Alternate ending for Naruto

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So Kakashi just used the Kamui Raikiri against Kaguya, weakening her as team 7 closes in to seal her. Sakura lands the final punch as Naruto and Sasuke touch her at the same time. But what's this? The seal doesn't work! Naruto notices Sasuke is gripping Kaguya with the wrong hand. "Wrong hand Sasuke!" Before Kaguya can counter attack Sasuke throws her to the ground. "What are you doing Sasuke! That was the perfect chance!" Sasuke throws black rods into Kaguya pinning her to the ground. Sasuke, who is still free falling along with Sakura, spins around points his palms towards Naruto and Sakura. "Shinra Tensei!" A confused Naruto and Sasuke are sent flying into the distance, crashing into the alien terrain.

Sasuke lands next to a restrained Kaguya, who has just removed the last rod pinning her in place. Sasuke grabs her head with his right hand jabbing his finger into her 3rd eye. "Grrraaah!" Kaguya cries out in agony as Sasuke begins absorbing her power, his rinnegan glowing brightly and veins throbbing on his forearm as the Juubi's energy enters his body. "No!" shouts Black Zetsu. "Never!" Kaguya screams, jabbing an ash bone into Sasuke's abdomen. "Too late." Sasuke exclaims sternly, with a solemn expression, as Kaguya's 3rd eye disappears and manifests on Sasuke's forehead. "You underestimate the Uchiha, you really think I was going to let a senile fool like you squander the power of the divine tree? You took this energy from Madara, now I'm taking it back." Sasuke releases the now powerless Kaguya from his grasp. His new form resembles Juubito's second form, with white hair and grey skin, but with the 3rd eye present.

Kakashi, still hesitant to intervene while watching these events unfold, calls out to Sasuke, "What is the meaning of this Sasuke, have you betrayed us yet again?" Sasuke stares coldly at his former sensei, "Don't worry Kakashi, as long as you don't stand in the way of my Revolution we shouldn't have any problems. Naruto, on the other hand..." "What the
hell happened to you Sasuke!" Naruto proclaims, having returned to the scene after briefly checking on Sakura, "Sakura's unconscious because of you and now you look like Obito did when he fused with the Juubi, what's going on!"

Sasuke proceeds to explain his demented plan to burn down the existing system while establishing a new one where he unites the world against himself.

"I can't let you do that, we need to get that monster out of you and seal it in the moon before you go crazy like Kaguya did!" Naruto shouts desperately.

Kakashi realizes negotiations are futile, and attempts to attack Sasuke before his kamui powers wear off. But Kakashi's attacks are easily avoided by the combination of the Juubi's concentrated chakra and Sasuke's natural skill. "I told you to stay out of the way!" Sasuke yells while charging a mini-bijuu bomb in his palm. "Not even Kamui can avoid this attack, multi-dimensional dark bomb!" Naruto jumps in the way to protect Kakashi. "No!" Kakashi yells, grabbing Naruto and teleporting them both to safety with kamui. Kakashi's Kamui fades away, within his mind Obito reluctantly tells him his time is up and Obito must return to the afterlife. "Shit." Kakashi thinks out-loud to himself, "looks like this is the end after all."

Naruto charges at Sasuke in a blind rage, but Sasuke flicks him away sending him crashing into the rocky hill, completely destroying it. Naruto, not in his base form, struggles to his feet. "So you're just going to kill me, and then be alone forever...is that it Sasuke? Huh?"

"It's what must be done, you're the final bond I must sever before my plans can be fully realized."

"Itachi wouldn't want this for you, this is not how he'd want his little brother too end u-"

"YOU KNOW NOTHING ABOUT ITACHI!" Sasuke screams as he charges another bomb in his hand, preparing to finally put Naruto away.

Suddenly the Sage of Six Paths appears with the ghosts of the previous kages in a circle with Naruto in the center.

"I was planning on simply using this jutsu to bring you all back from this dimension after sealing Kaguya, but it seems things didn't go according to plan, instead, we're giving you everything we have left Naruto, you're gonna need it." says Hagaromo, funneling all the chakra from the summoned ghost kage and himself into Naruto, transforming Naruto into a super version of his SOSP mode.

Sasuke fires his attack, it lands, creating a giant cloud of smoke. When it clears, Naruto is standing in the center of the crater in his new form, unscathed.

"HAHAHAHAHAHA ALWAYS SOMETHING NEW UP YOUR SLEEVE HUH NARUTO! LOOKS LIKE OUR FINAL BATTLE WON'T BE ONE SIDED AFTER ALL!" Sasuke screams maniacally, reminiscent of Madara's bloodthirsty taunting towards Hagaromo.

"Bring it on Sasuke, lets end this." Naruto says, calmly but with a pissed off expression.

"NARUTOOOO!"

"SASUKEEEEE!"

The 2 super ninja charge at each other and clash at high speeds creating a giant ground shattering shockwave. The final battle begins.
 

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Good fanfic, however neither Hogaromo's remaining energy or the kage energy would make the blindest bit of difference. Sasuke would fodderstomp in this ending, even in the current version Sasuke was new to the Rinnegan allowing Naruto to stand a chance otherwise game over.
 
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Damn this version of sasuke would be too OP
 

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Damn this version of sasuke would be too OP

I waa thinking the same but I think absorbing the eye into the forehead isn't necessary. He could absorb it into his right eye. He'd have 2 rinne sharingan and a total of 15 tomoe of power.
 
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Naruto and Saskey clash with chidori/rasengan
Saskey izanagis...
saskey congratulates naruto on pushing him to sacrifice an eye and chidoris him in teh heart

timeskips to saskey in kaguyas castle with sakura by his side...hinita hiyuga is their servant and brings them a glass of wine...

Saskey: a toast...to our new world

FIN
 

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Naruto and Saskey clash with chidori/rasengan
Saskey izanagis...
saskey congratulates naruto on pushing him to sacrifice an eye and chidoris him in teh heart

timeskips to saskey in kaguyas castle with sakura by his side...hinita hiyuga is their servant and brings them a glass of wine...

Saskey: a toast...to our new world

FIN

That would be a pretty cool ending.
 

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So Kakashi just used the Kamui Raikiri against Kaguya, weakening her as team 7 closes in to seal her. Sakura lands the final punch as Naruto and Sasuke touch her at the same time. But what's this? The seal doesn't work! Naruto notices Sasuke is gripping Kaguya with the wrong hand. "Wrong hand Sasuke!" Before Kaguya can counter attack Sasuke throws her to the ground. "What are you doing Sasuke! That was the perfect chance!" Sasuke throws black rods into Kaguya pinning her to the ground. Sasuke, who is still free falling along with Sakura, spins around points his palms towards Naruto and Sakura. "Shinra Tensei!" A confused Naruto and Sasuke are sent flying into the distance, crashing into the alien terrain.

Is it meant to be Sakura
 

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Good fanfic, however neither Hogaromo's remaining energy or the kage energy would make the blindest bit of difference. Sasuke would fodderstomp in this ending, even in the current version Sasuke was new to the Rinnegan allowing Naruto to stand a chance otherwise game over.

Well seeing how Naruto was capable of standing toe-to-toe with Kaguya with only a small fraction of all the Bijuu's energy I can see him pulling off a miracle against a crazed Sasuke struggling internally within himself. Perhaps TnJ would have to play a part in dropping Sasuke's guard for the finishing blow.
 
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