[Adventure] A Pokemon Adventure Chapter 5

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Chapter 5​


Two Become Three

Lilliana: that was a good match now it’s time for the second battle between Lucy from Twin Leaf Town and Sarah from Pallet Town.

Sarah: Piplup spotlight

(Piplup is a light-blue penguin-like Pokémon, which is covered in thick down to insulate against the cold. It has a dark blue head with a primarily white face and a short, yellow beak. The dark blue feathers on its head extend down its back and around its neck, which causes it to appear to be wearing a cape. There are two white ovals on its chest and a small, light-blue marking resembles a crown above its beak. It has flipper-like arms and yellow feet with three toes each.)

Lucy: Squirtle Curtain

(Squirtle is a small Pokémon that resembles a light blue turtle. While it typically walks on its two short legs, it has been shown to run on all fours. It has large brown eyes and a slightly hooked upper lip. Each of its hands and feet have three pointed digits. The end of its long tail curls inward. Its body is encased by a tough shell that forms and hardens after birth. This shell is brown on the top, pale yellow on the bottom, and has a thick white ridge between the two halves.)

Narrator: five minutes later.

Lilliana: what a match now on to the next match.

Narrator: a few more battles later.

Lilliana: it’s now time for the final battle between Aurora from Burnie Town & Byran from Coral Bay, there is five minutes on the clock begin.

Aurora: Oshawott on stage.

Byran: Taillow Curtain.

Aurora: Oshawott use razor shell.

Byran: Taillow dodge and use peck.

Lilliana: what great moves.

Aurora: Oshawott use water gun while spinning.

Lilliana: a direct hit.

Byran: Taillow you can do it use gust.

Lilliana: what an amazing gust.

Narrator: there is now only one minute.

Aurora: time for our secret move, Oshawott use Hidden power.

Byran: Taillow use Fly.

Narrator: the five minutes is up.

Lilliana: this has been a close battle since the start but the winner by a hair is.

Narrator: the winner then appeared up on the screen.

Lilliana: AURORA!

Narrator: Lilliana then presented Aurora with the Farina towns Pokémon contests ribbon.

Lilliana: Congrats Aurora, and Goodbye everyone and we will see you all at the next contest.

Narrator: after it was all over Aurora went to look for Byran so she started to leave and she saw Adam.

Adam: Congrats on winning your first contest ribbon Aurora.

Aurora: thanks Adam

Narrator: Aurora was looking around


Aurora: hey Adam did you see Byran while you were waiting for me

Adam: no but he may be at the Pokémon centre

Narrator: Aurora and Adam then headed back to the Pokémon centre to catch Byran.

Aurora: nurse Joy can you take care of my Pokémon

Nurse Joy: Sure just leave them with me

Byran: congrats Aurora

Aurora: thank you Byran, I wondered where you went I was going to say thanks for awesome battle I did not think I was going to win I was surprised.

Byran: you surprised me to but good job next time it will be me

Aurora: we shall see

Adam: Aurora and Byran Nurse Joy was looking for you both

Aurora: okay thanks Adam

Byran: thanks Adam

Narrator: they both then went to see Nurse Joy.

Nurse Joy: all your Pokémon are in good shape.

Aurora: thanks Nurse Joy.

Byran: thanks Nurse Joy.

Adam: I so can not wait until my first gym battle.

Byran: I wish you luck Adam.

Adam: thanks Byran.

Aurora: so what are you going to do now Byran?

Byran: I may stay here for one more night then start heading to my next Pokémon contest, well I may go and do some training now.

Aurora: okay see you later Byran

Adam: we probably should stay one more night to Aurora, you should call Mum.

Aurora: okay good Idea Adam we need to stock up any way.

Narrator: Aurora then made her call home.

“Ring Ring”

Anthea: Aiden can you get that.

Aiden: sure.

Narrator: Aiden then answered the call.

Aurora & Adam: hey dad.

Aiden: hey there you two how are you both.

Adam: we are good dad.

Aurora: where is mum.

Anthea: Right here.

Adam: hey mum.

Aurora: Hey mum look.

Anthea: I was watching the whole thing with your father, as well as Ethan, Natsume Congrats Aurora.

Aurora: thanks mum.

Adam: where are Ethan and Natsume?

Anthea: I sent them to the shops they should be back.

Narrator: Natsume and Ethan walked in a second later.

Aiden: Natsume & Ethan.

Natsume & Ethan: yes dad.

Aiden: come and say hi to your sister and brother.

Narrator: they both came running.

Natsume: Hey Adam, Hey Aurora and congrats on winning your first Ribbon that was one close battle me and mum where on the edge of our seats.

Adam: Hey Natsume, Hey Ethan.

Ethan: Hey Adam, Hey Aurora and me and dad where as well congrats Aurora.

Aiden: that we where Congrats Aurora.

Aurora: thanks Dad Natsume and Ethan.

Natsume: so what’s next?

Adam: well we are going to stay here one more night and head out early in the morning for my first gym Battle.

Aiden: good luck Adam.

Adam: Thanks Dad.

Aurora: well we better go.

Adam: yeah

Anthea & Aiden: take care both of you.

Natsume & Ethan: talk to you again soon.

