Aki Kimura99
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Hi Narutobase! Well this is my first fanfiction, if you have some advice for me post here! Hope you enjoy it =D
It was a cold, dark night. Everything was quiet and still. Only, in one house in the village illuminated by moon, you could here sobbing. There was a young girl sobbing in a bed. She was sleeping and in her dream was one bloody, red eye. The girl was trying not to listen, not to even hear what it was saying to her but she couldn't it was to strong for her. That image and that voice were haunting her for too long and she didn't have enogh strenght to resist it. She just cried while the red eye shouted.
-Kill him! Do it now! -
She was still trying to escape from that nightmare which was going over and over again, every time more realistic. Now that dream was like reality.
- Kill him! -
- No! - she shouted back. She made one last effort to resist. She was holding a kunai above her best friend Shuzuke's heart. Her hand was shaking and she was sweating while trying to wake up. But she couldn't. She felt so misserable and desperate.
Her hand moved on its own and she stabbed Shuzuke in heart and dropped the kunai down. Blood was covering the sheets and the last thing she heard was the mindless creepy laugh of the red eye. Then, she passed out.
The red eye was looking at her wide open.
-Good job, you finally gave up resisting me! Exellent I'm so proud on you! - it said.
-I'm glad that you're happy master - she replied softly obviously hypnotized. Her deep blue eyes were bloody red and as empty as death's.
-You finally gave up Say. You see? It's so beautiful when you listen to me. There's no pain. Am I right? I'm here to help you. You can't trust anyone but me. Understood? - it asked.
- Yes lord Kazirani - Say said. She looked desperately lost. The eye disappeared.
She woke up and looked at her hands. They were covered in blood. Next to her was lying a bloody kunai. She heard Shuzuke's mother crying from downstairs.
-No! What did I do? I didn't want to do it... I didn't... - she sobbed.
Thanks for reading!
Chapter 2 will be out, if you want, as soon as possible
Have a good day! :bye:
It was a cold, dark night. Everything was quiet and still. Only, in one house in the village illuminated by moon, you could here sobbing. There was a young girl sobbing in a bed. She was sleeping and in her dream was one bloody, red eye. The girl was trying not to listen, not to even hear what it was saying to her but she couldn't it was to strong for her. That image and that voice were haunting her for too long and she didn't have enogh strenght to resist it. She just cried while the red eye shouted.
-Kill him! Do it now! -
She was still trying to escape from that nightmare which was going over and over again, every time more realistic. Now that dream was like reality.
- Kill him! -
- No! - she shouted back. She made one last effort to resist. She was holding a kunai above her best friend Shuzuke's heart. Her hand was shaking and she was sweating while trying to wake up. But she couldn't. She felt so misserable and desperate.
Her hand moved on its own and she stabbed Shuzuke in heart and dropped the kunai down. Blood was covering the sheets and the last thing she heard was the mindless creepy laugh of the red eye. Then, she passed out.
The red eye was looking at her wide open.
-Good job, you finally gave up resisting me! Exellent I'm so proud on you! - it said.
-I'm glad that you're happy master - she replied softly obviously hypnotized. Her deep blue eyes were bloody red and as empty as death's.
-You finally gave up Say. You see? It's so beautiful when you listen to me. There's no pain. Am I right? I'm here to help you. You can't trust anyone but me. Understood? - it asked.
- Yes lord Kazirani - Say said. She looked desperately lost. The eye disappeared.
She woke up and looked at her hands. They were covered in blood. Next to her was lying a bloody kunai. She heard Shuzuke's mother crying from downstairs.
-No! What did I do? I didn't want to do it... I didn't... - she sobbed.
Thanks for reading!
Chapter 2 will be out, if you want, as soon as possible
Have a good day! :bye:
