Again the base of this one is good, but it is lacking in the interesting department. I really think you need to add effects of some sort, be it c4d's, fractals or whatever you feel most comfortable using. The BG is a good start, but it needs more for the eye to look at as I said with one of your other tags you need to experiment with foreground effects. It will add some much needed depth to your tags, searching tuts will help you with this, but I really think you just need to play around with your options more. If you don't like that kind of thing then try making your canvas dimensions smaller so that you don't have so much empty space to fill. Overall nice job, it just looks unfinished so KIU and keep trying
