A fantatsy Story Chapter17 Part 2

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Past chapters:
Chapter 1 : - -
Chapter 2 : - -
Chapter 3 : - -
Chapter 4 : - -
Chapter 5 : - - 3 (wait a minute there isn't a 3rd part for my 5th chapter) :sy:
Chapter 6 : - -
Chapter 7 : - - -
Chapter 8 : - -
Chapter 9 : - -
Chapter 10 : - -
Chapter 11 : - -
Chapter 12 : - -
Chapter 13 : - -
Chapter 14 : - -
Chapter 15 : - -
Chapter 16 : - - -
Chapter 17 :

Here's a character backstory:
Gary: the pervert Protagonist, partially lost his memory, he tries to get his memory back by returning to the Empire, he's excelled at mixing elemental affinities with his katana sword beside summoning deities from another world.
Ame: the sweet imp-princess she tries to help Gary restore his memory, with her healing abilities and water element use.
Genji: the logical-speaking guy, he doesn't -like everybody else- what tribe he's, he got expelled from his village because of his appearence and ability to suck people energy and ability to control trees, he joined this journey to find out more about himself.
Eduna:a mysterious priestess she seems to know as much as Julius does, she joined the rebellion war against the tyrant.
Rose: the french speaking Fairy, she's more pervert than Gary she joined the group for fun, she has the power to charm any male, she has sensorial abilities, and wide magical abilities.
Ignius: a man who've been cursed by Julius into a hideous dragon-man he seeks to avenge from Julius, with his brute raw strentgh and perfect fire element use.
Zhein: Gary's friend and adoptive brother who've been kidnapped but saved by the Tyrant' chancellor, he now on the good side, he's a hand to hand fighter, with wide knowledge over magic seals.
Julius: the Tyrant Chancellor, he's a mysterious man, with mysterious motives, his powers are unique, he tries to bring peace without looking at the cost, he is revealed to be an ancient deity that wants to bring all world to nothingness.
Kalina: Gary's mother and the best known earth manipulator on the main land.
The scions of Exoddia: a group of six powerful men who were summoned by Julius to help him get Gary and Zhein:
Halmius: A blonde man with a masked face, he later was revealed to be Eduna's old lover, eventually she killed him in a rampage.
Logh: A puppeter, and a living puppet himself, he fights using his enormous amount of puppets, and a special torturing magic...he's claimed to be having their friend Tobi's body.
Pashtaroth: A knight, he's the evil human version of Ignius, he fights with swords and monsterous techniques such as dead reviving techs, He was defeated in a battle against Ignius.
Nabri: A short man with his left face side covered in a wooden mask, he's claimed to be the only one able to counter Genji's wood technique?
Emmero: The only female scion, a woman with a pale blue skin, she wears a rain coat, and her eyes are bandaged, the only power she was revealed to have yet is water techs.
Lahabrea: A mysterious man his face is masked with a skull mask, nothing revealed about him yet except that he's the only one able to take on Gary.

magia: the type energy that's used to cast magic skills
:ghehe: Uxel apologize because this chapter will be the shortest:shy: U_U
:hint: I think this the best theme for this fightxd:
[video=youtube;XwyDphk-v00]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XwyDphk-v00[/video]
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Gary was driven to fight the mysterious scion Lahabrea and his personal summon Genesis, in a closed cavern he was, his weapon was broken apart, and his oppenents seemd to know the counter to every single move he had, he was desparate and exhausted but he couldn't give up, because he wanted to save his mother with all costs, so he didn't hesitate and stabbed himself directly to the heart…

"What the…!" Lahabrea was shocked of the view…

Gary smirked as blood leaked from his mouth, and swiftly he clapped his hands pointing his finger tips down…

"Genesis! Use wood branches!" Lahabrea ordered his summon, which immediatly released a large branching root from his hand to smash Gary with it, but the target disappeared…

"Surprise!" Gary shouted appearing between Genesis' arms cutting both of them using his free-magia blades granted by his deity form, then he disappeared again to appear behind the scion, he tried to slash him but Lahabrea blocked his sword with his bare palm that shined in white, the latter showed his interest saying:

"I must admit that is either Kalina idiotic inheritence or Gen'yin's brilliance, forcing that deadly pain through your heart to make yourself into deity form is one outrageous idea, but as I said before…" the magia blades started to fade…" knowing your enemy makes you stronger than him" and then he kicked Gary away…

