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Please bear with me, this is my first time doing this xd
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This is the story, of two unlikely friends, who unexpectedly met one day. Despite being so different, they shared common goals, opinions and feelings. Down the line of their friendship, they came to the cross roads of their friendship, which would either lead them to continue working together in the future, or to part ways, and continue on their own.
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~Sound~
*The sound of rain drops pattering against the ground*
Sosuke: Where is he?!
Thug: Hehe, i don't know what your talking about..
Sosuke: *Grits teeth* I'll ask you once more, where is he? If you fail to answer my question again, it may be the last mistake you ever make..
Thug: Listen ok, im not to high on the food chain, i don't really know where he is, he briefs us through an astral projection. Hehee, but even if i did know, I wouldn't tell you nothin'! You little br...
*A distastefull sound is heard as Sosuke's blade, slashes the thugs throat. Rain continues to pour over the thugs now lifeless body, while the rain dilutes his blood*
Sosuke: Hmph......Bastard..
So what's my next move? I've got to think carefully, he'll be expecting me now. Hmph, guess for now, ill head into town, and see who i run into over there..
Ruiz..: So what happened next?
Zarakii: Well whaddya think? i got the belt off my neck,stepped of the chair, and ran outta there.. I thought i was gonna have to slice my way outta there..
Ruiz..: Man, that sounds crazy
Zarakii: Yeah well, you know, Barmitzvahs. Anyway, where are we?
Ruiz..: ~_~
We just reached the border of Ame, not much longer now till the rendezvous point.
Zarakii: Ohh my God, how much longer already!!??
Ruiz..: I just said not much longer -_-
Zarakii: What the hell ~_~. Why do we even have to do this stupid mission.
Ruiz..: *sigh*.. We have to go to meet with one of Ame's reprasentatives, to gather all the intel they have on Akatsuki. This information can then be used to better understand what were up against, and protect the eight and nine tailed jinchurriki's better.
Zarakii: Ughh, man this is so ridiculous, couldn't they send someone else to do this?
Ruiz..: *thinks*Why the hell did they partner me up with him? What did i ever do :T_T:?
Ruiz..: ALright, we're at the point, we should be meeting him soon..
*A short skinny man, wearing large circular glasses steppes forward*
Migualon J.J.: Hi, by looking at your headbands, i guess you two are the konoha shinobi who were sent here.
Zarakii: Yeah, yeah we are. Could we do this quickly, im in kind of a rush to get back to the village :/
Ruiz..: Don't mind that idioit, proceed.
Migualon J.J.: Ahh well, in this file is all the information we've got on Akatsuki, i hope it helps..
Ruiz..: Great. Is there also info on the known members of Akatsuki in here as well?
Migulon J.J: Down to every known detail.
Ruiz..: Thanks for the info, we'll get this file back to konoha safely ^^
*Just as soon as he arrived, the short fellow dissapears off into the crowd.
Ruiz..: Alright, that wasn't so bad, now back to konoha..
Zarrakii: Wait, before we go, can we get a bite to eat? ^^
Ruiz..: Really? Just a second ago you were complaining about how you wanted to go hom, and now your hungry and want to stay?
Bi Polar Bastard ~_~, lets go.
Zarakii: Im broke by the way, so your paying
Ruiz..:WTH Are you kidding me?? Forget it, now i want to leave -_-
Minato: *Rises from the ground*
I just found another one of our thugs dead. It's not a coincidence, i think ??? is coming for you.
The Pervy Sage: Your just Paranoid...
Minato: No really, he was wearing a wire. I can literally hear everything that happened.
The Pervy Sage: Interesting, *hahaaa* This may turn out to be quite fun...
Let him do as he pleases, it makes no difference to me, no matter the situation, i am prepared. But make sure you keep an eye on him..
Minato: Acknowledged. So...>_>...<_<
Can i eat the body?
The Pervy Sage: Knock yourself out
Minato:
*Sinks back into the ground*
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Opinions please, tell me where i need to improve. I hunger for your criticism O_O
EDIT: BB coding fixed.
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This is the story, of two unlikely friends, who unexpectedly met one day. Despite being so different, they shared common goals, opinions and feelings. Down the line of their friendship, they came to the cross roads of their friendship, which would either lead them to continue working together in the future, or to part ways, and continue on their own.
