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Facing the emperial army of dead, Zhein found himself encountering his father Hizzan and two of his anscestors :
Hizzan : it’s ashame to face my son in such time ….
Arthy : so you are the one of my descendance ….
Hizzan : as much as I respect my anscestors it feels shame to share the same blood with you two… you dishonored our tribe ….
Lakshmall : easy on that old man, you’re nothing to be above us !
Hizzan : So it’s it Zhein my son, I wish I die hundread timse before facing my sprout…
Zhein : father I … (he couldn’t hold his tears) I failed you …
Lakshmall : what honor ! your little man is crying in front of his enemies, and what’s this he even joined force with humans from the realm below …
Soldier : shut up fatty !
Lakshmall : I hear someone calling for his death … very well (he jumps and lands on the soldier crushing his skull)
Arthy : as much as I despise being used but facing below humans is one of my desires ….(she grows demonic wings and flies)
Hizzan : then Zhein, I ask you as your father, make me proud and finish me …
Zhein’s childhood memories rushed into his head :
*Zhein : dad can I have a belt like other boys.
Hizzan : (looking down to Zhein) you don’t deserve it ….sigh
Zhein : (cries) why do you hate me, father I didn’t do anything bad ….
Hizzan : you are nothing but a shame, a shame to the name of our family …*
Zhein : (wipes his tears) but I failed to protect our clan before, I can’t ….
Hizzan : damn it ! why can’t you be a man once …. (he rushes into Zhein to deliever a two fingers stab)
Zhein : (trying to evade but a stab pierced his cheek lightly and drew some blood) Father you know I was a failure ! I couldn’t defeat Gary, how do you expect me to defeat the strongest brawler ever ?!
Hizzan : for God sake ! Zhein ! wake up !
Hizzan delievered a high kick to Zhein in the chin, sending him away Zhein gained his balance and landed on his feet, he only evades but doesn’t lend any hit on his father memories rushed again :
*Hizzan : …. What are you looking at ?!
Zhein : (shows a drawing to his father) Dad I made this for you it’s me …. And you … and mom … and little brother Gary …
Hizzan : (he takes the drawing and shread it) heh …. Futile son !
Zhein looking at the sheets of paper falling slowly on the ground he cried :
Zhein : why ? why ?
Hizzan : the day you become a man I’ll stop treating you like a futile ….now dismiss!*
Zhein : fine father I’ll stop you and prove the man I became !
Hizzan : that’s the stare I want you to have ! listen ! before I land my hits remember an opening for my heart is revealed you have to be quicker than me if you want to manage to kill me !
Hizzan landed a stab to Zhein but he evaded it his fingers landed in a rock nearby and stuck there :
Hizzan : now Zhein it’s your chance !
Zhein tried to pierce his father’s heart but alas his heart couldn’t let him to harm his old man letting Hizzan to free himself :
Hizzan : you shame ! why didn’t you do it ?
Zhein : I … I …. Can’t do it !
Hizzan : then you’ll die ! you’ll loose your friends ! like you lost your clan !
Hizzan rushed into his son delievering fatal blows to his neck, chest, guts, arms and legs, luckily Zhein invoked his diamond skin, but his father’s blows were too powerful that even with hard skin he felt numbs in every body part, he kneeled :
Hizzan : I can’t believe it ! I rised from the dead to defeat my own son ! what cruel fate is this !
Zhein : (to himself) Gary … I’m sorry …
Zhein immobilized some memories about the early days of Gary as his adoptive brother rushed :
*Gary : Hizzan ! Hizzan old man ! tell us a story before we sleep !
Zhein : it isn’t nice to call him like this you should call him «dad»
Gary : gah ! you are such a sucker !
Hizzan : (pokes Gary in the head) behave young man !
Gary : I won’t stop till you tell us a story !
Hizzan : fine then … my story is about Zhein …
Gary : heh ! Zhein ? but he’s here ?
Hizzan : not that Zhein … it’s about the founder of our clan, he saved the world once from the Tyrant, he was too strong that he tamed the wild seven deities, and used them to defeat the Tyrant, but with all the power he was blessed, he was very kind he forgave the other human tribes for turning against him, he was a gifted man …
Gary : booooooooooooring ! where is the dragon ? where’s the high tower ? and the princess who’s supposed to get married to him ?!