Gary landed on a wall: "I can't believe you!" he complained about the masked man's power…

Lahabrea turned to Gary saying: "Deity transformation…hmm, simply the ultimate form of a Zheinian clansman, with this form you are granted control over raw magia which is almost impossible in normal cases…it seems that she taught you very well…quite interesting"…

Gary frowned more: "I told you not to talk about mother!" as he released powerful fire blades from his palms and jumped at his foe trying to land a slash, but as before nothing happened, the masked man avoided all the moves saying: "You really inherited her reckless behaviour…even your appearence is like her!" which led Gary to punch him straight to the face cracking some of his mask: "Talk about her again and the next thing I'll crack is your head!" the young man threaten…

Lahabrea retreat examining his cracked mask, then simply signed with his hands, roots emerged from the ground, Gary jumped avoiding them, but one of them caught his leg tightly, Gary turned toward Genesis to see him reassembling his arms back to his body with some roots growing from them…

The young hero had nothing but to jump higher, and from side to side of the cavern he jumped to reach the ceiling, standing upside down he gazed at his foes as he clapped his hands togather starting to shine brighter, briefly releaseing a white orb of energy that detonated into a rain of smaller bullets…

Lahabrea raised his palms toward it and with a quick move he crossed them, a shining barrier covered him and Genesis, the bullets seemed to perish the moment they come in contact with the barrier, after the drizzle stopped Lahabrea ordered his summon: "Genesis go!" and so the giant baby disappeared ethereally underground…

Shortly Genesis emerged from the ceiling above Gary trying to grab him, but Gary was fast he pushed himself down, the mutated kid released a branching root from his hand to catch his prey, but the latter had something else in mind: "Too slow!" Gary shouted before he put his left hand like a trumpet over his mouth breathing a large bursting cloud of shiney dust, that annihilated a great part of Genesis' body, the latter fell down on the ground violently with most of his flesh and bone revealed…

Gary wiped his mouth saying: "How did you find my Deity breath?!" the young man shouted proudly, and with no delay he breathed another amount toward Lahabrea, but the evil man jumped high and tossed few scalpels at Gary who blocked them with ease…

Genesis cried from the pain he got earlier, his master noticed him and scolded: "What a fail you've become my boy!" as he jumped back at him and slammed his palm on his summon, and with a shining aura the flesh of the injured creature regenarated perfectly…

"What the hell!?" Gary said…

Lahabrea looked more serious to him: "Poor kid…you don't get it right?...I carry the omnious power of Exoddius inside me, he taught me everything he knows about mortals, and even the secret techniques that existed in your world, I know everything about you, Kalina, Gen'yin, and anyone you've met…"…a silent moment, broken by the villian delievering an axial kick that sent Gary to the air: "Dammit! Even if his body looks weakened, his hits are stronger than Zhein's" the hero said to himself: "But…" catching his oppenet's leg, swinging him and throwing him directly to the wall…

"I told you not to talk about mom!" Gary shouted angrily…

The scion stood up and some pieces fell down from his cracked mask, Gary noticed that hisinjuries started to heal themselves: "That's …?" Gary asked…

"A rebirth technique…As long as I have magia, my body shall regenerate and resist all harms, and since I carry the huge amount magia of Exoddius inside me…you do the counting" Lahabrea explained…

Gary ignored him, and slammed his fists in the ground, blasting the whole floor, the three oppenents jumped in the air, the deity boy released his rain of bullets again, Lahabrea protected himself with his barrier, Genesis opened his mouth and started to inhale all the dust and the rocks created by Gary's explosion: "What the..?!" Gary questioned…

Then the giant baby's mouth bulged,and quickly he released a powerful sand breath that blasted collided violently with Gary sending him straightly to the wall..