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Chapter 1
~Amegakure-03:30pm~
~Somewhere in The middle of Ame in an open plain~
~Amegakure-03:30pm~
~Somewhere in The middle of Ame in an open plain~
~Sound~
*The sound of rain drops pattering against the ground*
Sosuke: Where is he?!
Thug: Hehe, i don't know what your talking about..
Sosuke: *Grits teeth* I'll ask you once more, where is he? If you fail to answer my question again, it may be the last mistake you ever make..
Thug: Listen ok, im not to high on the food chain, i don't really know where he is, he briefs us through an astral projection. Hehee, but even if i did know, I wouldn't tell you nothin'! You little br...
*A distastefull sound is heard as Sosuke's blade, slashes the thugs throat. Rain continues to pour over the thugs now lifeless body, while the rain dilutes his blood*
Sosuke: Hmph......Bastard..
So what's my next move? I've got to think carefully, he'll be expecting me now. Hmph, guess for now, ill head into town, and see who i run into over there..
~Amegakure-03:04pm~
~The border between the land of Fire and Amegakure~
~The border between the land of Fire and Amegakure~
Ruiz..: So what happened next?
Zarakii: Well whaddya think? i got the belt off my neck,stepped of the chair, and ran outta there.. I thought i was gonna have to slice my way outta there..
Ruiz..: Man, that sounds crazy
Zarakii: Yeah well, you know, Barmitzvahs. Anyway, where are we?
Ruiz..: ~_~
We just reached the border of Ame, not much longer now till the rendezvous point.
Zarakii: Ohh my God, how much longer already!!??
Ruiz..: I just said not much longer -_-
Zarakii: What the hell ~_~. Why do we even have to do this stupid mission.
Ruiz..: *sigh*.. We have to go to meet with one of Ame's reprasentatives, to gather all the intel they have on Akatsuki. This information can then be used to better understand what were up against, and protect the eight and nine tailed jinchurriki's better.
Zarakii: Ughh, man this is so ridiculous, couldn't they send someone else to do this?
Ruiz..: *thinks*Why the hell did they partner me up with him? What did i ever do :T_T:?
~Amegakure-03:35pm~
~Somewhere in town~
~Somewhere in town~
Ruiz..: ALright, we're at the point, we should be meeting him soon..
*A short skinny man, wearing large circular glasses steppes forward*
Migualon J.J.: Hi, by looking at your headbands, i guess you two are the konoha shinobi who were sent here.
Zarakii: Yeah, yeah we are. Could we do this quickly, im in kind of a rush to get back to the village :/
Ruiz..: Don't mind that idioit, proceed.
Migualon J.J.: Ahh well, in this file is all the information we've got on Akatsuki, i hope it helps..
Ruiz..: Great. Is there also info on the known members of Akatsuki in here as well?
Migulon J.J: Down to every known detail.
Ruiz..: Thanks for the info, we'll get this file back to konoha safely ^^
*Just as soon as he arrived, the short fellow dissapears off into the crowd.
Ruiz..: Alright, that wasn't so bad, now back to konoha..
Zarrakii: Wait, before we go, can we get a bite to eat? ^^
Ruiz..: Really? Just a second ago you were complaining about how you wanted to go hom, and now your hungry and want to stay?
Bi Polar Bastard ~_~, lets go.
Zarakii: Im broke by the way, so your paying
Ruiz..:WTH Are you kidding me?? Forget it, now i want to leave -_-
~Akatsuki Hideout (Whereabouts Unkown)-03:35pm~
Minato: *Rises from the ground*
I just found another one of our thugs dead. It's not a coincidence, i think ??? is coming for you.
The Pervy Sage: Your just Paranoid...
Minato: No really, he was wearing a wire
. I can literally hear everything that happened. The Pervy Sage: Interesting, *hahaaa* This may turn out to be quite fun...
Let him do as he pleases, it makes no difference to me, no matter the situation, i am prepared. But make sure you keep an eye on him..
Minato: Acknowledged. So...>_>...<_<
Can i eat the body?
The Pervy Sage: Knock yourself out
Minato:
*Sinks back into the ground*
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Opinions please, tell me where i need to improve. I hunger for your criticism O_O
EDIT: BB coding fixed.
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