Essentially it's a lot like a fire version of the raikage armor if I read it correctly. You surround yourself in fire and jet boost forwards smashing through anything in the way and then deliver an attack when reaching the opponent while causing the fire to explode outwards.Katon: Shiranuigata Guren Hōōken) - Hidden Fire Form - Crimson Lotus: Phoenix Blade
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid range
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: Using a style similar to the fire dragon slayer, the user will gather a large amount of fire chakra and release it throughout their entire body in a huge surge. In doing this they will cover their entire body in focused flames that don't harm them (or anyone around them) while at the same time they release a extremely powerful jet of fire from their feet to propel them in a chosen direction like a rocket, shot at fast speed. It will look like the user is shot like an overly large flaming arrow, but that's not all. As the the user is shot through the air, they release pulses of fire around their body (in short range) that look like bright rings of flame, this helps them to break through larger defenses and destroy anything (following strengths and weaknesses of Fire) in their path to reach their target. As they hit their target with a punch or even a headbutt, the strike will be extremely powerful due to the pushing force behind it from the propelling fire, able to cause blunt trauma. As they reach their target the user can release the fire around them outwards to mid range in a destructive explosion outwards from them. The user being the epicenter wouldn't be harmed by this but anyone caught in the blast would have 3rd degree burns and internal damage from the explosive force of the near solid fire, like Sasuke's fire dragon jutsu.
Note: usable twice
Note: No water jutsu in this or the following turn
Note: No jutsu above A rank in the following turn.
analyse it for me ^^
Cool I think I got it in that case. Thank you very muchyep all correct though you missed out one thing, that when you propel yourself you constantly release pulses of fire from around your body that doesn't harm you but if anyone would to be caught in it would be given third degree burns and internal damage ^^
First is fine. Second you got back to front. The second function causes them to behave as the boosting technique. I.E I make a swamp of the underworld then with a clap of the hands cause the swamp to become mud snakes that can leap up binding around an enemy via a hand gesture and dragging them down to it's depths, adding +20 to the swamp.Wind Release: Fangs Of The North Dragon
Basically using either a sword or your fists you gather futon charka and before the moment of impact you release the futon charka which releases burst of condense wind being done in this way gives the opponent little to no time to react unless they had sensing of some sort but even then it would still be slow, if used with a rank attack the attack it self which is very nice gaining +20 and if used free form the free form would class as a B rank but this is the first ability the next is that the speed of the attack is raised by 2 ranks above the users rank regardless of what rank they actually was making the technique very nice with the added that taijustu is normally blunt the wind would make the attacks sharpened.
(Katon: Moeru hebi no kiba) - Fire Release: Burning Snake Fang/ (Doton: Doro hebi no kiba) - Earth Release: Mud Snake Fang
Ill do this two together since they are similar and only have minor differences, first the user performs two handseals and then claps their hands together and form a portal above the opponent and then torrents of snakes will drop onto the opponents (either will be earth or fire) and these can be controlled by hand gestures making the technique extremely hard to avoid but the next part is where the next technique differs, The earth/fire snakes have the binding ability since they are similar to swamp of the underground,/ fire snakes are similar to the dragon heads which is solid which allows them to bind which make there binding ability good trapping their opponents. then they each can be boosted by another technique which is also very nice touch to the technique.
oh yeah must of just typed It wrong z.z well I guess I see you when you finished the elements that you need xdFirst is fine. Second you got back to front. The second function causes them to behave as the boosting technique. I.E I make a swamp of the underworld then with a clap of the hands cause the swamp to become mud snakes that can leap up binding around an enemy via a hand gesture and dragging them down to it's depths, adding +20 to the swamp.
Indeed. I shall return then.oh yeah must of just typed It wrong z.z well I guess I see you when you finished the elements that you need xd