Advance: Chapter 3

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Advance: A Step Forward


Chapter 3 - Mind and Body​


She opened her eyes, surrounded in a cloud of darkness, she screamed,no sound, she shouted, but no word came out,she heard a voice,"Get Away Esura!", a clash of swords,filled the room with noice. Suddenly the spirit appeared as she touched,her forehead,the darkness was gone,and she opened her eyes and saw everything around her,"What happened!" She said in a confused but refreshed voice,the spirit spoke once more,"You're in the forest, I defeated the evil,and from now on,I won't be but instead helping you fight the evil," her calm and gentle voice was something that Izuka trusted and so she agreed,"Ok just please, don't let me get hurt," she knew if she got hurt she'd be to terrified to trust spirits again. The spirit made a portal and took us to a place as called, A Base of Mind and Body. The spirit took grasp a ball of light and gave it to Izuka and said,"Put it on the crystal and then practice fighting, you'll be better now then we'll fight the demons!". Izuka done as ordered, light surrounded them all, as a blast made by Izuka destroyed the building, and they returned home, with a demon taking grasp of her neck.




Yura was at school,but could see a danger of light taking form in the forest,the demon Tidos was searching for her family,Yura broke the window of glass, as the teacher told her off in rage, Yura said,"Bye Bye...Amos: Gecko!", the teacher recieved a heavy blow to the head and fell unconscious, and so she jumped out the window and activated her form unite level 1. As she reached Tidos, he dissapeared in a bundle of gas, but appearing behind her and knocking her out,with a powerful punch as the gas made her more fatal to the punch,Renen jumped out a window from the top of the school,he then released form unite level 3, releasing a big powerful beam of power, killing the demon and blowing the gas out of Yura's area."Yura,Yura!" He shouted in rage, his red formed eyes, growing darker. As he began to take her, she woke eventulley and they went to his home, as Tidos sent a signal to Eminous, who slashed the room and dissapeared in black smoke.
"Forget It, Operation: Black Ace, is on the go now!" Said many souls as darkness clouded the sky and took away the light.
 

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If you read the last line alot of times, then it is kinda the bit where the big plot comes in...black ace...
 

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Lol, I gotta admit, that part peaked my interest.

I kinda just finished playing a game "Black Ace" (actually, I finished playing the "Red Joker" version), so it caught my attention. xd

I seriously can't wait for the next chapter.
 

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Hmm Strange... I certaintly didn't base it on that

Here is a picture of Izuka:

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Made in Gimp Using a Mouse...
 

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Their was a vm a few weeks or so back when I asked you to draw her

and well I was never good in gimp so yeah...

Ok description:

Make her look young and shy shes 9 years old, She wears either school clothes [in my pic] or a black jacket with a white t-shirt and a black skirt

Thats all my bounderies
 

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Their was a vm a few weeks or so back when I asked you to draw her

and well I was never good in gimp so yeah...

Ok description:

Make her look young and shy shes 9 years old, She wears either school clothes [in my pic] or a black jacket with a white t-shirt and a black skirt

Thats all my bounderies
Ok, will put that in work on Monday =3 I will VM you in process if I will have any questions =]
 

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hi, it's still kinda confusing but hey! i figured it out!
the have powers though i dnt knw wat kind,
and this spirit and yuri would surely be the main characters
i dnt know though,,, is this really anime-based???

but yeah its interesting, ;)
just give me a few backgrounds and i'll understand it completely
ahaha just make more points clear (maybe only to me cause i dnt knw aha)
:D but yeah! its a great story,lots more adventure than mine
 
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