Alois Trancy FanArt~

LeaSuki

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This is a drawing I did of Alois from the Anime Black Butler. :'D I adore him sooo much. <3~

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Enjoy~?​
 

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Looks good ^^ Tips in my opinion it's the hips need a different size. The hips looks more likely 'girly' because you do make it really small at stomach/navel level, and then goes out a lot with the hips.

You are totally right that it does goes smaller there, but because of men have more muscles or bigger muscles than girls it doesn't curve in so much and then goes out so much.
Still it's only matter if you go by anatomy, if not then I have nothing else to say ^^

It does for sure look good :)

You did say it was a he so I don't misunderstand the thread?
 
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Looks good ^^ Tips in my opinion it's the hips need a different size. The hips looks more likely 'girly' because you do make it really small at stomach/navel level, and then goes out a lot with the hips.

You are totally right that it does goes smaller there, but because of men have more muscles or bigger muscles than girls it doesn't curve in so much and then goes out so much.
Still it's only matter if you go by anatomy, if not then I have nothing else to say ^^

It does for sure look good :)

You did say it was a he so I don't misunderstand the thread?

Thank you.~! <3

I agree the hips are a bit small now that you pointed it out. XD;

Anatomy for boys are a bit hard for me, so I continue to work on it. :'3

And you are correct about it being a boy. He is quite feminine looking however. XD; <3

Anyways thank you for the tips. <3~
 

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I don't want to offend you, but before I read your post, I looked at ur art work first ( I always look at art work, the. Read people's work ) but I thought he was a gurl until I read your post =D

I must agree with Ventalus, and you should do what he says since his pretty good with body structuring ^^

From me; his legs are a bit girly, idk, I might be wrong on what is causing this, but I think you added too much shine effects on his legs and knee... Maybe a bit thinner and muscled with a BIT of rough color will do the trick. :D

^ this is tips by a person that sucks with drawing boys but, meh.. I'm here to help XD

Anyway, it's very nice work, his pretty cute :win:
 

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I don't want to offend you, but before I read your post, I looked at ur art work first ( I always look at art work, the. Read people's work ) but I thought he was a gurl until I read your post =D

I must agree with Ventalus, and you should do what he says since his pretty good with body structuring ^^

From me; his legs are a bit girly, idk, I might be wrong on what is causing this, but I think you added too much shine effects on his legs and knee... Maybe a bit thinner and muscled with a BIT of rough color will do the trick. :D

^ this is tips by a person that sucks with drawing boys but, meh.. I'm here to help XD

Anyway, it's very nice work, his pretty cute :win:

I'm good with body structures :if you know what I mean: XD
 

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To « Killer Vision »: Thank you~! <3 I had fun making it. :'D It took a while to decide what colors I wanted to use, but glad how it came out. XD

To Hoshiko: Well the character Alois is very feminine looking in general so I didn't want him too look too manly because...well, he doesn't look manly.

About the shine I was kind of going for a shiny look anyways. I do however agree with Ventalus however about the hips being too small. The drawing itself would look better if I fixed that, but I already finished the drawing, so I don't feel like going back and redoing it. XD And I do appreciate both of your advice, so I'm not offended. :'D

Haha thank you.~ He is a cutie, but is psychotic as anything. XD;
 
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I never really got into the Black Butler manga or anime. However, this is really nice work. I love the colors. You do a really good job at digital painting.
 

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I never really got into the Black Butler manga or anime. However, this is really nice work. I love the colors. You do a really good job at digital painting.

Ahh I see, but thank you.~! <3 :'D I try my best. I still need have a lot to learn however. XD;
 

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Wow great work man keep it up :cool:
 
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