[CJ] A Snake learning from a Snake.

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Katon: Shiranuigata Guren Hōōken) - Hidden Fire Form - Crimson Lotus: Phoenix Blade
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid range
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: Using a style similar to the fire dragon slayer, the user will gather a large amount of fire chakra and release it throughout their entire body in a huge surge. In doing this they will cover their entire body in focused flames that don't harm them (or anyone around them) while at the same time they release a extremely powerful jet of fire from their feet to propel them in a chosen direction like a rocket, shot at fast speed. It will look like the user is shot like an overly large flaming arrow, but that's not all. As the the user is shot through the air, they release pulses of fire around their body (in short range) that look like bright rings of flame, this helps them to break through larger defenses and destroy anything (following strengths and weaknesses of Fire) in their path to reach their target. As they hit their target with a punch or even a headbutt, the strike will be extremely powerful due to the pushing force behind it from the propelling fire, able to cause blunt trauma. As they reach their target the user can release the fire around them outwards to mid range in a destructive explosion outwards from them. The user being the epicenter wouldn't be harmed by this but anyone caught in the blast would have 3rd degree burns and internal damage from the explosive force of the near solid fire, like Sasuke's fire dragon jutsu.
Note: usable twice
Note: No water jutsu in this or the following turn
Note: No jutsu above A rank in the following turn.

analyse it for me ^^
 

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Katon: Shiranuigata Guren Hōōken) - Hidden Fire Form - Crimson Lotus: Phoenix Blade
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid range
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: Using a style similar to the fire dragon slayer, the user will gather a large amount of fire chakra and release it throughout their entire body in a huge surge. In doing this they will cover their entire body in focused flames that don't harm them (or anyone around them) while at the same time they release a extremely powerful jet of fire from their feet to propel them in a chosen direction like a rocket, shot at fast speed. It will look like the user is shot like an overly large flaming arrow, but that's not all. As the the user is shot through the air, they release pulses of fire around their body (in short range) that look like bright rings of flame, this helps them to break through larger defenses and destroy anything (following strengths and weaknesses of Fire) in their path to reach their target. As they hit their target with a punch or even a headbutt, the strike will be extremely powerful due to the pushing force behind it from the propelling fire, able to cause blunt trauma. As they reach their target the user can release the fire around them outwards to mid range in a destructive explosion outwards from them. The user being the epicenter wouldn't be harmed by this but anyone caught in the blast would have 3rd degree burns and internal damage from the explosive force of the near solid fire, like Sasuke's fire dragon jutsu.
Note: usable twice
Note: No water jutsu in this or the following turn
Note: No jutsu above A rank in the following turn.

analyse it for me ^^
Essentially it's a lot like a fire version of the raikage armor if I read it correctly. You surround yourself in fire and jet boost forwards smashing through anything in the way and then deliver an attack when reaching the opponent while causing the fire to explode outwards.
 

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yep all correct though you missed out one thing, that when you propel yourself you constantly release pulses of fire from around your body that doesn't harm you but if anyone would to be caught in it would be given third degree burns and internal damage ^^
 

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yep all correct though you missed out one thing, that when you propel yourself you constantly release pulses of fire from around your body that doesn't harm you but if anyone would to be caught in it would be given third degree burns and internal damage ^^
Cool I think I got it in that case. Thank you very much :)
 

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These if you don't mind buddy

Fuuton: Hokuryū no kiba) - Wind Release: Fangs Of The North Dragon
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: Based on his unique techniques for the Kusunagi sword, Orochimaru found a way to replicate the effect and make it accessible to anyone. This variant can be used either with weaponry or bare handed strikes. By focusing wind chakra in to their weapon or fists the moment before impact the user is able to generate bursts of sharp condensed wind that take the form of large snakes bareing their fangs to strike the opponent, from both the momentum point and the impact point to enhance firstly the speed and secondly the damage. This can be used in conjunction with kenjutsu or taijutsu freeform or ranked attacks. However if used with ranked attacks it will count as a +20 boost to the techniques in question, if used with freeform it will be considered to have 40 damage as a B rank. In both instances the speed of the attack is increased by two ranks in regards to the users speed chart reference. Due to the nature of wind even formerly blunt attacks such as taijutsu strikes will become sharpened thanks to the wind release capable of puncturing through flesh in a similar way to the Chidori strike however less potent due to the lower rank. Requiring considerable force to run someone through entirely.

Note: Requires a two turn cooldown between uses.
Note: May only be taught by Jhin
Note: No fire in the same turn. Usable once every two turns

(Katon: Moeru hebi no kiba) - Fire Release: Burning Snake Fang
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80 (+20)
Description: This unique fire technique can be performed in two ways, as a single stand alone technique which requires two handseals, dragon and tiger followed by the clapping of the hands. Using it in this form allows the user to manifest a fiery portal similar to the earth release mud drop. However instead of mud forming in this portal a large torrent of fire shaped as snakes will pour out surrounding a target or targets and wrapping around them. The fire while not sentient can be controlled by hand gestures making it very difficult to avoid. The snakes are solid in nature much like the dragon head fireballs making their binding ability quite impressive preventing an enemy wrapped in them from moving freely. The second method of using this technique functions as more of a boosting enhancement performed by clapping the hands. This method of use is performed as a follow up to another fire or wind technique and will cause the snakes to burst forth from the user merging with the preexisting technique adding to the overall power of the former technique by adding additional chakra to the technique and a degree of versatility to the technique by making it function in a solid way. Essentially the previous technique will experience a change in power and ability by becoming the flaming snakes. This usage is considered as an active boost and follows the rules and restrictions of such.

