a Small Poem

[SandFreak]

Death's sweet embrace
Wisdom is what all people possess sometimes it makes them proud to be a person of such great importance they believe in themselves to be be better accomplices to help others when they are in trouble but in time when they feel death pulling them in to its dark embrace it means that the time has come to put all things aside and let the soul deep within slowly rise out of their bodies to float into the heavens above the light will guide them so they will not get lost during travel



This was from my imagination

 

[Yuka]

Brilliant 10/10

 

[Jewelz]

*wags her tail* Beautiful Poem ^-^

 

[SandFreak]

thank You i appreciate the compliment

 

[marvinkid]

nice =)

 

[Venus]

Nice chika!!!! Love it

 

[RukiaKuchiki]

Fantastic

 

[Stream Of Tears77]

it kinda sounds like some of mine:| but it was really good

 

[Last]

Reminds me of the color black.

 

[Unpredictable]

it kinda sounds like some of mine:| but it was really good

Don't listen to tears77 She's just jealous, Your a hard worker so keep up the the good work ^_^

 

[Stream Of Tears77]

Don't listen to tears77 She's just jealous, Your a hard worker so keep up the the good work ^_^

really I'm not jealous at all its really quite interesting to find someone who can write like I canU_U

 

[phoenixforcexD]

wow, ur really good at this stuff
i couldnt even come up with a sentence if i even tried

 

[RJSterling]

You write like an emo but in a good way

 

[SHARINGAN_USER UCHIHA_ITACHI]

Its REALLY GOOD....!!!

 

[Zith Driekwulf]

Nice! Though I wouldn't call it a poem. An idea for you build up a poem would rather be appropriate. Poems follow certain structures so, build it up into one!