Aurora & Adam: goodbye everyone.

Narrator: Adam then ended the call.

Adam: I guess we should have Lunch.

Aurora: yeah good idea I am Hungry.

Adam: what do you want to do?

Aurora: to celebrate my first contest win I think we could go to that nice place I saw on the way to the Pokémon centre.

Adam: okay lead the way.

Narrator: ten minutes or so later they arrived they walked in and sat down.

Waiter: how may I help you?

Adam: I would like the special.

Aurora: I will have the same.

Waiter: okay two specials.

Narrator: he then walked off, he returned roughly about fifteen minutes later.

Waiter: here are you are

Adam & Aurora: thank you

Narrator: they then started eating, they then had some sweets, and twenty minutes later they got up paid their bill and where about to leave when a waitress called out to them.

Waitress: you’re the contest winner right.

Aurora: yes

Waitress: here, your meal here should been free but since you paid here are three free meal coupons.

Aurora: thank you.

Waitress: no problem and congrats on your first contest win.

Aurora: thanks.

Adam: wow lucky.

Aurora: yeah did not expect that.

Adam: well I may walk around a bit more.

Aurora: I will go stock up on supplies now shall we meet up later at the Pokémon centre.

Adam: yeah alright sounds like a plan.

Narrator: they then split up.

Adam: come on out Chimchar and Starly.

Chimchar: Chimchar (the Chimp like Pokémon)

Starly: Starly (a small bird like Pokémon)

Adam: here is some Pokémon food.

Narrator: Meanwhile Aurora was walking around and ran into Byran.

Aurora: hey Byran, done training.

Byran: hey Aurora, yeah just stocking so I am ready for tomorrow.

Aurora: I just had an Idea why don’t you travel with us I am sure Adam won’t mind but I will him later, so what do you say.

Byran: well it would be more fun and better than travelling on my own sure why not.

Aurora: great, once we are done stocking up we will head back to the Pokémon centre.

Byran: okay here these are good

Narrator: an hour had passed and Adam had got back to the Pokémon centre.

Adam looks like I am the first one to return hey Chimchar and Starly

Chimchar: Chimchar

Starly: Starly

Narrator: then about five min later Aurora walked into the Pokémon centre followed by Byran.

Aurora: ah Adam there is something we need to discuss can we talk now.

Adam: sure let head to our room.

Aurora: we will be down for dinner see you in a little bit Byran.

Byran: okay

Narrator: Aurora and Adam headed to their room

Adam: what’s up Aurora?

Aurora: I have asked Byran to travel with us are you okay with that?

Adam: sure the more the merrier it will be fun.

Aurora: I am glad you’re okay with it.

Adam: it’s good to travel with others I say.

Narrator: five minutes later they headed back out to have dinner.

Byran I know this place my shout.

Aurora: you sure.

Byran: yes it as thanks for asking me along.

Narrator: an hour later and they once again returned to the Pokémon centre.

Adam: well I think we should get some sleep.

Byran: I agree.

Aurora: I am tired.

Byran: see you both in the morning.

Adam & Aurora: night Byran.

Byran: night.



I know its been awhile since i have added a new chapter I hope you enjoy it I will try to add the next on real soon

here are the links to the previous chapters.

Chapter 1:

Chapter 2:

Chapter 3:

Chapter 4:
 
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Hmm, lot of progress, it looks like. You could probably go more in detail on what's taking place and where, though, and maybe add a few emotions to the characters cause they all just sound the same in the way they speak.

Either way, nice chapter. Hope to see you writing more in the future, Serena:)
 

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Hmm, lot of progress, it looks like. You could probably go more in detail on what's taking place and where, though, and maybe add a few emotions to the characters cause they all just sound the same in the way they speak.

Either way, nice chapter. Hope to see you writing more in the future, Serena:)
thank you for your comment and i will try to take what you said into consideration for my next chapter and i am glad you enjoyed it :)
 
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It’s always interesting when main characters are pivoted together :) So Aurora pulled through and I’m glad that Oshawott was the one who helped made that possible =D That was nice of the waitress to gift Aurora several free meal coupons for being victorious :) Wow, I didn’t expect for Byran to join the siblings, his addition to their group should be interesting ^^ I thought Adam would accept Byran accompanying them as they were friendly with each other.

This was another great chapter, especially with Byran’s addition to the group! ^^
 

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It’s always interesting when main characters are pivoted together :) So Aurora pulled through and I’m glad that Oshawott was the one who helped made that possible =D That was nice of the waitress to gift Aurora several free meal coupons for being victorious :) Wow, I didn’t expect for Byran to join the siblings, his addition to their group should be interesting ^^ I thought Adam would accept Byran accompanying them as they were friendly with each other.

This was another great chapter, especially with Byran’s addition to the group! ^^

thanks for your comment once again Kuroi there maybe one more companion who knows :).
 

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thanks for your comment once again Kuroi there maybe one more companion who knows :).
You’re welcome once more ^^

Yeah, if that happens, it’ll be pretty epic but I also don’t want to sound like I’m demanding this or anything like that as I’ll be perfectly accepting of whatever you decide to do ;)

I look forward to the next chapter =D
 
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