achieving divinity a lesson to all

izinagi54

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part 1 theme

part 2 them

part 1 mortal to immortal

i think the words and none come to worse order
they all fine in line like a thread to a needle.
slowly weaving a garment, why do i lay latent

powers over the mind make one divine
not that physical states of mind
to have power and to see the golden shore is one of many difference

we call ourselves the divines yet we look up in the skies
and wonder where we go when we die
is the world feeled with such torment and lies
or a heaven set abide for the inclined

part 2 awakening the mind through nivaranic strength

keep in the breathless world of the mind
look to the skies of light, so that the night may not your might
make yourselve your own destiny, to advoid future calimity

we our the divine and we are inclined to make our fate
just as we select our life mates, we resist the truth
control you mind and keep it in line to see the golden shore line

inner peace a blaze of war must cease
we must take up one anothers hands, instead letting them send themselves death sins
resist the powers of hate and sadness, death is not a tearful thing.

life will and shall go on, before and after we are gone
we the childern of the last carry the sun
we must shine our light into the darkest of night to kill the monsters fright

some of us care for others like blights, they have a clouded light and soul
that were told by the dark to take more and more
till everyman sore, childern and mother poor
why must we give in to the lore and be torn

i am me and you are you
no will ever change the fact that this is your body and soul
why not try to make them whole

this second is the youngest you will ever be in a day
embrace each moment and hold those you cherish dear and near at heart
that way your future will have a mark

- christopher rae wheeler aka izinagi54 is ready to teach phillosophy
 

Yuka

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i get lazy when it comes to reading long paragraphs but anyways good-work
 

Rorasa

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nice going chris, i really liked the last phrase in the end ^_^
 

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Lovely as always chris!<3
 

-Jiraiya-

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Really nice dude..! +rep, keep up your hard work...:)
 
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