a story im working on

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Ares the god of wars son is leading an army to expand the Greek influence, they stumble up on Scandinavian territory. They are met with an army and challenged to battle. the battle rages on for days. then with a loud crackling thunder a man comes falling from the sky. he makes way through the Greek armies rankings, smashing all who come in his way. Ares son goes into battle. the warriors see a battle which they have never seen. as the dust settles the mighty Thor stands victorious over his fallen enemy. The Greek army retreat in defeat.

Ares gets news of his sons death and mourns his loss. pleads to Zeus to let him march an army to avenge his fallen son. Zeus agrees to this but asks if Hercules could lead this army. This angers Ares and reluctantly agrees to the terms. Hercules takes the finest warriors of Greece and Olympus but to be intercepted on the march by a massive barbarian army. Hercules prepares his men for battle. He looks across the field to see Thor. Thor lifts his might hammer to the sky and calls upon the lightning, with one swift downward stroke, lightning comes crashing down on the Olympian army. The Olympians draw their swords and spears and run into battle. Hercules and Thor meet in the battlefield. Hercules proposes a formal challenge to Thor to end the battle. Thor sees honor in Hercules and accepts. they draw their weapons and as sword and hammer met, a force knocks back the surrounding troops to the ground. the ending of the battle sees Hercules victorious over Thor and spares his life

Odin is upset with Thor and takes the sparing of his life an insult and despises the pity that was shown. Odin marches to mount Olympus where he is met with all of the Olympian army. Odin along with Thor and his army set out for a final battle with the Olympians. a great battle wages on and the olympians are gaining the upper hand but little do they know a barbarian fleet comes from the sea flanking the Olympians. Poseidon catches wind of this fleet and as it is reaching the shores. Poseidon leaps from the peak of Mount Olympus crashing into the sea and with one great wave nearly extinguishes the fleet. Odin and Thor make their way to the base of the mountain and together raise their great weapons and smash the foundation of the mountain bringing it down to earth from the heavens. the Olympian army is shocked to see it crumbling down. Zeus confronts Odin and begin their battle. (war wages on). the tide is heavily turned into the barbarians favor. Zeus flees from battle into the depths of mount Tartarus and makes a deal with the titans. he asks for their help and promises to release them from their imprisonment. there is a loud thunderous sound from a distance, everyone turns to look. what they see looks to be a volcanic eruption following it leaps out these 20 foot giants running to battle. the mighty titans have joined the battle

this is all i have so far, the story is still in the works and needs some fillers and i am still currently researching characters for the story. Loki, hades and other gods will all have a part
 

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Looks like someone's been watching Avengers, Thor, Immortals, etc. xd This sounds pretty good, but it doesn't seem like it will leave much for continuation. I'm not sure how many chapters you're wanting to get out of it... I guess I've also just never been one for the whole Greek mythology thing. I think it's almost always too epic and only action. I would highly recommend that you try and temper the epicness a bit and not have too much fighting. It also seems rather hopeless when gods are involved so much in mortal affairs...makes me wonder why they don't fight among each other and leave the mortals to their own battles. xd

These are just things I'm wanting to point out. ^_^ Have fun with it! xd
 

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yeah this is the general story, i want to add things in between and add twists and want good character development and hopefully might lead to 2 books, with each book having a great battle, i want to add some mortality to the gods and conflict. like between Ares and Zeus, Thor and Loki, Hades and Zeus, Odin and Hel
 
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