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Chapter 14
Rinata Coughed up blood. ?Rinata!!? Yelled Renji and Nell. ?Nell! Get out of here now! I will get Rinata!? he yelled. ?I can?t leave you two behind!? Nell yelled. ?Nell go!!? He yelled. She jumped to the trees. Renji grabbed Rinata, who was keeping herself alive, by using a small amount of healing. The criminals started to gather around. Renji tried to hold them off as long as he could. ?That?s it. I told someone I would never use this?? he said. He closed his eyes then opened them, revealing his right eye with a sharingan. ?AAARGGG!? he yelled. A huge light came out. ?Hidden Style! Spirit Breaker!? he yelled. The light faded, showing the man all dead. Nell came back. ?R-renji? Rinata?? she asked. Renji was dead, holding the dead Rinata. ?Renji!!?? Rinata!!??? she yelled picking their bodies up. ?No? no no no! First Itachi and now you guys? NO?I refuse it?.? She yelled. She carried their bodies back to their familes, explaining what happened. Nell went to Renji?s house the next day. ?I have only been in here once?? she said. She saw a note. She opened it up.
Rinata,
I know this is sudden, and that we have been friends for years. Actually, I knew you since I was 5 then we met again at 8. You probably don?t remember. Anyways. I feel really close to you and Nell, now that her heart has been broken by Itachi. I hope I finally have the courage to give you this, but, I really like you. I actually have crushed on you for a few years. I told Itachi, and he told me just to ask you, but I could never do it. Since you had that Fantasy for Itachi?. But I really like you. What about you?
Renji.
She set the letter down. ?No wonder he gave his life for her, even though she died too?? she said. Leaving. The next few years were angony for her. Sasuke grew up to age 12 when she got happier. She was even happier when she heard she was going to be able to be an up close watcher of the Chuunin Exams Sasuke, Sakura, and Naruto were in. Nell grew really close to them, and the other 2 groups. ?So Kakashi? You told them they were in Chuunin Exams this year?? Nell said, now age 18. ?Yes, they all seem ready. Iruka tested them and said they may make it.? Kakashi said holding his book. ?Um, Master Kakashi?? She said. ?Yes, Nell?? Kakashi said. ?Why do you read those books?? she asked. ?Well, I?? Kakashi said. ?I read one of them before. They are so boring.. no offense.? She said. ?It?s alright. Anyways, are you going to be one of the cheat watcher for the first part of the Chuunin exams?? he asked. ?Yep, but I am getting the back left row. With people from the rain, sand and sound village in it.? She said. ?Good. This should be an interesting year.? Kakashi said. Nell sat down and once the test started, she watched.God, these kids suck at cheating? she thought standing up. ?Number 42. Your out. Numbers 67 and 32 your out as well.? She said. ?What?!? he yelled standing up. ?You heard me, you and you team are out.? She said sitting back down. Some of the kids are using ways that I would only know, luckily I didn?t get their row. The other jounin can?t probably see it. Sasuke is using Sharingan, Kiba is using Akumaru, Tenten is using a mirror, Shino is using his bugs?. But Naruto?. Hinata is practically giving him the answeres and he denies them! Idiot, everyone but him has figured it out? she thought. The people in her row weren?t making it obvious anymore. Finally the 10th questiong came. Everyone in Nell?s row was gone. After Ibiki explained that everyone who was courageous enough to stay goes on to the next round. ?What!? What happened?!? Naruto yelled. God Naruto, your such a prick, you made it! Shut up and sit down! She thought rolling her eyes. Then Anko came in. ?Alright you maggots listen up!? she yelled. Oh great, if it isn?t Anko? she thought. ?Your early? Anko.? Ibiki said. ?O-h?? she said. ?The forest of Death? You can?t be serious..? Nell said as she stood at the gates, with Kakashi. ?Why do you say that? Do you think it will be to dangerous for them?? he said. ?What? No way.. I say it isn?t hard enough. When me, Renji, Rinata, and Itachi all went in there, we were the first ones in. We actually had a greusome battle with some grass ninja, obtaining our scroll. We didn?t even get a scratch on us.? She said. ?We better get out of here. Some of the other Ninja are showing up.? Kakashi said. ?You go, I have to go to the center building, since I was the winner one time, I can go into the center first.? She said. ?Alright. Wish the kids luck for me.? Kakashi said. ?Ah, there you are Nell. Before most of the others come, let me let you in.? Anko said. She unlocked the