Advance: Chapter 2

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I'll update this as reguraly as I can

Advance: A Step Forward


Chapter 2 - Chosen As One​


In the secret base of the Sorion Seekers,updates and new information was revealed by Yura and Renen,It seemed strange,as this information was spoken like a scare of threats,demons layed out,but Yura hid a secret of a true meaning,as a demons thrusted through the gates,ultimatly,no tale could bring back the amount that was lost 1000 years ago,those dark days.


In the demons world of darkness,words were spoken by A half demon,called Eminous,who was waiting in response of Tidos."I guess you were right,He hasn't come back,maybe trouble was happening,"Sneered Eminous, A boy stood at the side of him,turned his back to him,"Yeah,I guess I was," He took out a compass and held it to the light."I'm recieving multiple Baduken points every direction,So I guess he's doing something," Said The Boy in a whisper.
"Just go away for now,I am just going to rest," Sniggered Eminous,after the boy left,started to laugh evily.


Izuna was training but was not getting very good in her training,she tried to focus on all the targets surrounding her.Suddenly she was floating in the air,she was wearing a white cloak with a small halo above her head,and a small spirit was their,looking at her,words echoed the room,"I will be your friend,I will give you my power,trust me,I am strong and we will help each over, and stop evil,just trust me,if you do I will help you get through this,while you rest,ok"? The spirit said,she could not speak,alot of shock,but she managed to say,"Ok," She said very quietly but the spirit still heard,everything dissapeared,and Izuka fell into a long and calm sleep.
 

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Heh,I was going to ask you if you will continue this story. Izuna is one intresting girl =) That part with training was great . Keep me informed if you post new chapters,even I'm not visiting this section so often
xD Your story has mysterious feeling while reading,and I love that =)
Thanks
 

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Also most of the stuff is made up..so don't go trying to translate it...

also thanks..you and hiebie are my only fans...

edit: I will keep writing if you two keep coming...because if people read and comment it helps me out..

Ok I will,yeah I guess it does...more will be revealed..and a lot more stuff will be happening
 

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Also most of the stuff is made up..so don't go trying to translate it...

also thanks..you and hiebie are my only fans...

edit: I will keep writing if you two keep coming...because if people read and comment it helps me out..

Ok I will,yeah I guess it does...more will be revealed..and a lot more stuff will be happening
=) Comments sure helps ^^ Great =P
 

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Keotsu: Right Ok!

Kensei: thanks? Have you read my prolouge and chapter 1

Hiebie: Heh Yeah They Sure Do Have you started writing Bettenchi 25?
 

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woah i really dont know wats happening with the story :p
but yeah i can guess most of it, their fighting some dark forces ryt?

ahaha i can make it, i'm sure i'll understand it by chap 3.
i'm not familiar with these types of stories
but it sure does sounds interesting :D:D:D
 
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