Akuma Ikazuchi

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Name:Akuma ikazuchi
Nickname:The Lightning Demon
Gender:Male
Age:12
Clan:None

Looks:Black Bandana with Kumogakure logo on it.Spikish hair stick out from under the bandanna.
Black Jacket with white parts at the end of the sleves and a bandage wrapped around part of his arm next to a little logo.
His shirt looks like the emoticon XD but the right way up.He has a strap on his front to hold his sword the kubikiribocho.
His belt has a bandage on and his pants are quite baggy.


Personality:He is Outgoing and Enjoys others company.He is not as estatic as naruto when it comes to training or as laid back as sasuke but he
does try his hardest whilst training.His rage can overcome him but only in some circumstances


Village Info.
Village of Birth:kumogakure
Village of Alliance:Kumogakure

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank:Genin(By posts)
Specialty:
Elements:
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Your ninjutsu:

Basic
(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

Background Info.
History:Akuma was born in Kumogakure And has lived there all his life.As a child he witnessed a battle between zabuza momochi
and several Kumogakure ninja whilst in the battle part of kubikiribocho(Beheader sword)Broke off and zabuza was forced to retreat
As a small part of kubikiribocho was broken lying in a pool of blood and dead kumogakure ninja the kubikiribocho began regenerating from
the small broken part by the time the sword had drained everybodys blood it had full regenerated and Akuma ran away with the sword
Akuma passed ninja academy on his sword skills alone and only basic ninjutsu.


Other
Akuma owns a second Kubikiribocho(Beheader sword)Which was made from a broken piece of zabuzas original beheader.Regenerated in the blood
of zabuzas foes.

Picture:

Theme Song and Background Music:
Theme song--Bad Meets Evil - Fast Lane ft. Eminem, Royce Da 5'9
Background music--Eminem--till i collapse

Battles

Won:
Lost:



I have just hit 50 posts and im really excited about this.Please tell me if there are any mistakes.
 
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Thank you but this is technically my second i did a zabuza one yesterday but didnt have enough posts.May i ask do i just put im my speciallitys then work on them or do i work on my specialltys by training
 

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Rewrite completely. You do not have Zabuza's sword nor will you or anyone else have it in a custom bio.

Also part of the bio is just not filled in. If you don't know how to make a bio, look at other people's first bio's.
 

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I know thats what im confused about
By training is that when i add my
Ninjustu-Elements and speciallitys or do i add elements and speciallitys first
 

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I know thats what im confused about
By training is that when i add my
Ninjustu-Elements and speciallitys or do i add elements and speciallitys first
It doesn't really matter what order you put them in, as long as they're there.

You should put an element that you want to learn next to the element part. You don't get a specialty at this level, so just leave that bit blank. For Ninjutsu, you put the basic E-Rank academy jutsu there.
(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)
 

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Thank you.But what do i do about getting a sensei do i just ask someone at sensei rank or can anybody do it.@Caliburn technically its only part of his sword regrown.
 

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Thank you.But what do i do about getting a sensei do i just ask someone at sensei rank or can anybody do it.@Caliburn technically its only part of his sword regrown.
No is no and the fact you even gave it the same name and ability makes it pretty much the same weapon. On top of that such a weapon would never be allowed unless it got approved in the CJ thread as a Custom Weapon if it wasn't a canon sword.

So in either case it should be removed. If not your bio will be declined.
 
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