door and let her in. ?Be careful!? Anko yelled closing the gate behind Nell. Anko was actually one of our opponents when we took the chuunin exams? she couldn?t get to chuunin level till the next year though, because my group did.. she thought. Before she took off she looked back. Those are the sand ninja, Gaara, Temari, and Kankuro. That Gaara kid scares me the most?. She thought and took off into the trees. She jumped tree to tree and needed to stop. She sat on a tree and looked around. She heard stepping then took out her watch. ?They started not to long ago. Remember my first time here. Now that I am a Jounin, I can do almost anything I want?.? She said. Suddenly she was shocked from the feeling of a large chackra. She jumped tree to tree and finally got to a spot. She sat out on a plain sight branch, using a hiding jutsu and looked down. ?Its those sand siblings, and they are taking on those rain villige guys?.? She said. And there is Hinata, Kiba, and Shino. I shouldn?t give their location away? she said watching the siblings. ?Can you believe these worthless sand ninja? Taking on us?? said the second tallest ninja from the hidden Rain. ?What idiots.? Said the short one. Gaara glared at them blood thirstily. Wow, he seems intense. And by the look of it, Akamaru down there thinks both groups are bad news?.. she thought, letting her feet dangle. ?Well that?s too bad, little twerps, Maybe you should have picked a weaker opponent than you. Looks like your all dead!? yelled Shigurai, the leader of their group. ?That?s enough out of you. Can we hurry this up? I don?t want to waste to much time on him.? Gaara said. Shigurai was shocked and angered by the response. ?Gaara, don?t you think we should have followed them first to see what scroll they got? If they have the same as us, we would just be wasting our time anyways.? Kankuro said.?I really don?t care. They disgust me, and looked at me the wrong way, now, their all gonna die.? Gaara said. Everyone was shocked. ?You think you can take us on? Well try and well see what happens!? Shigurai yelled throwing umbrellas in the air. ?Ninja art, Needle rainstorm!? Shigurai yelled. Suddenly hundreds of needles flung around Gaara. Nell stayed still even though some flew towards her. She caught each one and held them in her hand. The needles that went for Gaara made a huge dust cloud around it. As the dust cleared, it showed him encasing himself in a sheild of sand. ?Sweet..? Nell said. Shigurai was shocked. ?Is that it..? Pathetic.? Gaara said. Shigurai flung more at him, but more sand came up and blocked it. ?A needle Rain storm huh? How about this. Lets let it rain blood. How about that?? Gaara said. The rain team was in shock. ?This is so cool. Gaara of the deserts secret is that he uses a sand jutsu. Unless?..? Nell said. If my memory serves right, Gaara holds the 1 tail Shukaku inside himself. The sand probably comes up at its own accord. She thought. ?Sand?! A wall of sand?? Shigurai said. ?Yep, that?s Gaara?s ability you see. Its just a deefense , the likes of you could never get through it. Nothing can. It?s a jutsu that hardens the sand and only Gaara can do it. It also happens automaticlly, when ever he is threatened.? Kankuro said. ?Oh yeah!? We will see about that!? Shigurai yelled. ?Face it, no one, not even you, can beat him.? Kankuro said. Shigurai was shocked but ran towards Gaara. Gaara lifted his hands up and made a hand sign. ?Sand Coffin!? Gaara yelled. The next step Shigurai made, was his last. Sand wrapped up his leg and all around his body, except his face. ?Holy crap!? Nell said flinching. The umbrellas fell down to the ground, and Gaara walked by and picked one up. ?Only thing I need to do is cover that trap of your and you?ll be dead, but that?s boring.? Gaara said opening the umbrella. Gaara then lifted Shigurai in the air. ?Sand Burial.? Gaara said. Suddenly blood was flying every where as quick as the blink of an eye, he was dead. ?That?s amazing?? Nell said. Everyone was shocked. ?Oh, I crushed him with more forced than necessary, because the beast with in me was awakened, making him have no pain at all.? Gaara said. ?Ok! Take the scrool! Let us go!? said the second, setting the scroll down. Gaara lifted his hands and sand wrapped around the two. Lifting them up high in the sky, he did what he did to Shigurai, and killed them. Nell looked down. Hinata was so frientened and Kiba was crawling away, talking to the other two. Get out of here you guys? Nell thought. Kankuro grabbed the scroll. ?Lookie here, we got lucky, they had a heaven scroll. Alright lets go to the tower.? Kankuro said. ?Just Shut up..? Gaara said.
End chapter, till chapter 15!
