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this the part that annoyed me the most
a character backstory:
Julius : my, my, you’re fast !
Gary : you bastard ! give us Genji back !
Zhein : (landed behind Gary) Gary ! please listen !
Gary : (turns with a slash) I told you to shut up !
Julius : I won’t disturbe this family meeting, bye (he pass through the floor) ….
Gary & Zhein engaged in a fight, the group arrived moments later :
Gary : everybody ! Julius is under this floor get Genji from him, I’ll take care of this guy.
Ignius smashed the ground, to reveal some spiral stairs leading to the bottom of the tower where Julius is seen, Ignius jumped and landed like a meteor but his attack passed through Julius like nothing happened :
Tobi : he’s doing the same trick he did in my house !
Rose : what kind of magia he’s using.
Julius : (hiding Genji in a pocket dimension) you want Genji you’ll have to kill me first.
Tobi : Rose now !
Tobi jumped and released a volley of sharp projectile followed by Rose clapping her hands, the volley of blades multiplicated into millions :
Julius : hey ! using my own technique against me isn’t cool !
And so Julius became transparent again, but Tobi was analysing his move that he noticed an important thing, whenever Julius become transparent his shadow disappears, and more than that the first line of blades actually cut some parts of his cloak, Tobi suspected that move and came up with a hypothesis but he nedds to confirm it :
Tobi: quickly flood him !
Ame : right ! (Ame spits a huge colliding wave Julius floated in the air evading the water knowing that if he touch it he’ll freeze)
Using the situation, Tobi attacked Julius in mid-air using his arm blades, Julius blocked his blades with his hands and with some strange spell the blades rusted and broke :
Rose : we had enough ! (makes a heart with her hands and sets to put Julius in a charm).
Julius : (noticing Rose) No you won’t !
Julius teleported in front of Rose, he quicly puts his palm on her head, suddenly horrific slaughter images rushed in Rose head, she got immobilized in fear, Ame thrown some icy darts at Julius but he went transparent again, Tobi noticed that some darts went through Rose as well, wich confirmed his Hypothesis even more, Ignius enlarged claw grabbed Julius in a sudden and pulled him in the ground :
Julius : Rick ! didn’t you learn from the last time (he started to drain magia)
Ignius : don’t call me that name again ! (he throw Julius straight to the wall but Julius floated preventing himself from colliding)
Tobi followed that step with releasing a smoke screen made of gun powder that covered Julius :
Julius : I know how this will go (he sets a water spell)
Ame : no you won’t ! (she freezes the water preventing Julius from protecting himself) Ignius now !
Ignius released a huge fireball that detonated the gunpowder locking Julius in a huge explosion, Julius tried to land after escaping injured from the explosion but Ignius monsteriously punched him sending him in mid-air, then Ignius jumped hugging Julius tightly he filps him and send him spinning into the ground before Julius collided with the floor, Tobi sent a rocket punch toward Julius, Julius collided with the ground leaving a huge crater …. A moment of silence it was, after the dust is gone Julius stood slowly he gazed to the group showing real anger :
Julius : (his voice gone deeper) Mortals of the inner realm ! you’ll never live to see the next day !
Tobi : whatever ! (he pulls his handless arm)
Julius : what ? (noticed that Tobi’s rocket punch actually penetrated his left shoulder and grabbed it with hooks on top of that the punch was linked by a steel wire and after the spinning from Ignius last move his body is tied totally by that wire) Bastard ! you figured it out !
Tobi : now without touching any surface you can’t manipulate any element ! (he pulls the wire tightly lifting Julius in the air) and if you weren’t in contact with your shadow you can’t became transparent ! (he kicks Julius toward the wall) and … (he dissambles his lower body part) Ignius ! (Ignius giant punch past through Julius) Hehe that was only a faint, here’s the final ! (he opens his vaccum mechanism) Anything that was in contact with you when you’re transparent became as well and can touch you !
Julius : heh believe me that won’t work !
Tobi : I’m not draining I’m pushing (the Vaccum scroll turns in the opposite direction)
Julius : what !
Tobi : this is for mother
Tobi released a blank-point highly concentrated drilling air shockwave that was too powerful that passed through Julius and the thick wall behind him like a hot knife in butter, Tobi finally landed on the ground his arms were rusted because of the long contact with Julius, who was slowly sliding from the wall leaving a huge blood amount from the large hole in his belly…. The group catched their breathes, Rose awakened from the nightmare but she sensed something strange :
Rose : Tobi ! attention !
Tobi turned around to find the blood covered Julius :
Julius : Carol clan’re bastards (Tobi couldn’t evade because his lower part was dissambeled) now you’ll meet your mother ! (he puts his hand on Tobi’s head and removes his soul) wicked existance !
Tobi crumbled to pieces,the group shocked and Julius despite the large hole in his body smirked at them saying : « the end to you, Mortals ! »
As the battle between Julius and the group occured, Gary was fighting Zhein at the same time at the very top of the bent tower :
Zhein : Gary please listen to me ! Julius seeks peace !
Gary : Peace ! he killed Tobi’s mother, He killed Kyle’s clan than burned him alive, he attacked Ame’s clan ! where is …. Where is peace in all this ?
Zhein :you don’t need all those people, you got me !
Gary : and I got something for you ! (he charged with fire sword)
Zhein : (blocks the attack with his right hand –remind you that Zhein was born without a right hand he’s using a magic glove as a hand-) So you lost your memory but you didn’t loose your ignorance very well (he spawns his single wing) take this (he punched Gary in the guts)
Gary : heheh … you should punch even harder (he pulls his sword from Zhein arm and push himself into the other side of the tower)
Gary sets his wind sword and send a huge cutting wave toward, Zhein easily eveaded it and landed a drop kick but it wasn’t that tough :
Gary : heh ! what a wuss !
Zhein : (to himself) damn I can’t really hurt him I must to get over it …(to Gary) fine then ! (he summoned his Mi)
Gary : what ! a summon ! but I thought I’m the only one capable to do this !
Zhein : sorry but I was going to show it to you at your birthday…
Gary : don’t mock me ! (he rushes toward him using a lightening sword)
Mi : (recieving the attack without getting damaged) Gary ! stop this nonesense !
Gary : wow ! another freak ! get lost ! (he pushes Mi to the floor) now let’s end this fair n’square !
Zhein : I really don’t want to do this !
Zhein in instantious speed Kicked Gary sending him to the floor, but in the very moment he grabbed Gary’s hand and hurled him up, followed him and sent him down again with a headbutt :
Zhein : Mi tie him !
Mi : understood !
And so Mi coiled herself around Gary preventing him from using his katana, and landed softly on the ground, Gary was so upset and angry his rage started to get over his mind, his face veins bulged, his eyes darkened, he bitten his lower lip of stress and blood leaked, and with one bash he untied himself he grabbed Mi’s head and smashe dit to the ground, Zhein undone his summon, and MI disappeared, now Gary focused on Zhein he’s now moved subconciously by anger, he slammed the wall next to him and thrown a huge piece at Zhein, Zhein broke it with easy and landed a kick on Gary’s face but it seems that Gary lost feeling of pain he grabbed Zhein’s leg and slammed him to the ground than hurled him high in the air leaving a lethal injury on Zhein’s leg followed by a powerful punch that got Zhein out of the tower, Zhein returned flying and with a dive he grabbed Gary’s face and smashed the ground with him, it was a battle of rage, Gary stood and wiped blood from his mouth and smirked at Zhein, but his heart pounded strangely and by the look of Zhein injured face his emotions didn’t let him to fight anymore like he was feeling sympathy toward him, the floor cracked revealing that Julius killed Tobi, knocked Rose down and injured both Ame and Ignius, his rage urged him to fight again :
Gary : I’m done … with your shit!
Julius : (staring at Gary) now it’s my chance ! (he made a strange sign with his hand an pointed it to Gary)
Rose : (hardly stood) no … you … won’t ! (she points her charm sign toward Julius)
Gary sets his summon stance, Julius unleashed his unknown technique, Rose tried to disturb Julius ‘ magia with her charm … a strange coincidence the tower fluided and disappeared in a flash …
Gary awakened in a green field but he was shocked of what he became !
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this the part that annoyed me the most
a character backstory:
Gary: the pervert Protagonist, partially lost his memory, he tries to get his memory back by returning to the Empire, he's excelled at mixing elemental affinities with his katana sword.
Ame: the sweet imp-princess she tries to help Gary restore his memory, with her healing abilities and water element use.
Genji: the logical-speaking guy, he doesn't -like everybody else- what tribe he's, he got expelled from his village because of his appearence and ability to suck people energy and ability to control trees, he joined this journey to find out more about himself.
Tobi: living puppet that contain a human soul, he seeks revenge for his mother, he has a wide variety of weapons, beside a vaccum spell that sucks and crushes his target.
Rose: newly joined french speaking Fairy, she's more pervert than Gary she joined the group for fun, she has the power to charm any male, she has sensorial abilities, and wide magical abilities.
Ignius: a man who've been cursed by Julius into a hideous dragon-man he seeks to avenge from Julius.
Zhein: Gary's friend who've been kidnapped but saved but the Tyrant' chancellor, now he's aiding him to summon an ancient deity that's said to be able to save this world.
Julius: the Tyrant Chancellor, he's a mysterious man, with mysterious motives, his powers are unique, he tries to bring peace without looking at the cost.