Hizzan : (pokes Gary again) behave little kids those chitchats don’t teach anything !
Gary : riiiiiiiiiiiight ! but Zhein from the story is nothing like big brother Zhein, because big brother always get bullied and I always saves him.
Hizzan : that’s because you’re both Zhein …
Gary : eh ?
Hizzan : you are just dumb aren’t you ?
You’re both Zhein because each on of you carry a virtue of him, you Gary my boy carry the virtue of power to help you save Zhein from troubles, and Zhein carry the virtue of kindness he is very loyal and forgives every body ….
Zhein : ….
Hizzan : well good night now, sleep early …
(after Hizzan leaves)
Gary : Zhein you know what Old man Hizzan always tells old woman Yuna when you aren’t around ?
Zhein : what ?
Gary : he always speaks about you, he says that you one day will surpass his anscestors, and become the branch that our clan never met, because your kindness never let you give up ….
Zhein with these memories regained faith in himself, and with Hizzan stab landed he blocked it with his right hand –which is a magic gauntlet- and stared with all challenge in his father eyes with a grin :
Zhein : Hizzan Uzar …. For this world, for the human tribe, for my clan, for you my father, for the honor I got by this name … you are going down !
Hizzan : (smirks) you finally awakened !
Zhein delieverd a kick to his father’s face that pushed him meters away, Hizzan regained his balance and carried a hige rock and throw it at Zhein, but he easily cut through it using his fist, he spawned his single wing and drop kick to his father, who easily evade it, it was a battle of who’s faster than who :
Hizzan : I never was proud like this !
Zhein : and the honor is all mine Lord Hizzan … no dad !
Zhein with an unbelievable speed summoned Mi :
Mi : Lord Hizzan !
Zhein : Mi he’s our enemy now … quickly dust screen !
Mi exhaled some air causing a dust cloud, below his feet Hizzan noticed a crack, Mi emerged trying to bite him but he jumped highly, Zhein surprised him in the mid air punching him in the face sending him in the ground before he landed he appeared under him delievering a kick sending him in mid-air finishing the sequence with a headbutt sending his father way in the ground, Hizzan stood hardly but :
Mi : seal !
With Mi unleashing her blood drawn seal under ground, threads of light tied Hizzan tightly … Zhein landed slowly on the ground and landed a four-fingered stab finishing his father :
Hizzan : Zhein …. *cough* I never was proud in my life if this was my last moment I can ask nothing more but spending it with you … my last will for you *cough* my boy is to be forgiven for foolishness *cough* please take care of your self ….
And so Hizzan crumbled into ash again, Zhein felt relief he turned to his friends but an undead girl stabbed him in the back :
Zhein : (surprized) Ju ….di !
Judi : (cries) I’m sorry … Zhein ….
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Gary: the pervert Protagonist, partially lost his memory, he tries to get his memory back by returning to the Empire, he's excelled at mixing elemental affinities with his katana sword beside summoning deities from another world.
Ame: the sweet imp-princess she tries to help Gary restore his memory, with her healing abilities and water element use.
Genji: the logical-speaking guy, he doesn't -like everybody else- what tribe he's, he got expelled from his village because of his appearence and ability to suck people energy and ability to control trees, he joined this journey to find out more about himself.
Eduna:a mysterious priestess she seems to know as much as Julius does, she joined the rebellion war against the tyrant.
Rose: the french speaking Fairy, she's more pervert than Gary she joined the group for fun, she has the power to charm any male, she has sensorial abilities, and wide magical abilities.
Ignius: a man who've been cursed by Julius into a hideous dragon-man he seeks to avenge from Julius.
Zhein: Gary's friend and adoptive brother who've been kidnapped but saved but the Tyrant' chancellor, he now on the good side.
Julius: the Tyrant Chancellor, he's a mysterious man, with mysterious motives, his powers are unique, he tries to bring peace without looking at the cost.
Tora: the tiger-man warrior, he's the best known wind manipulator in the main land
Nyan: the thief cat girl, Tora's fiancée she was one of the first people to know Gary after he lost his memory.
Ragna: the highest rank of tyrant Generals.
