it's just...he was once a sweet child, just like you...I watched as he became corrupt...I don't even what to think about the same happening to you." Said Sakura, pouting a little.
Sarada wiped her eyes underneath her glasses, glancing at her mother. " You don't have to worry momma. I'm nothing like him." Sarada said, sniffling. "I'm just you, but I must be like my dad was before he died, Right? " Sarada added.
Sakura smiled, pointed her daughter's forehead, and hugged her.
"You're more like him than you will ever know, Sara-chan." Sakura thought, with her facial expression saddening once again. Unknowingly, .squeezing her daughter, tightly.
"Too tight, mom," Sarada said, a bit winded.
"Sorry," Sakura said, as she let go. "I forget my own strength at times," Sakura added, standing up.
" Momma why did we stop," Sarada said, looking around, seeing a large brick wall in the distance.
Sakura looked down at her daughter. " Because we are almost there, we have to go on the ground now. We are about to enter the anbu's range. I want you to hide your chakra, and if spotted stay close to me." Sakura said, taking her daughter leaping down from the tree.
"Don't worry momma, I'll smash them if they attack us," Sarada said, cracking her knuckles.
" No Sara-chan. Not today, I placed genjutsu spores in the air, but it will take a time to get to them all." Sakura said nonchalantly. " We come to this village in peace. This is my home after all." Sakura added as she and Sarada continued forwards.
[How did you like it?You will never guess who the Hokage is. Any Ideas? Yes, I killed Naruto off, but is this the last of him? How will Ino react to just seeing Sakura after the war? Sarada doesn't know who her father is, she just knows that he is gone.]
"Twelve years passed since the end of the Fourth Shinobi War. Thanks to combined might of the world's Shinobi, and the perseverance of Team 7, the world was saved. Directly afterward, while everyone but team 7 was under the effects of the Infinite Tsukuyomi, Sasuke decided to become a villain, the ultimate evil, to kill the 5 Kage to ensure the safety of the leaf village, giving the Great Nations a central villain, as opposed to fighting one another. Naruto was outraged. He wouldn't let Sasuke do so, he fought him, he was determine to beat some sense into Sasuke or die trying. Naruto died trying. After that. Sasuke went on to kill Kakashi-sensei, The fight Kage, but spared me, he said he needed a witness, someone who could possibly avenge the people he killed. And disappeared releasing the people from the eternal slumber, I was the only one who knew what happened. People were confused, and scared. The leaders dead, Naruto dead, and me sitting alone, scared...not because of Sasuke, just of what he had become. Because of all that happened in went on the run, never to be seen again, by anyone. With no leaders, the world emerged from chaos, civil wars on who should be in charge, other nations wanting to claim land for themselves, you know... the world as it is today."
Said a pink haired woman, with bright green eyes, in a gloomy tone. She was dressed in a white fitted tank top, olive green muti-pocketed pants, adorned with holsters containing weapons and scrolls, black boots with an elevated heel,finger-less gloves, and the burgundy leather jacket, that hugged her form, with a white circle plastered on the back.
The woman leaped through the tree, with her short hair blowing in the wind, as she leaped. A small child dressed in a similar outfit, through but with glasses, and a backpack, hung from Sakura's back, with her black hair blowing in the wind.
"The Sasuke man sounds annoying. I don't see how you could stand being on a team with scum like him. He sounds so...Shannarooo." said the raven, haired girl. " I'd help you to avenge your fallen comrade if you want momma."
Sakura was shocked to hear those words come from her daughter's mouth. A cold chill ran up her spine, as a sudden sense of Deja Vu hit her.
"Sarada, I don't want you to talk ever like that!." Sakura snapped. "He used to think the same way!" Sakura added as she stopped, placing her daughter down on a tree branch. Sarada looked down at her feet, teary eyed because of her mother scolding her.
Sakura bends down eye level to Sarada. " I'm sorry for raising my voice, it's just...he was once a sweet child, just like you...I watched as he became corrupt...I don't even what to think about the same happening to you." Said Sakura, pouting a little.
Sarada wiped her eyes underneath her glasses, glancing at her mother. " You don't have to worry momma. I'm nothing like him." Sarada said, sniffling. "I'm just you, but I must be like my dad was before he died, Right? " Sarada added.
Sakura smiled, pointed her daughter's forehead, and hugged her.
"You're more like him than you will ever know, Sara-chan." Sakura thought, with her facial expression saddening once again. Unknowingly, .squeezing her daughter, tightly.
"Too tight, mom," Sarada said, a bit winded.
"Sorry," Sakura said, as she let go. "I forget my own strength at times," Sakura added, standing up.
" Momma why did we stop," Sarada said, looking around, seeing a large brick wall in the distance.
Sakura looked down at her daughter. " Because we are almost there, we have to go on the ground now. We are about to enter the anbu's range. I want you to hide your chakra, and if spotted stay close to me." Sakura said, taking her daughter leaping down from the tree.
"Don't worry momma, I'll smash them if they attack us," Sarada said, cracking her knuckles.
" No Sara-chan. Not today, I placed genjutsu spores in the air, but it will take a time to get to them all." Sakura said nonchalantly. " We come to this village in peace. This is my home after all." Sakura added as she and Sarada continued forwards.
[How did you like it?You will never guess who the Hokage is. Any Ideas? Yes, I killed Naruto off, but is this the last of him? How will Ino react to just seeing Sakura after the war? Sarada doesn't know who her father is, she just knows that he is gone.]
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