[Other] A short Poem

[Yuse]

I lost my Soul
I lost my Soul, it chose to leave me while my mind played tricks and tried to deceive me,
and in the end i just let it go,
now i'm like the land without the sea incomplete,
i'm just a shell that contains no meaning,
i am a dead flower that is unable to take or give,
i am a human that is unable to live,
no longer will i be able to crack a smile,
for without my soul nothing in this world is worthwhile

tell me what you think

 

[SasoriOfTheRedSaand]

You've got skills buddy. That's some Shakespearean shit you've got going on, but I'm just on another level.

I bought a cat

His name was matt

He was quite fat

So I fucked him off to camp

 

[Mellow]

Deep shit :')

 

[BLAZE]

Thats Deep
+rep

 

[Edward]

That's pretty good actually O__O

but you should like.. seperate it into different lines so its easier to read. other than that, it was a nice read!

 

[LitAquarius]

Quite Deep!
> Noice work mate!

 

[LordNarutoSo6P]

You've got skills buddy. That's some Shakespearean shit you've got going on, but I'm just on another level.

I bought a cat

His name was matt

He was quite fat

So I fucked him off to camp

lmao! That rhyming tho. You really have the talent bruh =D

 

[The Sach]

That's pretty good bro. You have got them skills.^_^

 

[Rohan]

Very nice poem and usage of emotions.

 

[Goetia]

That's good, I like it.

 

[HenryHyuga7]

Deep and dark

 

[Aoihime]

That was great +rep

 

[DeBlazin]

Cool poem, lil too dark tho, but cool nonetheless

 

[Obítō1]

Amazing bro

 

[ugh]

._. Amazing work bro

 

[LOCKKO REE]

Good work!!!

 

[Made in Heaven]

That's very nice ;_;

 

[Conspirator.]

Brilliant, you are obviously a very talented poet!

 

[Bulldawg]

I lost my Soul
I lost my Soul, it chose to leave me while my mind played tricks and tried to deceive me,
and in the end i just let it go,
now i'm like the land without the sea incomplete,
i'm just a shell that contains no meaning,
i am a dead flower that is unable to take or give,
i am a human that is unable to live,
no longer will i be able to crack a smile,
for without my soul nothing in this world is worthwhile

tell me what you think

Kool this poem goes with the naruto shippuden ost I'm listening to.

 

[Jon Snow.]

Wow,I actually wasn't expecting much but I'm impressed.