Note: May be used two times per battle overall.
Note: If combined with a wind technique in it's second form it will be considered a fire/wind combo. Combined with a fire technique just creates a stronger fire.
Note: No fire jutsu above A rank in the following turn.
Note: The portal is made in the sky like the mud drop technique atleast 10m above the opponent
Note: May only be taught by Jhin

(Doton: Doro hebi no kiba) - Earth Release: Mud Snake Fang
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80 (+20)
Description: This unique earth technique can be performed in two ways, as a single stand alone technique which requires two handseals, Snake and Ram followed by the clapping of the hands. Using it in this form allows the user to manifest a portal similar to the earth release mud drop. However instead of normal mud forming in this portal a large torrent of mud shaped as snakes will pour out surrounding a target or targets and wrapping around them. The mud while not sentient can be controlled by hand gestures making it very difficult to avoid. The snakes are dense mud in nature much like the swamp of the underworld making their binding ability quite impressive preventing an enemy wrapped in them from moving freely. The second method of using this technique functions as more of a boosting enhancement performed by clapping the hands. This method of use is performed as a follow up to another earth or water technique and will cause the snakes to burst forth from the ground for water techniques or forming from the preexisting earth technique adding to the overall power of the former technique by adding additional chakra to the technique and a degree of versatility to the technique by making it function in a solid way. Essentially the previous technique will experience a change in power and ability by becoming the muddy snakes. This usage is considered as an active boost and follows the rules and restrictions of such.


Note: May be used two times per battle overall.
Note: If combined with a water technique in it's second form it will be considered a earth/water combo. Combined with a earth technique just creates a stronger Earth.
Note: No Earth jutsu above A rank in the following turn.
Note: The portal is made in the sky like the mud drop technique atleast 10m above the opponent
Note: May only be taught by Jhin
 

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Wind Release: Fangs Of The North Dragon

Basically using either a sword or your fists you gather futon charka and before the moment of impact you release the futon charka which releases burst of condense wind being done in this way gives the opponent little to no time to react unless they had sensing of some sort but even then it would still be slow, if used with a rank attack the attack it self which is very nice gaining +20 and if used free form the free form would class as a B rank but this is the first ability the next is that the speed of the attack is raised by 2 ranks above the users rank regardless of what rank they actually was making the technique very nice with the added that taijustu is normally blunt the wind would make the attacks sharpened.

(Katon: Moeru hebi no kiba) - Fire Release: Burning Snake Fang/ (Doton: Doro hebi no kiba) - Earth Release: Mud Snake Fang

Ill do this two together since they are similar and only have minor differences, first the user performs two handseals and then claps their hands together and form a portal above the opponent and then torrents of snakes will drop onto the opponents (either will be earth or fire) and these can be controlled by hand gestures making the technique extremely hard to avoid but the next part is where the next technique differs, The earth/fire snakes have the binding ability since they are similar to swamp of the underground,/ fire snakes are similar to the dragon heads which is solid which allows them to bind which make there binding ability good trapping their opponents. then they each can be boosted by another technique which is also very nice touch to the technique.
 

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Wind Release: Fangs Of The North Dragon

Basically using either a sword or your fists you gather futon charka and before the moment of impact you release the futon charka which releases burst of condense wind being done in this way gives the opponent little to no time to react unless they had sensing of some sort but even then it would still be slow, if used with a rank attack the attack it self which is very nice gaining +20 and if used free form the free form would class as a B rank but this is the first ability the next is that the speed of the attack is raised by 2 ranks above the users rank regardless of what rank they actually was making the technique very nice with the added that taijustu is normally blunt the wind would make the attacks sharpened.

(Katon: Moeru hebi no kiba) - Fire Release: Burning Snake Fang/ (Doton: Doro hebi no kiba) - Earth Release: Mud Snake Fang

Ill do this two together since they are similar and only have minor differences, first the user performs two handseals and then claps their hands together and form a portal above the opponent and then torrents of snakes will drop onto the opponents (either will be earth or fire) and these can be controlled by hand gestures making the technique extremely hard to avoid but the next part is where the next technique differs, The earth/fire snakes have the binding ability since they are similar to swamp of the underground,/ fire snakes are similar to the dragon heads which is solid which allows them to bind which make there binding ability good trapping their opponents. then they each can be boosted by another technique which is also very nice touch to the technique.
First is fine. Second you got back to front. The second function causes them to behave as the boosting technique. I.E I make a swamp of the underworld then with a clap of the hands cause the swamp to become mud snakes that can leap up binding around an enemy via a hand gesture and dragging them down to it's depths, adding +20 to the swamp.
 

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First is fine. Second you got back to front. The second function causes them to behave as the boosting technique. I.E I make a swamp of the underworld then with a clap of the hands cause the swamp to become mud snakes that can leap up binding around an enemy via a hand gesture and dragging them down to it's depths, adding +20 to the swamp.
oh yeah must of just typed It wrong z.z well I guess I see you when you finished the elements that you need xd
 
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