[Other] A Intoxicated Heart

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One can say this is my darkness......
or my unforgiving eternity of the soul ,
just been lost and dwelling in loneliness...
walking through this world that's hell ,
no bond to share with ones that's close ,
taking down everything with me as i fall ,
there's no emotion that i understands....
just a coldness of a heartless soul .

One may ask , is there a girl you love ?
but i can only say ; I've broken that heart ,
when i was watching her tears of love ,
there was only a little pain in this heart ,
i just asked myself , is she happy with me ,
who walks to the future that lost in the past ,
once a nice young man but now this man i be....
-in the darkness of this heart and world that lost .

One will tell me , you need be happy ,
but no one can bring back the things i lost ,
there's no more time for this life's beauty
i can't say , how long this life gonna last ,
just a one minute or forever and eternity.....
till this long lasting coldness in my heart
-vanish with the winds of change that comes by ,
i must dwell for now with a intoxicated heart .

It been a while , i post a poem , hope you guys like it =D
 
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