MI:Zhein's personal summon, a black snake with golden patterns, she has a durable scaled body, and can release a highly concentrated energy beam.
magia: the type energy that's used to cast magic skills
Ame: the sweet imp-princess she tries to help Gary restore his memory, with her healing abilities and water element use.
Genji: the logical-speaking guy, he doesn't -like everybody else- what tribe he's, he got expelled from his village because of his appearence and ability to suck people energy and ability to control trees, he joined this journey to find out more about himself.
Eduna:a mysterious priestess she seems to know as much as Julius does, she joined the rebellion war against the tyrant.
Rose: the french speaking Fairy, she's more pervert than Gary she joined the group for fun, she has the power to charm any male, she has sensorial abilities, and wide magical abilities.
Ignius: a man who've been cursed by Julius into a hideous dragon-man he seeks to avenge from Julius.
Zhein: Gary's friend and adoptive brother who've been kidnapped but saved but the Tyrant' chancellor, he now on the good side.
Julius: the Tyrant Chancellor, he's a mysterious man, with mysterious motives, his powers are unique, he tries to bring peace without looking at the cost.
Tora: the tiger-man warrior, he's the best known wind manipulator in the main land
Nyan: the thief cat girl, Tora's fiancée she was one of the first people to know Gary after he lost his memory.
Ragna: the highest rank of tyrant Generals.
MI:Zhein's personal summon, a black snake with golden patterns, she has a durable scaled body, and can release a highly concentrated energy beam.
magia: the type energy that's used to cast magic skills
Facing the emperial army of dead, Zhein found himself encountering his father Hizzan and two of his anscestors :
Hizzan : it’s ashame to face my son in such time ….
Arthy : so you are the one of my descendance ….
Hizzan : as much as I respect my anscestors it feels shame to share the same blood with you two… you dishonored our tribe ….
Lakshmall : easy on that old man, you’re nothing to be above us !
Hizzan : So it’s it Zhein my son, I wish I die hundread timse before facing my sprout…
Zhein : father I … (he couldn’t hold his tears) I failed you …
Lakshmall : what honor ! your little man is crying in front of his enemies, and what’s this he even joined force with humans from the realm below …
Soldier : shut up fatty !
Lakshmall : I hear someone calling for his death … very well (he jumps and lands on the soldier crushing his skull)
Arthy : as much as I despise being used but facing below humans is one of my desires ….(she grows demonic wings and flies)
Hizzan : then Zhein, I ask you as your father, make me proud and finish me …
Zhein’s childhood memories rushed into his head :
*Zhein : dad can I have a belt like other boys.
Hizzan : (looking down to Zhein) you don’t deserve it ….sigh
Zhein : (cries) why do you hate me, father I didn’t do anything bad ….
Hizzan : you are nothing but a shame, a shame to the name of our family …*
Zhein : (wipes his tears) but I failed to protect our clan before, I can’t ….
Hizzan : damn it ! why can’t you be a man once …. (he rushes into Zhein to deliever a two fingers stab)
Zhein : (trying to evade but a stab pierced his cheek lightly and drew some blood) Father you know I was a failure ! I couldn’t defeat Gary, how do you expect me to defeat the strongest brawler ever ?!
Hizzan : for God sake ! Zhein ! wake up !
Hizzan delievered a high kick to Zhein in the chin, sending him away Zhein gained his balance and landed on his feet, he only evades but doesn’t lend any hit on his father memories rushed again :
*Hizzan : …. What are you looking at ?!
Zhein : (shows a drawing to his father) Dad I made this for you it’s me …. And you … and mom … and little brother Gary …
Hizzan : (he takes the drawing and shread it) heh …. Futile son !
Zhein looking at the sheets of paper falling slowly on the ground he cried :
Zhein : why ? why ?
Hizzan : the day you become a man I’ll stop treating you like a futile ….now dismiss!*
Zhein : fine father I’ll stop you and prove the man I became !
Hizzan : that’s the stare I want you to have ! listen ! before I land my hits remember an opening for my heart is revealed you have to be quicker than me if you want to manage to kill me !
Hizzan landed a stab to Zhein but he evaded it his fingers landed in a rock nearby and stuck there :
Hizzan : now Zhein it’s your chance !
Zhein tried to pierce his father’s heart but alas his heart couldn’t let him to harm his old man letting Hizzan to free himself :
Hizzan : you shame ! why didn’t you do it ?
