Akihiko's come back, training neilson(suiton)

[Adachi]

...DUDE YOU AMPUTATED HIM! O_O

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( Suiton: Seisuiryū ) - Water Release: Azure Water Stream
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will create a moving body of water beneath him that travels towards the opponent carrying the user. They then slash the opponent with their sword multiple times.

Now, I want you to concentrate your Suiton Chakra into the middle of your hand. Once you have built enough pressure within your hand, then release it towards my clone here. Remember to begin spinning the chakra in your hand and accelerating it before it becomes a full force jutsu. How is this used both offensively and defensively?

 

[neilson]

Kefa: yes I amputated him xd! Lol.. Okay sensei lemme try the new technique

*kefa starts to build his water chakra while channelling it towards his right hand, he then focuses oh the middle of his right hand and releases the chakra he built up, kefa starts spinning the water making it move really fast, as the water spins it builds pressure and can be classified as a water vortex/tornado. Kefa takes aim at the clones gut and releases the powerfuted in his hand, the clone is pushed back by the vots sucked in the vortex which now damages the clone and makes the clone go poof*

How can this jutsu be used as a defence: its good again all fire techs(so far the fire isn't a higher rank) having the user blast this jutsu towards any incoming jutsu is good for a defence apart from lightning though

How can this jutsu be used as an attack: as stated by kefa when he attacked your clone

 

[Adachi]

Excellent. And do you remember what how Yamato and Naruto combined this jutsu in the manga and what it resulted in?

 

[neilson]

Yeah I remember the result, it was typhoon water vortex! Missing naruto's wind shuriken rasengan with yamato's water tearing torrent!

 

[Adachi]

Good. So what kind of jutsus do you think this can block against?

 

[neilson]

Well since naruto and yamato used it again a fire tech which was mixed with wind(making it a stronger fire tech), i'd say i'll use this tech to defend against, strong fire techs especially those in conjuction with wind, some water techs, example water tornado, having the two water techs clash and having the water tearing torrent over power the water tornado because of the difference in rank, cant defend againt lightning because the users hand is with the water so the user will get shocked.

 

[Adachi]

If you combine it with Wind, then you could potentially block it against Lightning techs, but well put. ^_^

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(Suiton: Hahonryuu) - Water Style: Destruction Torrent
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: After waving the Boar → Dog → Ram hand seals, a water vortex created in the palm of the user’s hand that can then be blasted forward creating a spiraling wall of water which can then be used to attack or defend.
Note: No water source required

Now, proceed to step over to the lake here. Perform these handseals: Ox → Monkey → Hare → Rat → Boar → Bird → Ox → Horse → Bird → Rat → Tiger → Dog → Tiger → Snake → Ox → Ram → Snake → Boar → Ram → Rat → Yang Water → Monkey → Bird → Dragon → Bird → Ox → Horse → Ram → Tiger → Snake → Rat → Monkey → Hare → Boar → Dragon → Ram → Rat → Ox → Monkey → Bird → Yang Water → Rat → Boar → Bird.
Afterwards, take control of the water and form it into a HUGE dragon. Strike this at my clone in any you wish.
Take into account several details now.
1. How large is the dragon and how might you utilize its size?
2. How does such a long series of handseals affect this move in battle?
O_O

 

[neilson]

Kefa: :ghehe: those are one long series of hand seals! Lemme give it a try sensei

*kefa walks closer to the lake and stands next to it, kefa then starts to build his water chakra followed by making the hand seal(with each hand seal made kefa focuses more chakra to a large area on the lake), Ox → Monkey → Hare → Rat → Boar → Bird → Ox → Horse → Bird → Rat → Tiger → Dog → Tiger → Snake → Ox → Ram → Snake → Boar → Ram → Rat → Yang Water → Monkey → Bird→ Dragon → Bird → Ox → Horse → Ram → Tiger → Snake → Rat → Monkey → Hare → Boar → Dragon → Ram → Rat → Ox → Monkey → Bird → Yang Water → Rat → Boar → Bird. After kefa makes the final hand seal he releases his chakra to take control of the large area of water he was focusing his chakra to, kefa then makes a large portion of water to rise up(the water being as wide as 10metres and as long as 25meters), kefa focuses more chakra to shape manipulate the water, making it take form of a giant dragon which ofcourse looks powerful, kefa looks at the clone taking aim at the clone's whole body he send the Dragon towards the clone, the dragon moves very fast towards the clone and on impact with the clone the dragon carries the clone in it its direction(the dragon mouth isnt open but it is very much too big to take only a portion, so it carries everypart of the clone) the clone goes poof because of the damage caused by the huge dragon hitting it and also pushing the clone*

how large is the dragon and how might you utilize its size: As stated the dragon is 10 meters wide and stands tall at 25meters. How may i utilize the size; well because its so big and long i think i can strike more than one opponent by just controlling the Dragon towards the other opponents, also because of its size i can use it to fight a summon,(lets say my opponent summoned one of the summoning animals and its a Big one, i can use this tech cause its also big to fight or remove the summon from the battle field).

How does such a long series of hand seals affect a battle: truth is i dont think it has a strong effect on the battle its just that it will take sometime before this jutsu will happen and an opponent will take advantage of this by attacking this can be prevented by making clones which will battle the opponent while the main person can use this tech, hidding yourself ina mist and start doing the hand seals the opponent wont see you and wont know what your doing.

Kefa: good enough?

 

[Adachi]

...perfect. O_O And well, the handseals will delay your jutsu immensely in comparison to if your opponent has a jutsu that only required one handseal.
You can also use the size of the dragon to hide you...

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Suiton: Suiryuudan no Jutsu) - Water Style: Water Dragon Bullet Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: After performing a long series of hand seals Ox → Monkey → Hare → Rat → Boar → Bird → Ox → Horse → Bird → Rat → Tiger → Dog → Tiger → Snake → Ox → Ram → Snake → Boar → Ram → Rat → Yang Water → Monkey → Bird → Dragon → Bird → Ox → Horse → Ram → Tiger → Snake → Rat → Monkey → Hare → Boar → Dragon → Ram → Rat → Ox → Monkey → Bird → Yang Water → Rat → Boar → Bird the user then shapes a large amount of water into a giant, powerful dragon, which hits the opponent with formidable might, dealing physical damage. The ideal place to use it is near a body of water, but if the user's skill allows it, it is possible to use it even in a place where there is none. The amount of water used will be in proportion with the user's skill. Tobirama was able to use this technique with a single hand seal showing testiment to his skill in water ninjutsu.
Note: Requires a water source to use.

Step towards the lake again and channel your chakra into it to create an orb. Then, guide your chakra into the middle of that orb and bring out several whips of water. Then, using those whips of water, attempt to put out these fireballs I aim at you.
Also, keep in mind the two functions this jutsu serves.

 

[neilson]

Kefa: sensei i'm already close to the lake xd. If the orb creates whips? Does that make it take shape like an octupus?

*kefa is already standing next to the lake, kefa buils his water chakra and focus it towards a part of the water(if it has to be sized, i'll say medium), kefa releases his chakra and make water rise from the lake, kefa then shapens the water into an orb(an orb is either spherical or circular, so the water kefa shapens is circular or spherical) kefa positions the orb infront of him, kefa then focuses more chakra and manipulates the shape of the orb, pulling out 4 whips, 2 from each side of the orb, kefa then waits for his sensei's fire balls, kiritsugu sensei fires the first fire ball and kefa controls a whip, casting it towards the fireball(like playing table tennis) as the whip hits the fire ball; it gets putted out(the fire), kefa does this for all fireballs thrown at him by his sensei*

kefa: that was fun, lets not do it again before i get burnt.xd

the two functions will have to be that this jutsu acts as both a defense and an attack. The whip can be used to attack(flogging your target, pulling your target closer, in conjunction with a lightning jutsu) as a defense(putting all the whips very close together to form a wall or a barrier, defending against multiple attacks)

 

[Adachi]

Actually, think of the whips as a simple rope. There are a lot of things you can do with a rope by itself...

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(Suiton: Suiryūben) - Water Style: Water Dragon Whip
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal the user creates an orb of water from which several sharp whips of water emerge. Those whips can then be directed towards one or multiple targets, impaling them on impact.

Now, proceed to form the handseals of Monkey → Rat → Tiger → Dragon → Horse → Dragon and then by manipulating your water chakra, create a column of water shaped as a snake, with a wide and gaping mouth.
Direct it at my clone, and once it swallows him, turn it into a river that can...carry him away. O_O

 

[neilson]

Kefa: okay sensei! Lemme give it a try.