Mi: Zhein's personal summon, a black snake with golden patterns she has a durable skin and lethal energy blasts
Ame: the sweet imp-princess she tries to help Gary restore his memory, with her healing abilities and water element use.
Genji: the logical-speaking guy, he doesn't -like everybody else- what tribe he's, he got expelled from his village because of his appearence and ability to suck people energy and ability to control trees, he joined this journey to find out more about himself.
Tobi: living puppet that contain a human soul, he seeks revenge for his mother, he has a wide variety of weapons, beside a vaccum spell that sucks and crushes his target.
Rose: newly joined french speaking Fairy, she's more pervert than Gary she joined the group for fun, she has the power to charm any male, she has sensorial abilities, and wide magical abilities.
Ignius: a man who've been cursed by Julius into a hideous dragon-man he seeks to avenge from Julius.
Zhein: Gary's friend who've been kidnapped but saved but the Tyrant' chancellor, now he's aiding him to summon an ancient deity that's said to be able to save this world.
Julius: the Tyrant Chancellor, he's a mysterious man, with mysterious motives, his powers are unique, he tries to bring peace without looking at the cost.
Mi: Zhein's personal summon, a black snake with golden patterns she has a durable skin and lethal energy blasts
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An so Gary followed Zhein and Julius to the bent tower, arriving he entered the hollow tower in rush to meet Julius and Genji :Julius : my, my, you’re fast !
Gary : you bastard ! give us Genji back !
Zhein : (landed behind Gary) Gary ! please listen !
Gary : (turns with a slash) I told you to shut up !
Julius : I won’t disturbe this family meeting, bye (he pass through the floor) ….
Gary & Zhein engaged in a fight, the group arrived moments later :
Gary : everybody ! Julius is under this floor get Genji from him, I’ll take care of this guy.
Ignius smashed the ground, to reveal some spiral stairs leading to the bottom of the tower where Julius is seen, Ignius jumped and landed like a meteor but his attack passed through Julius like nothing happened :
Tobi : he’s doing the same trick he did in my house !
Rose : what kind of magia he’s using.
Julius : (hiding Genji in a pocket dimension) you want Genji you’ll have to kill me first.
Tobi : Rose now !
Tobi jumped and released a volley of sharp projectile followed by Rose clapping her hands, the volley of blades multiplicated into millions :
Julius : hey ! using my own technique against me isn’t cool !
And so Julius became transparent again, but Tobi was analysing his move that he noticed an important thing, whenever Julius become transparent his shadow disappears, and more than that the first line of blades actually cut some parts of his cloak, Tobi suspected that move and came up with a hypothesis but he nedds to confirm it :
Tobi: quickly flood him !
Ame : right ! (Ame spits a huge colliding wave Julius floated in the air evading the water knowing that if he touch it he’ll freeze)
Using the situation, Tobi attacked Julius in mid-air using his arm blades, Julius blocked his blades with his hands and with some strange spell the blades rusted and broke :
Rose : we had enough ! (makes a heart with her hands and sets to put Julius in a charm).
Julius : (noticing Rose) No you won’t !
Julius teleported in front of Rose, he quicly puts his palm on her head, suddenly horrific slaughter images rushed in Rose head, she got immobilized in fear, Ame thrown some icy darts at Julius but he went transparent again, Tobi noticed that some darts went through Rose as well, wich confirmed his Hypothesis even more, Ignius enlarged claw grabbed Julius in a sudden and pulled him in the ground :
Julius : Rick ! didn’t you learn from the last time (he started to drain magia)
Ignius : don’t call me that name again ! (he throw Julius straight to the wall but Julius floated preventing himself from colliding)
Tobi followed that step with releasing a smoke screen made of gun powder that covered Julius :
Julius : I know how this will go (he sets a water spell)
Ame : no you won’t ! (she freezes the water preventing Julius from protecting himself) Ignius now !
Ignius released a huge fireball that detonated the gunpowder locking Julius in a huge explosion, Julius tried to land after escaping injured from the explosion but Ignius monsteriously punched him sending him in mid-air, then Ignius jumped hugging Julius tightly he filps him and send him spinning into the ground before Julius collided with the floor, Tobi sent a rocket punch toward Julius, Julius collided with the ground leaving a huge crater …. A moment of silence it was, after the dust is gone Julius stood slowly he gazed to the group showing real anger :
Julius : (his voice gone deeper) Mortals of the inner realm ! you’ll never live to see the next day !
Tobi : whatever ! (he pulls his handless arm)
Julius : what ? (noticed that Tobi’s rocket punch actually penetrated his left shoulder and grabbed it with hooks on top of that the punch was linked by a steel wire and after the spinning from Ignius last move his body is tied totally by that wire) Bastard ! you figured it out !