Zhein : I … I …. Can’t do it !
Hizzan : then you’ll die ! you’ll loose your friends ! like you lost your clan !
Hizzan rushed into his son delievering fatal blows to his neck, chest, guts, arms and legs, luckily Zhein invoked his diamond skin, but his father’s blows were too powerful that even with hard skin he felt numbs in every body part, he kneeled :
Hizzan : I can’t believe it ! I rised from the dead to defeat my own son ! what cruel fate is this !
Zhein : (to himself) Gary … I’m sorry …
Zhein immobilized some memories about the early days of Gary as his adoptive brother rushed :
*Gary : Hizzan ! Hizzan old man ! tell us a story before we sleep !
Zhein : it isn’t nice to call him like this you should call him «dad»
Gary : gah ! you are such a sucker !
Hizzan : (pokes Gary in the head) behave young man !
Gary : I won’t stop till you tell us a story !
Hizzan : fine then … my story is about Zhein …
Gary : heh ! Zhein ? but he’s here ?
Hizzan : not that Zhein … it’s about the founder of our clan, he saved the world once from the Tyrant, he was too strong that he tamed the wild seven deities, and used them to defeat the Tyrant, but with all the power he was blessed, he was very kind he forgave the other human tribes for turning against him, he was a gifted man …
Gary : booooooooooooring ! where is the dragon ? where’s the high tower ? and the princess who’s supposed to get married to him ?!
Hizzan : (pokes Gary again) behave little kids those chitchats don’t teach anything !
Gary : riiiiiiiiiiiight ! but Zhein from the story is nothing like big brother Zhein, because big brother always get bullied and I always saves him.
Hizzan : that’s because you’re both Zhein …
Gary : eh ?
Hizzan : you are just dumb aren’t you ?
You’re both Zhein because each on of you carry a virtue of him, you Gary my boy carry the virtue of power to help you save Zhein from troubles, and Zhein carry the virtue of kindness he is very loyal and forgives every body ….
Zhein : ….
Hizzan : well good night now, sleep early …
(after Hizzan leaves)
Gary : Zhein you know what Old man Hizzan always tells old woman Yuna when you aren’t around ?
Zhein : what ?
Gary : he always speaks about you, he says that you one day will surpass his anscestors, and become the branch that our clan never met, because your kindness never let you give up ….
Zhein with these memories regained faith in himself, and with Hizzan stab landed he blocked it with his right hand –which is a magic gauntlet- and stared with all challenge in his father eyes with a grin :
Zhein : Hizzan Uzar …. For this world, for the human tribe, for my clan, for you my father, for the honor I got by this name … you are going down !
Hizzan : (smirks) you finally awakened !
Zhein delieverd a kick to his father’s face that pushed him meters away, Hizzan regained his balance and carried a hige rock and throw it at Zhein, but he easily cut through it using his fist, he spawned his single wing and drop kick to his father, who easily evade it, it was a battle of who’s faster than who :
Hizzan : I never was proud like this !
Zhein : and the honor is all mine Lord Hizzan … no dad !
Zhein with an unbelievable speed summoned Mi :
Mi : Lord Hizzan !
Zhein : Mi he’s our enemy now … quickly dust screen !
Mi exhaled some air causing a dust cloud, below his feet Hizzan noticed a crack, Mi emerged trying to bite him but he jumped highly, Zhein surprised him in the mid air punching him in the face sending him in the ground before he landed he appeared under him delievering a kick sending him in mid-air finishing the sequence with a headbutt sending his father way in the ground, Hizzan stood hardly but :
Mi : seal !
With Mi unleashing her blood drawn seal under ground, threads of light tied Hizzan tightly … Zhein landed slowly on the ground and landed a four-fingered stab finishing his father :
Hizzan : Zhein …. *cough* I never was proud in my life if this was my last moment I can ask nothing more but spending it with you … my last will for you *cough* my boy is to be forgiven for foolishness *cough* please take care of your self ….
And so Hizzan crumbled into ash again, Zhein felt relief he turned to his friends but an undead girl stabbed him in the back :
Zhein : (surprized) Ju ….di !
Judi : (cries) I’m sorry … Zhein ….
To be continued
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