*kefa starts to build up his water chakra and he releases it, which forms water, kefa then shapens the water into a snake focusing on it to makes the snakes mouth open, kefa does this by the use of shape mainupulation, the snake is formed next to kefa, kefa looks at his sensei's clone and controls the snake towards him, the snake manuvers(moving right and left like the way a snake moves) getting closer to the clone the snake takes a deep bite on the right side of the clone, as kefa see's this he focuses more chakra which turns the snake back into water, the water is like a river but having more pressure which carries the clone*

kefa: sensei you will agree with me that this jutsu is good with combinations right?

 

[Adachi]

It is definitely good with combinations, and there is actually two parts to this jutsu.
First would be the snake itself, then the second is the wave.

How would you use both parts separately?

 

[neilson]

Kefa:...urm...well the first stage which is the snake, since its directed it can be used for multiple targets, but the answer here is since the snake swallows people it means that they'll be inside the snake and the snake is made of water which means that the user of this tech can keep the snake in that form as it swallows it victims(the user should keep moving the snake so the victim has no chance of escaping).

Then for the 2nd stage which is the river that carries the victim(s), the user can control river/wave making it move violently causing damage to the victim, or the user can use the wave in conjunction with an electric attack causing more damage

 

[Adachi]

Good, and don't forget you can literally carry your victim away with the wave too.

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(Suiton: Ja No Kuchi) - Water Release: Water Snakes Mouth
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing the required hand seals Monkey → Rat → Tiger → Dragon → Horse → Dragon it then allows the user to generate a spinning column of water which will take the form of a snake with a gaping jaw. This snake can twist and follow its targets and swallow them. After it has swallowed them, it turns into a river that carries the enemy away.

Now, proceed to walk back onto the lake, lay your hand upon it, and summon three huge sharks that strike my clone any way you wish.

 

[neilson]

Kefa: This sounds like fun!

*kefa walks towards the lake and stand still while infront of it, kefa builds up his water chakra, he then places his hand on the surface of the lake and release the chakra he built up, as kefa releases his chakra into the lake, kefa fuses his chakra with the water in the lake allowing him free use of the water fused with his chakra, kefa goes on to shapen the water that is fused with his chakra, making the water take shape of sharks, 3 normal sized sharks by using shape manipulation. Once the 3 sharks were made, kefa kept his eyes on the clone while sending the sharks towards the clone, the 3 sharks swam towards the clone's direction leaping into the air(out of the water cause the clone isn't in the water or standing on the water, I assume the clone is standing next to the lake too like 5 meters away from me). Sharks came out of the water one by one, haveing the first shark taking a bite out of the clones leg(making the clone loose balance, the second one goes for the gut of the clone in a way which makes the remaining part of the clone to go upwards, finally. The third shark goes for the clones shoulder to head(the remaining part) and bites it all, having nothing left of the clone*

 

[Adachi]

Excellent detail. O_O Wow. Just add some proper English, and you'll be great at RPing soon.

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(Suiton: Suikō Teppō no Jutsu) - Water Release: Water Shark Gun Technique
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: An advanced version of Water Release: Water Shark Breakthrough in which the user can summon up to three sharks at once rapidly to advance on the target, and can cause severe internal injuries.
Note: Requires a water source

Okay, proceed to release a wave of water at my clone and then shape it into a prison, much like the one you created earlier. However, there is no need to keep a hand within it.
How might this be used?

 

[neilson]

Kefa: sensei, i've always been bad at english, i'm not the worst but i'm not the best, i dont know strong words or big words, but the little i know i try to put it together to make sense, as for spelling i'm good at spelling but when i'm typing fast, i sometimes spell rubbish . Forgive me? wease:.... Okay lemme try the jutsu, but to be sure i get this straight, i release a wave of water(like the hand of waves tech) towards your clone, then when the water hits him, i focus more chakra to shape the water into a sphere or circle which closes/traps your clone in it.

 

[Adachi]

Your English is great, but if you capitalize and punctuate, it'll be even better. xD
Okay, so how would you follow up to finish an opponent in this jutsu?

 

[neilson]

Kefa: well i'll follow up with a lightning blast, giving my opponent a shock of his life, i can also throw a shuriken, kunai, or even my sword to stab him but the most effective would be an earth staff with a pointed head since it has elemental advantage over water, being that the opponent is immoble while in the water prison, i could also use a fire jutsu but i will have the drop the water prison just before the fire jutsu hits the water prison;so that it'll hit my opponent. I could also use a water jutsu; like the water slicer which will slash my opponent. I'm not sure about wind