[Spoilers] A little to convenient

Jcub

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I can't be the only one who thought that last chapters "plot" twist was a little to convenient... It's a bit of a cop out to simply tie up loose ends or re write a rewritten plot twist and tie it in with the statement " I planned for all of this"

Seriously? This is like 90's B action movie dialog right here.

I wont go into the "If he gets the other [insert name of object] he will become over 9000" plot development... such bad writing...

Ugh and the "You and rin figured it out huh, well I planned for that too.." Chidori-to-counter-the-"obvious"-never-mentioned-heart-movement-seal-whatever... Holy Jesus... this is too much.
 

chintu234

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I can't be the only one who thought that last chapters "plot" twist was a little to convenient... It's a bit of a cop out to simply tie up loose ends or re write a rewritten plot twist and tie it in with the statement " I planned for all of this"

Seriously? This is like 90's B action movie dialog right here.

I wont go into the "If he gets the other [insert name of object] he will become over 9000" plot development... such bad writing...

Ugh and the "You and rin figured it out huh, well I planned for that too.." Chidori-to-counter-the-"obvious"-never-mentioned-heart-movement-seal-whatever... Holy Jesus... this is too much.

You should say holy Naruto instead of that :p XD
 

Yuse

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yeah i guess your right things have become a bit unexpected in the bad way
 

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I called this way back U_U
 
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