Tobi : now without touching any surface you can’t manipulate any element ! (he pulls the wire tightly lifting Julius in the air) and if you weren’t in contact with your shadow you can’t became transparent ! (he kicks Julius toward the wall) and … (he dissambles his lower body part) Ignius ! (Ignius giant punch past through Julius) Hehe that was only a faint, here’s the final ! (he opens his vaccum mechanism) Anything that was in contact with you when you’re transparent became as well and can touch you !
Julius : heh believe me that won’t work !
Tobi : I’m not draining I’m pushing (the Vaccum scroll turns in the opposite direction)
Julius : what !
Tobi : this is for mother
Tobi released a blank-point highly concentrated drilling air shockwave that was too powerful that passed through Julius and the thick wall behind him like a hot knife in butter, Tobi finally landed on the ground his arms were rusted because of the long contact with Julius, who was slowly sliding from the wall leaving a huge blood amount from the large hole in his belly…. The group catched their breathes, Rose awakened from the nightmare but she sensed something strange :
Rose : Tobi ! attention !
Tobi turned around to find the blood covered Julius :
Julius : Carol clan’re bastards (Tobi couldn’t evade because his lower part was dissambeled) now you’ll meet your mother ! (he puts his hand on Tobi’s head and removes his soul) wicked existance !
Tobi crumbled to pieces,the group shocked and Julius despite the large hole in his body smirked at them saying : « the end to you, Mortals ! »
As the battle between Julius and the group occured, Gary was fighting Zhein at the same time at the very top of the bent tower :
Zhein : Gary please listen to me ! Julius seeks peace !
Gary : Peace ! he killed Tobi’s mother, He killed Kyle’s clan than burned him alive, he attacked Ame’s clan ! where is …. Where is peace in all this ?
Zhein :you don’t need all those people, you got me !
Gary : and I got something for you ! (he charged with fire sword)
Zhein : (blocks the attack with his right hand –remind you that Zhein was born without a right hand he’s using a magic glove as a hand-) So you lost your memory but you didn’t loose your ignorance very well (he spawns his single wing) take this (he punched Gary in the guts)
Gary : heheh … you should punch even harder (he pulls his sword from Zhein arm and push himself into the other side of the tower)
Gary sets his wind sword and send a huge cutting wave toward, Zhein easily eveaded it and landed a drop kick but it wasn’t that tough :
Gary : heh ! what a wuss !
Zhein : (to himself) damn I can’t really hurt him I must to get over it …(to Gary) fine then ! (he summoned his Mi)
Gary : what ! a summon ! but I thought I’m the only one capable to do this !
Zhein : sorry but I was going to show it to you at your birthday…
Gary : don’t mock me ! (he rushes toward him using a lightening sword)
Mi : (recieving the attack without getting damaged) Gary ! stop this nonesense !
Gary : wow ! another freak ! get lost ! (he pushes Mi to the floor) now let’s end this fair n’square !
Zhein : I really don’t want to do this !
Zhein in instantious speed Kicked Gary sending him to the floor, but in the very moment he grabbed Gary’s hand and hurled him up, followed him and sent him down again with a headbutt :
Zhein : Mi tie him !
Mi : understood !
And so Mi coiled herself around Gary preventing him from using his katana, and landed softly on the ground, Gary was so upset and angry his rage started to get over his mind, his face veins bulged, his eyes darkened, he bitten his lower lip of stress and blood leaked, and with one bash he untied himself he grabbed Mi’s head and smashe dit to the ground, Zhein undone his summon, and MI disappeared, now Gary focused on Zhein he’s now moved subconciously by anger, he slammed the wall next to him and thrown a huge piece at Zhein, Zhein broke it with easy and landed a kick on Gary’s face but it seems that Gary lost feeling of pain he grabbed Zhein’s leg and slammed him to the ground than hurled him high in the air leaving a lethal injury on Zhein’s leg followed by a powerful punch that got Zhein out of the tower, Zhein returned flying and with a dive he grabbed Gary’s face and smashed the ground with him, it was a battle of rage, Gary stood and wiped blood from his mouth and smirked at Zhein, but his heart pounded strangely and by the look of Zhein injured face his emotions didn’t let him to fight anymore like he was feeling sympathy toward him, the floor cracked revealing that Julius killed Tobi, knocked Rose down and injured both Ame and Ignius, his rage urged him to fight again :
Gary : I’m done … with your shit!
Julius : (staring at Gary) now it’s my chance ! (he made a strange sign with his hand an pointed it to Gary)
Rose : (hardly stood) no … you … won’t ! (she points her charm sign toward Julius)
Gary sets his summon stance, Julius unleashed his unknown technique, Rose tried to disturb Julius ‘ magia with her charm … a strange coincidence the tower fluided and disappeared in a flash …
Gary awakened in a green field but he was shocked of what he became !
End of chapter to be continued
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Do you agree that Julius is one crazy immortal bastard? and why?
