A Poem by Lady Mokusei

[Lady Mokusei]

Hi, my name is Lady Mokusei, and this is my poem.

My divine torturer took off my skin,
O, how splendidly crimson flesh glitters in the dusk
when vast pain grips agonized body,

My noble butcher cut off my legs,
O,how magnificently blood blossoms in the eventide
when wail spills in colourful anguish,

My darling slayer broke off my arms,
O, how beautifully bone crackles in the dead of night
when lament harrows carmine throat.

I’m martyr of my darling slayer,
I’m slave of my noble butcher,

I’m lady of my divine torturer!

I embrace your wallop
in sinful Passion!
I adore your whip,
in rotten Devotion!

I’m martyr of my darling slayer,
I’m slave of my noble butcher,

I’m your lady, my divine torturer!

We altered Tenderness
to the ultimate Commitment!
We uncovered true nature of man,
in front of the door of Love!

Thus I become
Martyr or my darling slayer,
Slave of my noble butcher,

Lady of my divine torturer!

Any thoughts?

 

[Inichi Matsuka]

Quite morbid, but I liked it! xD Good job! :3

 

[Kung Fro]

.Kind of scared me..

 

[Lady Mokusei]

Quite morbid, but I liked it! xD Good job! :3

I know it is a little bit awkward ,
but I was inspired by many women who are severely beaten by their husbands, but again are not dissatisfied with their life.
I wanted to see their world through my eyes.

Anyway, glad you like it. Thank you for reading it.

 

[Lady Mokusei]

.Kind of scared me..

O, sorry to hear that, but sometimes my poems are harsh reality. You know, I like to write about cruel things. Can't help it. Lol

But I promise next time I'll write about something brighter, just for you!

 

[Uchiha seeker]

... whoa i read the whole thing

 

[Lady Mokusei]

... whoa i read the whole thing

Thank you for reading my poem.

I had complaint about morbid text of my poem but I'll write something better next time.

 

[Hori]

impressive well done