Rinata Coughed up blood. ?Rinata!!? Yelled Renji and Nell. ?Nell! Get out of here now! I will get Rinata!? he yelled. ?I can?t leave you two behind!? Nell yelled. ?Nell go!!? He yelled. She jumped to the trees. Renji grabbed Rinata, who was keeping herself alive, by using a small amount of healing. The criminals started to gather around. Renji tried to hold them off as long as he could. ?That?s it. I told someone I would never use this?? he said. He closed his eyes then opened them, revealing his right eye with a sharingan. ?AAARGGG!? he yelled. A huge light came out. ?Hidden Style! Spirit Breaker!? he yelled. The light faded, showing the man all dead. Nell came back. ?R-renji? Rinata?? she asked. Renji was dead, holding the dead Rinata. ?Renji!!?? Rinata!!??? she yelled picking their bodies up. ?No? no no no! First Itachi and now you guys? NO?I refuse it?.? She yelled. She carried their bodies back to their familes, explaining what happened. Nell went to Renji?s house the next day. ?I have only been in here once?? she said. She saw a note. She opened it up.
Rinata,
I know this is sudden, and that we have been friends for years. Actually, I knew you since I was 5 then we met again at 8. You probably don?t remember. Anyways. I feel really close to you and Nell, now that her heart has been broken by Itachi. I hope I finally have the courage to give you this, but, I really like you. I actually have crushed on you for a few years. I told Itachi, and he told me just to ask you, but I could never do it. Since you had that Fantasy for Itachi?. But I really like you. What about you?
Renji.
She set the letter down. ?No wonder he gave his life for her, even though she died too?? she said. Leaving. The next few years were angony for her. Sasuke grew up to age 12 when she got happier. She was even happier when she heard she was going to be able to be an up close watcher of the Chuunin Exams Sasuke, Sakura, and Naruto were in. Nell grew really close to them, and the other 2 groups. ?So Kakashi? You told them they were in Chuunin Exams this year?? Nell said, now age 18. ?Yes, they all seem ready. Iruka tested them and said they may make it.? Kakashi said holding his book. ?Um, Master Kakashi?? She said. ?Yes, Nell?? Kakashi said. ?Why do you read those books?? she asked. ?Well, I?? Kakashi said. ?I read one of them before. They are so boring.. no offense.? She said. ?It?s alright. Anyways, are you going to be one of the cheat watcher for the first part of the Chuunin exams?? he asked. ?Yep, but I am getting the back left row. With people from the rain, sand and sound village in it.? She said. ?Good. This should be an interesting year.? Kakashi said. Nell sat down and once the test started, she watched.God, these kids suck at cheating? she thought standing up. ?Number 42. Your out. Numbers 67 and 32 your out as well.? She said. ?What?!? he yelled standing up. ?You heard me, you and you team are out.? She said sitting back down. Some of the kids are using ways that I would only know, luckily I didn?t get their row. The other jounin can?t probably see it. Sasuke is using Sharingan, Kiba is using Akumaru, Tenten is using a mirror, Shino is using his bugs?. But Naruto?. Hinata is practically giving him the answeres and he denies them! Idiot, everyone but him has figured it out? she thought. The people in her row weren?t making it obvious anymore. Finally the 10th questiong came. Everyone in Nell?s row was gone. After Ibiki explained that everyone who was courageous enough to stay goes on to the next round. ?What!? What happened?!? Naruto yelled. God Naruto, your such a prick, you made it! Shut up and sit down! She thought rolling her eyes. Then Anko came in. ?Alright you maggots listen up!? she yelled. Oh great, if it isn?t Anko? she thought. ?Your early? Anko.? Ibiki said. ?O-h?? she said. ?The forest of Death? You can?t be serious..? Nell said as she stood at the gates, with Kakashi. ?Why do you say that? Do you think it will be to dangerous for them?? he said. ?What? No way.. I say it isn?t hard enough. When me, Renji, Rinata, and Itachi all went in there, we were the first ones in. We actually had a greusome battle with some grass ninja, obtaining our scroll. We didn?t even get a scratch on us.? She said. ?We better get out of here. Some of the other Ninja are showing up.? Kakashi said. ?You go, I have to go to the center building, since I was the winner one time, I can go into the center first.? She said. ?Alright. Wish the kids luck for me.? Kakashi said. ?Ah, there you are Nell. Before most of the others come, let me let you in.? Anko said. She unlocked the door and let her in. ?Be careful!? Anko