[Mystery] [Also ROMANCE] It Wasn't A Dream..!!

[PakTigers]

It wasn't a dream!!

Fallen in thy amity
Felt like in thine dream,
There, I stuck in calamity
Asudden heard a mighty scream.

I thought It was thee
Despite was a doors creak,
Gained strength & got in,
To check what It had been.

Saw thee standing infront of me
Got astonished and squeezed thee
But It wasn't a dream
It wasn't a dream..!!!

Thee squuezed me for my accord
I left u because you were my lord
But It wasn't a dream
It wasn't a dream..!!

I followed thee to thy land
There I stayed on My knee,
To show thee the zeal..!!
Yet you didn't came by the same feel..!!

I brought the stars to make thee sense
But thy Amity wasn't for me!! :/
Still It wasn't a dream
It wasn't a dream..!!
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Written By ==>> PakTigers

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Well, how's it?? Please ignore the mistakes if there are any!!

 

[Goetia]

Not bad. A little hard to follow, but still good nonetheless.

 

[PakTigers]

Not bad. A little hard to follow, but still good nonetheless.

Oh, Okay. I'll try to write better =D

 

[Goetia]

Oh, Okay. I'll try to write better =D

You will get better with practice, I look forward to reading more of your work.

 

[PakTigers]

You will get better with practice, I look forward to reading more of your work.

Okay, I'm gonna upload more. I have been writing a few in the past days

 

[TonyDawn1379]

Sux dude sux

 

[PakTigers]

Sux dude sux

Should I consider it that you didn't liked it or Did you like it?? XD