Akira Uzumaki

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you need at least 50 posts to make a bio.
 

U Mad Bro

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sorry bro u need 50 posts
 

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Umm,pretty good but i doubt any offspring of naruto will leave the village willingly.and not just because of the ramen.
 

Tsuki

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I looks nice ^^ btw there are some stuff you could edit maybe :hint:
And dont worry about those 50 posts, u get them easily just post post post :D xd
 

Joon

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Nice Bio, however, you need 50 post to make a Bio and for more questions/information:[1a and 1b] You need to follow the NB Bio template, however, you can still add your unique features such as Orientation and Blood Type:[2] The rules for RP are quit easy and could be follow here:[3] When you have reached you rank of Genin, you can selected for a Sensei/Senpai for training in your desired first Element:[4] If a Sensei/Senpai is full of students, Spar and chat around a bit with members to better understand RP. This is all for now, I guess. Edited: Your Kekkei Genkai resembles that of Hyuuga's Byakugan. You don't meet the requirements for a Kekkei Genkai at the moment:[5a and 5b]

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Caliburn

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Rewrite the bio. Naruto doesn't have a daughter. Your specialty is not ninjutsu, you have no specialty. There does not exist a Sairaiyu clan. Elemental and demonic are not elements and you do not have anything demonic. You're only supposed to state there the first element you want to learn in your first bio.

Add these ninjutsu under 'ninjutsu', these are the only ones you get by default:

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)
 
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