yelled closing the gate behind Nell. Anko was actually one of our opponents when we took the chuunin exams? she couldn?t get to chuunin level till the next year though, because my group did.. she thought. Before she took off she looked back. Those are the sand ninja, Gaara, Temari, and Kankuro. That Gaara kid scares me the most?. She thought and took off into the trees. She jumped tree to tree and needed to stop. She sat on a tree and looked around. She heard stepping then took out her watch. ?They started not to long ago. Remember my first time here. Now that I am a Jounin, I can do almost anything I want?.? She said. Suddenly she was shocked from the feeling of a large chackra. She jumped tree to tree and finally got to a spot. She sat out on a plain sight branch, using a hiding jutsu and looked down. ?Its those sand siblings, and they are taking on those rain villige guys?.? She said. And there is Hinata, Kiba, and Shino. I shouldn?t give their location away? she said watching the siblings. ?Can you believe these worthless sand ninja? Taking on us?? said the second tallest ninja from the hidden Rain. ?What idiots.? Said the short one. Gaara glared at them blood thirstily. Wow, he seems intense. And by the look of it, Akamaru down there thinks both groups are bad news?.. she thought, letting her feet dangle. ?Well that?s too bad, little twerps, Maybe you should have picked a weaker opponent than you. Looks like your all dead!? yelled Shigurai, the leader of their group. ?That?s enough out of you. Can we hurry this up? I don?t want to waste to much time on him.? Gaara said. Shigurai was shocked and angered by the response. ?Gaara, don?t you think we should have followed them first to see what scroll they got? If they have the same as us, we would just be wasting our time anyways.? Kankuro said.?I really don?t care. They disgust me, and looked at me the wrong way, now, their all gonna die.? Gaara said. Everyone was shocked. ?You think you can take us on? Well try and well see what happens!? Shigurai yelled throwing umbrellas in the air. ?Ninja art, Needle rainstorm!? Shigurai yelled. Suddenly hundreds of needles flung around Gaara. Nell stayed still even though some flew towards her. She caught each one and held them in her hand. The needles that went for Gaara made a huge dust cloud around it. As the dust cleared, it showed him encasing himself in a sheild of sand. ?Sweet..? Nell said. Shigurai was shocked. ?Is that it..? Pathetic.? Gaara said. Shigurai flung more at him, but more sand came up and blocked it. ?A needle Rain storm huh? How about this. Lets let it rain blood. How about that?? Gaara said. The rain team was in shock. ?This is so cool. Gaara of the deserts secret is that he uses a sand jutsu. Unless?..? Nell said. If my memory serves right, Gaara holds the 1 tail Shukaku inside himself. The sand probably comes up at its own accord. She thought. ?Sand?! A wall of sand?? Shigurai said. ?Yep, that?s Gaara?s ability you see. Its just a deefense , the likes of you could never get through it. Nothing can. It?s a jutsu that hardens the sand and only Gaara can do it. It also happens automaticlly, when ever he is threatened.? Kankuro said. ?Oh yeah!? We will see about that!? Shigurai yelled. ?Face it, no one, not even you, can beat him.? Kankuro said. Shigurai was shocked but ran towards Gaara. Gaara lifted his hands up and made a hand sign. ?Sand Coffin!? Gaara yelled. The next step Shigurai made, was his last. Sand wrapped up his leg and all around his body, except his face. ?Holy crap!? Nell said flinching. The umbrellas fell down to the ground, and Gaara walked by and picked one up. ?Only thing I need to do is cover that trap of your and you?ll be dead, but that?s boring.? Gaara said opening the umbrella. Gaara then lifted Shigurai in the air. ?Sand Burial.? Gaara said. Suddenly blood was flying every where as quick as the blink of an eye, he was dead. ?That?s amazing?? Nell said. Everyone was shocked. ?Oh, I crushed him with more forced than necessary, because the beast with in me was awakened, making him have no pain at all.? Gaara said. ?Ok! Take the scrool! Let us go!? said the second, setting the scroll down. Gaara lifted his hands and sand wrapped around the two. Lifting them up high in the sky, he did what he did to Shigurai, and killed them. Nell looked down. Hinata was so frientened and Kiba was crawling away, talking to the other two. Get out of here you guys? Nell thought. Kankuro grabbed the scroll. ?Lookie here, we got lucky, they had a heaven scroll. Alright lets go to the tower.? Kankuro said. ?Just Shut up..? Gaara said.
End chapter, till chapter 15!