"Did you like that?...I don't know if you've seen her doing it, that was Kalina's favourite move!" Lahabrea shouted…

From the dust Gary thrusted himself directly to Lahabrea, the scion as usual managed to block the blade attack, but Gary smirked at him before his mouth was ready to release another breath attack, but the scion punched him straight to the lower jaw, then delievring another kick to the guts, finishing his move with a punch, pushing Gary back who noticed a tear shed from the villian's eye…

The hero regained his balance again, Lahabrea stared at him shouting: "Why you insist that much?!...why do you keep doing this? you know this is futile! But you just resist!"…

Gary answered rudely: "A bastard like you can never understand such thing!"…

Lahabrea closed his eyes and opened them: "Deity mode, you are around seventeen so it'll propably last for seven minutes, five had passed, so I only needs to spend two more and then I'll take that semi dead body of yours with me…Genesis!"…

Genesis released another powerful sand breath wave from his mouth, gary blocked using some magia shield, Lahabrea used the dust screen and jumped at him, and with ease his hand passed through the deity's defence with ease, and managed to grab Gary's face, then with a swift move then slammed his victim's guts, Gary felt dizzy and paralyzed, his muscles strained he lost all feeling in his limbs…

"Gary…it'll end so fast" said the masked man but with a softer accent, as his hand penetrated gary's stomach like a ghost…

Gary looked surprised: "Bastard what the hell are you doing!?" he asked the man while trying to catch his breaths…

"Trust me we both seek the same purpose…Kalina" Lahabrea answered the man while moving his hand gently towards the young man's heart: "Hmm it seems that you've inherited the legendary Zidane's magia flow…quite expected after all you look like him…"the man suddenly stopped, and his hand stuck inside Gary's body: "What the…what darkness! What evil?!...this is overwhelming!" the man struggled to pull his hand out as he retreat witnessing the unusual scene…

The gap left by his hand was filled by somesort of blood red blob that evaporated into a black mist with a red glow, the mist filled the cavern, Lahabrea was a bit worried: "Dammit! What kind of magic is this…?!" as he was interrupted by a large shadowy claw hand that emerged from the fog, careless of him the demonic hand grabbed his and started to squeeze, Lahabrea felt so much pain, but Genesis freed him, he examined his hands to see a biting mark was left by that hand, he stared at Gary who was standing unconsciously half dead: "I should seal it!" He said as he lifted his hand that glowed in white…

"Genesis!" He ordered his summon, and so the giant baby grabbed his master tossing him directly toward Gary, Lahabrea slammed his palm in the hole and runic symbols glowed all around the unconscious man's body, devouring all the dark mist exhaled from his chest…

Gary woke up like from a nightmare: "What the…?" he asked himself...

But seeing Lahabrea's hand over his heart angered him so he retreat few steps: "Bastard I don't know what have you done to me…but I 'll finish this here and now!" As he raised both of his hands creating a massive orb of energy surrounded by rockes and tossed it violantly toward his enemies…

"Useless even if you use the planetary impact on me I know the correct flow of the technique, which makes me able to create the correct barrier to disperse it!" the masked man said while creating a barrier that made Gary's ultimate skill perish slowly…

"Not so fast!" Gary shouted as his orb popped, suddenly he appeared behind Genesis, spinning around himself like a drill penetrating through the mutated kid's back coming out of his heart heading directly toward the summoner, delievering a ferocious headbutt to him that broke his mask apart, following it with a kicking combo sending him to the other size of the cave…

"Never…Never understimate Gary Gen'yin!… burn it to your head bastard!" Gary insulted the fallen man…

Lahabrea stood up slowly saying: "Heh what pride you had!.." shownig his impression…

Truely his face was finally revealed; a pale man that looks like in his early fourties, the right side of his face show that he was burned, light green eyes reflecting huge sorrow, white neck-length hair, with a light goatee and moustache, the man stared at Gary and said: "Surprised…?!"

Gary looked troubled because he suspected something about the unfamiliar man…

Lahabrea noticed his reaction so he commented: "Oh I almost forgot that you didn't even get to see me, after all for you I died…the day you were born…"…

Gary couldn't help but to say in hesitation: "You…it can't be…you are…"…
To be continued​
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Post your theories on Lahabrea's true identites as replies xd
 
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Wow, it looks like your grammar is really improving. There's still some awkward sentences and some sentences that are too long, and a few misspelled words, but I can tell it's getting much better. Must be the practice. xd Do you have a grammar check? Something like that can really help if you study how it changes things and the rules it follows. I personally use Microsoft Word, it's awesome, but expensive...U_U

Okay, sorry, I don't have time to give a proper crit right now...I had time to read a chapter though and I felt really guilty for not keeping up with yours...:shy:
 
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